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Ebonyglow
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First of all, I have a weakness for Twi so this is already great, I love her nervous and nerdy self XD
But also seeing them slowly caving in to their feelings and upgrading their friendship, was both very hot and kinda cute!
Spike eavesdropping her and then mentioning what she said was great XD
I love it!
It's beautifully written and I love how you wrote their relationship. I'm personally sad it was anal, because that is very much not my thing and seems like a waste, but that's just my personal taste rather than anything the story did and I'm not petty enough to downvote over something like that. More writers need to write an older Twispike like this, more like friend shipping and completely ignoring the monkey wrench S9 threw into everything concerning Spike.
I hope there's a chapter with everyone :) Including Trixie and Starlight.
Well.. Now we get to see your take on Spike rutting the Mane 6 I hope. I mean it definatly seemed that way from that ending and I can't wait to see it... Rarity and AJ's turns especially.
time to nut and pass out
Hey author you forgot to add incest to the warning tags
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These two aren’t biologically related, and the story addresses them as always seeing each other as friends
11572086
While not biologically related she is his mother by adoption or his sister by adoption depending on which relationship you view them as incest has to be added in this case.
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But I view them as neither
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Bro, just respect the author's wishes. If he says he doesn't view them as either, just accept it and move on. It's not like it's a big deal or affects the story in a huge way.
By the way, bud. Another killer story. And with the most adorkable bookworm of them all. Love me some Twilight action.
For those interested in the full version of the cover pic: 3117067 on Derpi. (Also, check out 3117068 for the alternate.)
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In canon, Spike sees her as a sister while Twilight and Shining just saw him as a school science project until S9. This story, however, is not canon and the author can do whatever they want. And, even in show canon, the Incest tag would not be needed because they're not actually related.
The story is marked as complete, meaning no further chapters...
...Sequels, please?
Have an upvote, by the way. Love stories where Twilight loves (not just lusts...I mean, still lusts, but not just lusts) Spike.
"Her walls were an angel's caress, giving every last inch of his dick pleasure..." is written exquisitely. Incredibly hot! Love how Spike's first offer to plow Twilight and he literally goes for Twilight's ponut over anything else. LOVE IT!
No one like this it's at 69 it's too perfect
fuck incest bro
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Still don’t get how this is incest lmfao
Literal entirely different species. I’ve always seen them as extremely close friends and nothing more
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Hey Ebony, this might need a few follow up sequel stories. Also, the story you did a while ago called Lock and Seed definitely needs a sequel picking up right where the 1st left off with how great the story telling was.
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Why do you think I stopped commenting not that I dislike the story I just thought that the incest tag would be relevant
Hot DAMN I luuuuv me some Twislut action! And it looks like Flutter Butter is gonna git a dragon dickin' soon as well!
I always have a perfectly logical question.
And why did the authors decide that the inhabitants of this world reach maturity at the age of 18?
After all, this is a completely different world, with different laws of nature and society.
I am always frankly amused by authors who think too humanly, and thereby deprive this world of some features, uniqueness.
It seems that the author's fantasies, as well as his unique ideas for the concept of world building, are severely limited by someone or something.
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It's not the authors, it's the website's Rules. If you use Anthro or write from the US, the average legal age is 18, so we're bound by that limitation. I'm aware that this tale isn't Anthro, but this author is using Spike in his tale, and in the show he's portrayed as a child, so he has to show him reaching the legal age in order to have him performing sexual acts.
Even in one of my popular tales, I aged up Spike, and I still caught a pile of shit for it from a bunch of readers. He's a very polarizing character and has to be treated correctly, even now in the fandom's waning years.
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Yes, I understand that we live in a far from ideal world of a whole contrast of madness and absurdity.
I could explain in detail exactly what the absurdity of this rule/ law is, but I doubt that the authors will feel the spirit of freedom of thought and speech.
Damn restrictions. It's like putting a blindfold on your eyes, plugging your ears, sealing your mouth with tape, and handcuffing the poor author. And there will be a Statue of Liberty in the background!
In fact, this is a forced restriction of the human, so that he could not think uniquely, outside the box.
There are quite a lot of such stories here. And their concept is made monotonously.
