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Ebonyglow


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This was both silly and very hot, especially the end, and I did not expect the Pinkie and Derpi combo, really cool!
They really needed that extra push to get unstuck~

The other ponies getting stuck really makes me wish for more XD
Twi and RD together is too good of a combination XD

The subtle, sultry tone she had used almost went unnoticed by Anon - almost . He couldn’t help but think she had an ulterior motive, and perhaps that his hunches weren’t actually skepticism but truthful. Still, he didn’t want to assume such a lustful and risky thing, so, he simply got ready to push her again - bar a few changes.

"again - bar a few changes"
What does this mean?

Quite a combo!:derpytongue2::pinkiegasp:

This was silly, hot, and nice with the Pinkie and Derpy combo. Please, make more!

adding this to my gooning folder

I will never understand what compels somebody to downvote every comment on a story

Awesome, silly, cute, and HOT!

...who knew ponies could be sexy AND unbearably CUTE?!

Well I have to say this was not what i was expecting to see next from you. Honesty I was expecting one of the two Sweetie Belle fics hinted before.

This was good too however.

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I often see it on porn fics so they must be a prude. Thankfully that means they probably will not have children who are afflicted with the same mental issue.

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I’m letting all those poor souls waiting for that adult sweetie fic marinate is all

also because I don’t have the cover art for either yet lol

Una

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When someone does that I normally just do the opposite for spite. Lol

SEQUEL, SEQEUL!!!! Twilight and Rainbow joining the herd in a sequel.

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I'll upvote every comment to spite them

Very nice, had a good fap to this and the accompanying image during today's shower. Sadly, there are some errors:

His tip poked her womb every time he drove into her, sending surges of delight through her every last inch. Rocketing her closer and closer to the brink.

The second sentence is incomplete (I don't know the technical term) and should be merged with the first :moustache:

l’d know, after all!

How'd Pinkie end up spelling that with a lowercase L rather than an uppercase i?

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Yeah, it’s a bit hard to not miss any errors. Amended the first one, not sure how that got past me. Not sure what you mean for the second

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It says "L'D KNOW", but lowercase.

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I’m putting it as an i there, and it’s like that in my doc too. No clue what’s going on

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Whatever editing you did fixed it, so no worries. Consider it one of Pinkie Pie's eccentricities :moustache:

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I just reimported the google doc, no clue at all what happened lol! But thank you for spotting it!

First of all really good story I only problem with that is that at the end why is there No Romance tag? Also, are you gonna be doing a sequel to this because no offense, the ending just scream sequel

I really like this fic, just the fact that Pinkie and Derpy get preggo from anon, those characters get preggo rare form humans

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Didn't think people would consider this romance. Also, I can't take offense to that! It was kinda just meant to be a fun little ending - whether I do a sequel or not is entirely up to Pabbley

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The reason why I’m considering a romance tag is because at the end, they acted all lovey-dovey and stuff, and They made a herd

Instant favorite as soon as I reached the end. Funny, sexy, hot beyond belief, and a romantic ending with a promise of more. I am absolutely begging for a sequel to this one. :)

Rounding the corner, he came face to face with the pair of ponies who had attempted to escape. Stuck between the bars of the exit, side by side, were none other than Pinkie Pie and Derpy. Both caught sight of him, nervously sweating as they seized their struggles to escape. The earth pony was a clear culprit, sheepishly looking up at him as candy littered her hair and she had a freshly made sweet stick in her maw. Beside her, cracking an innocent smile, Derpy hesitantly raised a hoof and waved over at him.

“H..hi, Anon…” she shyly mumbled, her smile showing the clear muffin crumbs around her lips.

Okay: can we all pause for a moment, and note these two adorable thieves were so silly they were eating the candy and muffins while trying to escape?!

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Please do a sequel.

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"And for my next trick, I'm going to make this muffin disappear!" *chomp*
"She ate the wrapper..."

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Very cute! I noticed one small error on my way through.

"His heart skipped a beat and his cock throbbed in his chest"

Pretty sure human dicks aren't in their chest.

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Holy Fuck talk about a typo LMAO

Thank you for catching that! :twilightsheepish:

make a sequel!! 😝😝

I rarely see stories with derpy in nowadays, smut or otherwise.

If I was to have a threesome with two ponies, Derpy and Pinkie Pie would top the list. Great choice! We need to see more of them.

Entertaining clop. Well done.

"ya know, you could have just asked...."

Guys gonna have the whole Mane 6 before he's done.

Most excellent.

Hopefully Zecora can whip up some stamina potions for Anon, cause with all the daily sex with Pinkie and Derpy and now two more mares joining the herd, he's definitely gonna need them.

Any pregnant derpy makes a good story. Naive and needy derpy makes a super story. Super duper.

This was a wildly cute and sweetly cute story I hope there's a sequel with Twilight and rainbow. I really want to see the herd grow. I also hope that the adorablely sweet romantic connection also grows with more being added to the herd

Definaly do another one, maybe next time have Spike join in..as long as he gets aged up:moustache:

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Never said there wouldn’t be any~

Comment posted by MLPFan98 deleted Sep 8th, 2023
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