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Trixie Lulamoon is an average teenager, yearning for a simple, ordinary life and a sweet romance with her crush. During what Trixie had hoped would be a typical, unmagical Canterlot High school dance, her life is thrown into turmoil as seemingly unstoppable robots besiege the dance. In a desperate escape, a superhero-clad equine doppelgänger comes to her rescue. Together, they embark on a quest to uncover the origin of the menace, an indomitable and seemingly all-powerful entity known as Proto who seeks to destroy all Trixie everywhere.

Featuring Trixies from the Lunaverse, Skitchverse, Fallout Equestria, Manehattanverse and others! Don't worry if you're unfamiliar with these stories. I've done my best to make them as accessible as possible. And I have a quick bio of each Trixie in the author notes.

This story will have four arcs. The first arc is finished, and I will be posting each chapter once a week each Friday.

Cover art features art by: CloudyGlow, Melisareb, valadrem, Remul-Lemlem and again, N0KKUN, inaactive and again, LimeDazzle, Jeatz-Axl and again, CloudyGlow, background by Yulia Gapeenko.

Chapters (11)
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That's a lotta Trixies.
There even a few incarnations I haven't heard of from 'verses I never knew of.

This is sure to be something.
I'm looking forward to it.

Okay it finally started, I hoped the extra Trixie's from fimfiction which I sended you links too helped a bit for your story. Though I haven't read the story, isn't fallout Trixie not the Master of Fallout 1? Yeah I'm fallout fan but I never read the fimfiction of Fallout Equestria. :twilightsheepish:

I am hoping to see Hasbroverse Trixie show up!

Well, this looks like this could be interesting. The action, characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up are pretty well done, both in the prologue chapter and for this chapter. So, Human Trixie got attacked by however is targeting Trixies throughout the multiverse and got rescued by a super-hero version of herself AND a Loki Expy version of her.

Of course, considering how the egos of most versions of Trixie could drive somebody to try to kill them, we have no shortage of suspects. Of course, Princess Trixie from the Mirror Equestria (Element of Humility, Ascended protege of the benevolent King Sombra and surrogate sister to Duchess Chrysalis [who is Element of Love]) would probably think the other hers would remind her too much of her universe's Twilight (who, in the Mirror Equestria, would either be the role of the ego-tripping magician, a mad scientist or a mix of the two]).

But anyway, really looking forward to more of this (especially the Lunaverse Trixie meeting the Manehattanverse Trixie [universes where they are both among the bearers of the Elements of Harmony, so they might actually have teammates to get help from in addition to the other alternate Trixies]).

And, of course, Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends.

With this many trixies in one place I must wonder on how long it will be before an ego singularity forms

Hmm, I really want Trixie to be with Sunset, but reading her interaction with Fluttershy, it seems she won't be with Sunset.

“Can I ride you? I love horses!” Human Trixie suppressed a girlish giggle. While a dumb and childish impulse, she couldn’t help herself. Horse Trixie was so adorable!

Hmm, I think I know why Trixie likes Sunset. I like your story. Great concept. The interaction between Trixie was cool. Good luck.

I wonder if a male version of Trixie will join them?

Once again, this is very good work on the dialogue, action, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked the Rainbooms trying to help out against that killer robot as well as the reactions to all those Trixies (except the naturally human one) still being ponies so far. The discussions concerning the needs concerning somebody who knows enough about magic to be able to track Proto to its creator and the descriptions of the injuries of the assorted Trixies are also well done.

VERY MUCH looking forward to more of this. And Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends.

By now Luna Verse Trixie must be like Captain Kirk. According to the time agency his enterprise holds the record of causing most time anomalies. And Lunaverse Trixie case having encountered most of her alternate universes. :raritywink:

Can someone link the previous multi Trixie story with Lunaverse Trixie. I'd love to read it

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Oh yes. Of course. That amazing story. One of my favorites on the site

Again, you did a really good job on the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. So, it looks like whoever is targeting all those Trixies has resorted to bringing out Antithesis to "play" (somebody familiar to both Main Trixie AND Lunaverse Trixie as well as Lunaverse Twilight - and NOT familiar in a good way). REALLY liked Captain Cosmos's chat with Lunaverse Twilight as well as the information exchange with the other surviving Trixies so far. And, yes, the stuff about recalling the "Cold War" from human world history (as well as other worlds with a similar technology level) makes a great deal of sense.

At any rate, really looking forward to more of this. And Happy New Year in advance (or as close to Happy as can be realistically expected given all that upcoming political garbage and other probable bad stuff).

I propose a hypothesis suggesting that Proto is a highly potent iteration of Trixie, aspiring to establish herself as the sole Trixie across the entire Multiverse.

this sounds like the deadpool story arc with the same theming. watching this

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Possibly. However, there's no shortage of suspects. After all, the egos of most versions of Trixie could rub almost anybody the wrong way, even those of a god-tier power and very questionable sanity.

Still, I will admit that your theory is in the "possible, but not definite" category.

Yikes. Again, the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are well done. REALLY appreciated the reactions to the explanations concerning Antithesis. And that stuff about Antithesis using that version of the "Want It Need It" spell modified to drive others to a literally homicidal hatred was disturbingly clever. Glad Human Trixie got that idea to get help from the native version of Luna because at least they now know how to undo the spell AND have a chance of getting back to the other Trixies in time (though only a chance, not a guarantee).

Anyway, really looking forward to more of this.

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So, when are we meeting actual bear Trixie?

