Don't make the same mistake I made, kids; When the police shout "drop it!", that doesn't refer to your pants.
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This is pulling on my heartstrings, so wholesome!
I'm with Pheonix on this one. This really was quite wholesome, and I loved how they interacted. It really does have this nice flow about it how they interact that really does feel like they've been together for some time now.
If I may add, this surprisingly struck me in a way I didn't expect, especially from a story about two ponies. The whole thing about where they are now and what they have, and what they could have once it was time to move forward, kinda hit a chord with me, and it was rather pleasant to actually read that. So huge kudos to you for doing that in this story!
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I'm really glad you like it. It was a pleasure to write, but you deserve the credit. The additional request to make it more than a casual fling made me wonder what I could do to make it a fun read, and I thought about where they were in the show and how it could impact their lives. Thanks for the prompt.