Although, I will still give a positive assessment of this story, because, no matter what, the author tried. But, I will also be honest if I say that this story is very overrated.
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Bold of you to assume my ideas and concepts are limited just because I’m not fond of having an underage character fuck. Everyone can do what they want, and I like ensuring characters are of age in my stories.
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Not sure what pedestal you’re speaking from to cast judgment onto people and claim what is and isn’t overrated. Super thankful you have deemed me worthy of “trying” to write though
Very cool!
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By and large, I don't care. And we definitely have our own views and opinions on all this. But it seems that you are far from understanding the meaning of my words.
And take my word for it, but my Pedestal consists of life experience, personal observations, and even personal experiences and feelings that give me a reason to reason and draw conclusions in this way.
For example, in what way do you personally consider your story unique?
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It isn’t anything insanely unique, but still…
I wrote it, I ensured that theres custom art of it (5 pieces for it technically), and it was my take on a very commonly used topic. Also, by and large, I don’t give a fuck about your opinions either then I guess
As for the pedestal you’re pretending you’re on, and the fact you didn’t even deny that, it’s pretty clear you’re painfully pretentious.
I’m not going to write foalcon or underage characters. I can see your favorites contain a lot of it, so I’m not shocked you’re acting like this. I have nothing against those who like it or write it, I’m just not going to do it myself.
Spike is of age, every single time I write the CMC they’re of age, and any other characters that need to be will be of age. This is my personal choice, and opinion. You have yours, and I have mine.
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You still don't understand the meaning of my words... I don't mind if you write about adult characters. But, why does it have to be 100% similar by human standards? 18!?
Why is a dragon considered to be of legal age not at the age of 50? And ponies may well be responsible and lead an adult life at the age of 16! Who prevents them from having such unique laws?
Well, good luck to you! Придурок майонезный...
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If it was the age of 50, Twilight and her friends, who I clearly set up to be in sequels, would be incredibly old or even dead in my eyes
So, 18!
This was fun to read.
TwiSpike is fun to see(SpiLuna being hotter)
I hope this means we will see a prequel of him rutting Smolder
Spike x Smolder is lovely to see
What on earth happened to this comment section? Just enjoy the wholesomeness of the story, people.
nice. Also for the dumb dumb below D&D dragons do actually reach their, well, teenager phase at about the same point as humans, virility and all.
this was a good read i look forward to sequels
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I always find it telling that trolls who have no Featured tales of their own somehow have justification to denigrate popular stories. This particular one asked, "How is this story unique?" Gee, I don't know...perhaps the fact it's been on the number one spot of the Featured page for the past few days? Oh! And just about every story this author writes gets the same treatment?
I suppose, one could argue "popular" doesn't always equal "unique," but it's a damn good indicator.
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Porn stories aren't supposed to be taken that seriously, you know
It isn't strictly a work of art, just a pure expression of someone's raw emotion towards some compelling idea. A writing exercise with familiar characters, who will always act OOC. Trying to critique it that way would be similar to going on Rule34 site and debating quality of drawings.
So why are you asking questions related to lore and worldbuilding? There are many authors who would like such attention more, it is wasted here
Do hope that there might be a sequel with either/both Twi and Flutter carrying Spike's offspring
All super believable and in character until you mentioned Smolder being the one to take Spike's virginity. You lost me there.
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In all honesty, that detail was added just to further push he was of age
Unlike Twilight, somehow this fic just doesn't go down
why is this still in the feature box lmao its been 7 days
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I also was being somewhat sarcastic. Solid writing all around ^^
After Spike reads about pony eating dragons of old. He wonders what pony taste like through some lewd accident he gets to find out and he can’t get enough. That is my random story pitch free for anyone.
Luv every moment of it! You made Spike one lucky bastard having six big flank Mares eye him up, well done!
nice work
Honestly when i saw the last part my mind just thought "Discord is going to destroy Spike if he does anything" but i doubt that would happen
Good story 👍 really well done, i am someone who sometimes just read or see porn to admire the art or writing, so i liked you story and how you did it
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Is there a sequel to this in the works?
Question, Sequel?
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Honestly I loved that he banged Smolder too
Think we might see a prequal showing that?