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Remember kids, eat your veggies, go to school, and murder all your enemies.... I murder all my enemies....

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very nice!! glad to see you're back!!

her green emerald eyes

Sunset's eyes are usually described as teal, and the "More Info" section of her Wiki entry states they are cyan.

she pulled out a twenty-sided dice.
Hey, Twi. Do you have another dice?

"Dice" is plural; the singular is "die".

"Their both perverts" what? What do the both perverts that belong to them do?

This story was... weirdly wholesome, in a pervy kind of way.

This was hot and sensual and oh so cute :)
Great work!

“You Equestrian girls really have no stamina,” she said. “All talk, but once anyone tries to get you going, you finish like a firecracker.”

Wait, is this actual Twilight Sparkle or Sci-Twi?

And it just ends like that? Amazing.

“I roll to untie myself. Fifteen, plus two. Sunset, I can’t remember, what’s the AC of your magical rope?”

ok, bit of a nitpick here, but this would actually not be AC. AC (Armor Class) is how difficult it is to hit something with an attack. When you're talking about how hard it is to overcome a save or skill check, that's a DC (Difficulty Class).

And on that note, for spells that are not like shooting a projectile (like Acid Arrow) but are instead trying to inflict some other effect -- such as Dominate Person -- the caster is not going to be the one rolling the die (and it is die, singular, not dice, which is plural). Instead, the defender would attempt q Saving Throw against the Spell DC of the caster.

Holy shit dude. This is some of the best clop I’ve read in *ages*.

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