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Why is she even getting flack again?

Didn't she save the world like three times over, destroyed the Grand Galloping Gala, pull off the fucking sonic rainboom, knows karate, graduated early from flight school, etc. etc.?

Do they want to get fricking Deus Ex Machinaed to fucking high heaven?

Very sweet and erotic. Great job! Was the "burst of warmth" part of the demon's gift to Dash?

Yep! I'm going to go more into it later.
Every story needs some conflict

so what is Rainbow demon's gift?

I'll explain more about it later, as I said in the author's note, I didn't want to go too much into it because people reading this first would have no idea what was happening.

Oh... this is a sequel to the Asmodeus story. Interesting.

Probably too early to ask this, but I wonder if we'll be seeing him again?

Why can I not give you multiple upvotes for this. You have earned them.

why did I have to read a good story when I quit clopping?

5820905 I don't know the answer to that, but I do know I love your avatar. xD

Good stories are few and far between. Can't ignore the clops during fic droughts xD

Definitly. But not for a couple chapters at least.
Thank you!
Impossible to quit clop, but I commend your effort. And I am sad(happy) to be the one who jeopardized it.
I know the feeling

5820950 thanks, I intended to do a clopfics for it, but I, as yo know, am trying to quit

5821052 The dark side of the force beckons to you. :trollestia:

5821052 Well, I know of a person who's going to do one based on that pic, but I don't know when that fic will be done.

Btw, this fic is starting off good. And I sense a three way between Soarin, Dash, and AJ in the future.

u did not answer my question?

good start you are improving... that potion reference made me :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: so hard will be tracking

5821185 Yeah? well it almost killed me

5821219 hm, that could work, the AJXRDXsoarin, that would be fun, the ex, and the mister, funny

Not literally I hope

That is hot. Really hot. Wow.

5822517 no, no it is literally

You magnificent bastard. You just made me break one of most important rules here on Fimfiction. Never upvote an incomplete story. Gongratulations. Fav and upvote given and you haven't even written 10 000 words of it.

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Is there someone inside the house?

5861991 is it scoots? Maybe spitfire and then threesome!?!?

Nah first threesome is in Date Four, and Spitfire isn't going to appear for a couple chapters at the least. Don't worry, you'll find out soon enough.

Awesome, as always! Just one hiccup that... well... pretty much made my afternoon...

Dash slammed herself down, a loud wale escaping from her throat as a primal part of her brain exploded

Accidentally read it as whale, and... yeah. Wish I weren't so inept or I would be arting that instead of talking about it.

Lol, thanks for the heads up. Fixed it

5862322 I assumed it was a Humpback, to be honest.


Brilliant chapter! :yay:

I'm guessing it was AJ, but I'm gonna aim for the blindside and say it was Fluttershy. She always struck me as the 'extremely quiet but very perverted' type. You know, being a voyeur, having some really out-there fantasies...that sort of thing.

Course, I SUPPOSE it could've just as easily been Twilight, buuuuuut she can't cook for squat, so I'm giving that a maybe-but-not-likely. :ajsmug:

holy hell, yes. the perfect sequel.

I'd like a bit more story in each chapter like you did in 'Twilight Summons Up A Pounding' please.

About the only thing that would make this perfect is a threesome of Twilight, Rainbow, and Soarin'. Because Twidash is best lesbian ship, SoarinDash is best straight ship, and we need more threesome ships between these three.

Not meaning to be a grammar nazi, since I didn't know this myself until a few minutes ago, but you mentioned the maitre d' in the resturant. Turns out the apostrophe actually goes after the 'd', and there's a space between the 'd' and the rest. They aren't joined by the apostrophe. As I said, I'm not trying to be a dick, as I didn't know this until five minutes ago, but I just wanted to let you know.


and there's a space between the 'd'

Yes, there certainly was.

6657086 Yes! I was thinking the same thing!

and then Rarity says get your mind out of the gutter

I may be wrong, but it looks like somebody's just taken an Incubus Draft.

Jury's out on whether or not it was Purified, Asmodeus didn't seem very corrupted.

(Incredible work, mang, look forward to seeing more of this universe!)

I wonder if this will ever finish?

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