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Grand-Galvatron


Hello Fimfiction Writers, I am Grand-Galvatron, EQG Fimfic writer, and Supreme Ruler of the Decepticon Empire!

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Once upon a time, a teenager by the name of Juniper Montage was having a happy life, and her life got even happier as she was making a promising acting career. Her parents couldn't be any happier, that was until Trixie Lulamoon, a jealous rival actor, got an experimental face clay known as Renuyu, and after falsely congratulating Sunset on her stunning performance one night on a crime noir film, poured the renuyu all over her body, ensuring that would look so ugly, she would never be able to act again.

However, what she didn't know is that the experimental clay was starting to change her molecular structure, turning her bones and flesh into clay.

At first, Juniper looked a grotesque clay monster, but with enough practice, she was able to not only shape-shift into her normal looks, but also into anything she wanted.

Soon, she would run into others that had the same affliction, but each with different powers.

What happens then...only time will tell.

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Comments ( 17 )

You might want to get a proofreader. You have an interesting setup, but there are a large number of errors.

Comment posted by Grand-Galvatron deleted Jul 3rd, 2022

Inspired by Clayface from Batman/DC Comics!

But, there are other "Clayfaces"??

'Reads the premise.' Somewhere, somehow, poor Juniper Montage is throwing a fit at being left out of yet another acting story.:ajsleepy:

Trixie then has a barrel full of clay.

Where'd she get a barrel of the stuff? For that matter how did she manage to lift it?:rainbowderp:

“You know, I was just going to put a bullet in your brain, but now that you've really pissed me off, I'm going to do this,” Trixie said as she got ready to dump the clay all over Sunset.

That's quite the tonal shift.:fluttershbad:

"Hey what are you...buegggh," Sunset said as Trixie poured the clay all over Sunset's body. "Trixie help me, It's covering me, I can't breathe."

Could use some exclamation points.:unsuresweetie:

A fun concept but it could use some polish.

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Yes, in the comics, there were several people that called themselves Clayface.

I'm definitely hooked, despite the grammar errors. But yeah, you might want to get a proofreader, and if you want, I'd be happy to help with proofreading

Renuyu wasn't clay but a chemical. Clay is a solid kind of soil, if Trixie would dump a barrel of it on Sunset she would bludgeon her to death with it.

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It was a brown sludge like chemical. Somewhat similar to wet clay or mud.

It's not entirely inaccurate.

This should be Juniper Montage's story, not Sunset Shimmer's.

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