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One Saturday night, Twilight Sparkle is over at Sunset Shimmer's place for the weekend. Then, an idea pops in Sunset's mind. She then dares Twilight to see who can drink the most without passing out. What happens next? Chaos, Hilarity, and Sunset and Sci-Twi acting like complete drunken fools, that's what.
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That was silly. Thanks for the chuckle.
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I am glad you got a giggle out of that.
really funny story
I just wish we got to see their reactions from watching the recording
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Don't worry, that will be in a future story.
This reminds of the bar scene in RDR2, and it's beautiful.
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YAY
LOL. Your gold fish is drawning, a classic.
Great slice of life, please make a sequel about their hangover!!
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Don't worry, There will be a sequel.
I bet the aftermath isn't gonna be well with their hangovers from the alcohol
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I won't spoil much, but I'll tell you this, Wallflower Blush will be involved in the Aftermath.
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Can't even imagine why she would, unless she was called over at some point, she'd came over for a visit, or she was there the whole time watching.
Can't wait to see, what happens next.
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She is supposed to go to Sunset's place for a tutoring session with her math homework, but ends up finding Sunset and Sci-Twi passed out.
A rather nice and funny short random read of simple and straightforward nature, though I hope nobody thinks alcohol really works this way. I think you might have described a bit more in some instances to vary the pacing a bit and provide some extra build up to improve the joke’s timing and impact. Also noticed some inconsistencies and odd punctuation use in direct speech (can explain more if needed). Also numerals shouldn’t really appear in stories, and the same goes for stuff like *hic* and (snore). These are acceptable in comics, but are really frowned upon in prose. You should describe that the person hiccuped or snored instead.
I had this sorta happen once. Never do shots of tequila from a bottle shaped like a black skull... Trust me... At least I was at home with friends.
nice work
Omg they are piss drunk