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One Punch Man x My Little Pony fan fiction. Mostly just a single action and comedy scene made into a shortfic. Trigger warning for blood and character death.


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Fully Featured and HOT on 02/6/23, 02/7/23 you crazy bastards really wanted a chapter two.

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I feel like Saitama would actually hope it was an Isekai, because that would mean that someone actually defeated him.

Nightmare moon gets fisted

Well, it got featured (if the M rating is turned off). So, another chapter soon?)

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If it can cut through the smutfics then it'll have another (guaranteed) chapter. I should have been more specific I honestly forgot there was a SFW setting on the site. But don't worry, I might make another chapter on my own time.

This was better than it had any right to be. Although not sure how I feel about him being turned into a mare for... no reason lol. Regardless, great work. I would love to see a sequel.

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It got featured with NSFW turned on too, btw.

Great story. My only complaint is that I wished you kept him human.

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That was inevitable

I would love to see Saitama plow through the Storm King's army.

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It's in the title
One Punch Mare

Pinkie Poppins Perfect Pie. :pinkiehappy:

Tirek cargó un enorme rayo de poderosa magia entre sus cuernos mientras su sangre hervía al rojo vivo, insultado y conmocionado por la naturaleza desdeñosa de este único pony terrestre, "Tu cabeza será arrancada de tu cuerpo, yegua terrestre...".

Creo que antes de hacer esto, Tirek habría intentado robar la "magia" que creé que tiene Saitama habiéndose quedado desconcertado porque este no posee magia alguna, lo cual no tendría sentido para el ya que todo poni tiene magia y se desenvolvería la situación a como el autor decida, después un enfrentamiento a gusto y placer del autor.
Hay que recordar que las situaciones que provoca Saitama tienen comedia que suelen estar relacionadas con la situación actual, lo cual en esta historia sería su paradero, Tirek, donde esta la asociación de héroes y su pelea (creo sin concluir) con Boros. Saitama no se saca pensamientos de la nada que no están relacionados con lo que esta sucediendo en esos momentos ya que hacerlo lo saca del personaje en si y hace que no tenga sentido.

I think that before doing this, Tirek would have tried to steal the "magic" that I think Saitama has, having been baffled that he does not have any magic, which would not make sense to him since allponies have magic and the situation would unfold as the author decides, then a confrontation at the author's pleasure and pleasure.
It must be remembered that the situations that Saitama causes have comedy that are usually related to the current situation, which in this story would be his whereabouts, Tirek, where the association of heroes is and his fight (I think inconclusive) with Boros. Saitama doesn't get thoughts out of the blue that aren't related to what's happening at the time, as doing so takes him out of the character himself and makes it meaningless.

El monstruo dejó escapar un suspiro trabajoso mientras escupía una bola de mucosidad infundida con sangre, "... ¿Qué eres?... ¿Cómo pudiste derrotarme con solo golpes... Yo tenía... Yo tenía el poder... de los las alicornio y todos los unicornios en Equestria fueron drenados de su magia... ¿cómo?.... ¿quién eres tú?

Error, fueron todos los ponis y Discord, no solo unicornios.

Wrong, it was all ponies and Discord, not just unicorns.

Varios ponis saldrían de la carpintería para animar y exclamar el regreso de su princesa y su nuevo salvador.

Otro error, en el momento en que Tirek está en Ponyville ya no hay ponis porque ya habían sido evacuados y con mayor razón ya que la pelea de Tirek y Twilight fue épica y muy destructiva y ya que estoy en esto, Tirek una vez obtuvo toda la magia de los alicornios por parte de Twilight no se va a buscarla sino que empieza a destruir todo lo que está a su paso lo cual debió haber sido lo que llamo la atención de Saitama en un primer lugar.

Another mistake, by the time Tirek is in Ponyville there are no ponies anymore because they had already been evacuated and even more so since the fight between Tirek and Twilight was epic and very destructive and while I'm at it, Tirek once got all Twilight's alicorn magic doesn't go looking for her but begins to destroy everything in its path which must have been what caught Saitama's attention in the first place.

Ahora que lo pienso, pudo haber sido un plot twist muy curioso que mientras la mane 6 estaban moviéndose para abrir el cofre Saitama entretiene a Tirek, teniendo estos un enfrentamiento similar al de Boros ya que Tirek es bastante inteligente y tiene toda la magia de Equestria a su disposición tomando bastante desprevenido a Saitama por ser la primera vez que se enfrenta a la magia, esto emocionaría a Saitama al principio de la pelea cansándose poco a poco al ver que la magia tampoco le afecta y mientras hay una charla entre estos 2 las mane 6 emergen del suelo y dando un discurso similar o el mismo al del canon terminando ellas por derrotar a Tirek, quitándole toda la magia y encerrándolo nuevamente en el Tartaro siendo Saitama un espectador de todo esto.

Now that I think about it, it could have been a very curious plot twist that while the 6 mane were moving to open the chest Saitama entertains Tirek, having a similar confrontation to Boros since Tirek is quite intelligent and has all the magic of Equestria at his disposal, taking Saitama quite off guard for being the first time he has faced magic, this would excite Saitama at the beginning of the fight, gradually getting tired when he sees that magic does not affect him either and while there is a conversation between these 2 the Mane 6 emerge from the ground and give a speech similar to or the same as the one in the canon, ending up by defeating Tirek, taking away all his magic and locking him up again in Tartarus, Saitama being a spectator of all this.

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(Buena historia)

Hey finally another MLP OPM crossover!

“Don’t worry, Saitama!” cheered the pink pony, hopping over to the mare, “This is probably just a One-Shot!”
No Pinkie,it's a One Punch

Poor Saitama, the closest theyre going to get to a male horse is Big Mac or Spike. :eeyup:

Una

It's a shame there's such a huge time skip this chapter since there could have been so much more potential/story after his first fight. Maybe talking to the royal sisters or getting used to his body. Just seems like such wasted opportunity.

Overall I love the ideas and first chapter.

11501339 Or Mr. Cake. And Filthy Rich. And Thunderlane. And Doctor Hooves. And Mr. Waddles.

And several others...

But it's nothing compared to the thousands of Colgate clones.

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Too true. I can clearly see 3-4 chapters worth of story development just for the greetings and explanation. But again, each author has his own style of story telling.

When I accidentally punched Fluttershy's boyfriend?...Best friend?.... Acquaintance. Discord. I was glad he survived a normal punch, but, uh… let's just say I'm not making friends with that guy any time soon…Also I keep coughing up mints since that day.

This incident can also become its own chapter. The reactions of both parties should be amusing. I think Angel would like Saitama after seeing her easily beating Discord.

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Instead of Genos, they can always end up with SweetieBot? :unsuresweetie:

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