Yikes. Again, this was a really good job on the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked Antithesis's frustrations concerning her difficulty in getting Pinkie to "cooperate" as well as the battle banter between Representative Trixie and Antithesis. Also liked how Representative Trixie got loose of those restraints. But, holy cow, looks like Antithesis has brought Nightmare Moon out to "play".

VERY MUCH looking forward to more of this (particularly to see how the Trixies manage to escape both Antithesis AND the corrupted Luna [as well as getting Luna back to normal]).

Before she could resist, Representative Trixie gasped as a hoof slammed against her, knocking her own, and her head jolted against the ground. Her eyes widened as metal clasps snapped closed around her legs, trapping her against a wooden board. What the hay? Where did that come from? A torture rack hadn’t been in her room before! Try as she might, Representative Trixie couldn’t make her restraints budge, leaving her to Pinkie Pie’s heartless mercy.

“No, please!” Tears stained her eyes, wanting this horrible nightmare to end. And she was alone, knowing by instinct that neither her friends nor her mentor would arrive in time to save her skin.

“And now, time for your punishment for not liking my parties!” Pinkie said, eyes glowing red with malevolence.

This part reminded me of some Creepypasta comic about Pinky

By the way, does the Mind Stone have canonical power like in Marvel or is it a weakened version? It's just that the canonical mind stone is very powerful for the Pony universe.

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The Mind Stone is about as strong as the Marvel version, or at least the Marvel Cinematic version. You're right, it is super dangerous. A certain Trickster Goddess shouldn't have been so careless with it.

“You see, I fight for the winning side. And Captain Cosmos and the others? Doomed from the beginning. I’ve seen the power Proto has at his disposal. He brought a terror like you into existence. Even if Princess Luna returns to her senses, how will we escape the hordes of killer robots? Everyone seems to have forgotten about them.”

Either Trixie's version of the goddess of lies and mischief is really going to betray the other Trixies or she's just fooling Antithesis. I'm thinking more of the latter, this Trixie is still a version of Loki. By the way, will you have only fanfic versions of Trixie or original ones too?

Excellent work, once again, on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. REALLY neat way to raise the stakes by having the mind-altered Luna working on slamming the moon into the world and most of the Trixies having to work together to stop that. Also, none of them except Loki-Trixie knowing how to use it is a good reason for the group to not use the Mind Stone to undo the spell on Luna. And that bit with Antithesis and Loki-Trixie, yikes. Of course, we will eventually find out which one of them is going to end up playing the other in a future chapter.

Definitely looking forward to more of this.

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A little of both, but I will usually try to avoid making them too much of an OC. Like, they're my own creation, but they come from either an archetypal fanfic or from a fanfic or world that already exists, but Trixie didn't exactly show up in it. For example, in the next arc, I have a Trixie that comes from the Crystal War Timeline.

I'm enjoying the story so far, though I wonder if your planning in bringing out the villain I told you about which really hated Trixie more then anything else. I will not mention her name for the other to prevent spoilers, but I'm just curious if you read any of the stories I send a link to you. :twilightsmile:

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You'll have to see. I definitely have some surprises waiting. Again, thanks for the recommendations, though it has given me a lot of reading to do.

Excellent work, again, on the action, characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked Applejack's talk with Representative Trixie before they headed off as well as Twilight's chat with "Goddess" Trixie . Also appreciated Representative Trixie's attempt to reason with her corrupted mentor before the battle. And you know the situation is bad when Corona is helping the heroes and is the more pragmatic of the two.

Anyway, definitely looking forward to more of this.

Again, you did an excellent job on the dialogue, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. REALLY liked the bit about Antithesis getting nervous about plans as well as the Loki Expy Trixie finding out a bit more about the villains' plan and the team-up of Corona, the Lunaverse Twilight and the other Trixies in stopping Luna before the Loki Expy Trixie ended up sacrificing herself to protect the key to the plan to save Luna and that world in general.

REALLY looking forward to more of this.

It looks interesting, I want to see if I can recognize any of these Trixies

Will that version of Trixie from the 'a witch in broad daylight' universe appear, that is a very powerful Trixie

Another really well done job on the dialogue, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. Definitely liked how Luna and Corona worked together with the surviving Trixies to foil Antithesis's attempt to destroy the Lunaverse Equestria before Proto ended up severely punishing Antithesis for both her excess and her planned betrayal. The reflections on what happened to the Loki Expy Trixie was also really appreciated.

Well, onto the next chapter/last chapter for this arc.

Yikes. REALLY good job on the dialogue, characterizations and future arc set-up. So, the main universe Trixie met a Trixie/Discord hybrid and other versions of her that each seem to present a different Element of Harmony. Intriguing. Also appreciated the cameo by the other Lunaverse Element Bearers.

Definitely looking forward to the next arc in this series.

And it's going to get even more interesting. There a few Trixies we are missing. I'm surprised the Ursa Ranger or Goo Trixie haven't appeared yet.

But the one I look most forward if she makes an appearance would be Trixcord.

And there she is. Trixcord. And I know which the other Trixies are. Still no Ursa Ranger or Goo Trixie.

Ahh mischief deities, never underestimate them else soon you'll be in a jester hat

Oh boy... this will be interesting!

The spell that antithesis used reminds me of Starlight anger smoke from episode "Bottle it up". It also spreaded on everypony and made them hate and attack Trixie. The only difference is that Starlight did not want to cast it and Starlight's spell projected her anger onto others, not make them act on their own anger.

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