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This shit is hilarious
Is there a link to this
11613275 A link to what?
Good job on the Pitch Meeting reference. Very nice.
Very good.
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search for “artist:alcor” and “comic:display of passion” on Derpibooru
I remember this comic! Holy SHIT Twilight! My advice? Steer into the skid and paint 'SLUT!' on your forehead... it's far, FAR too late for anything else!
I was wondering why everypony was looking up in the sky.
Plus when Celestia mentions about it.
Hide your stallions, hide your fillies. Twiggles McGee is in town and she is thirsty.
This was great. It's clop without being clop.
Not bad, but it really needs proofreading.
If this leads to Twi (and potentially Anon) indulging in Twi Filly fetish with some of the other Fillies, I'm all for it!
I knew the moment I read the description the part Twilight would be most worried about was that
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I never really thought of it that way. I mean I was planning to write some sex scenes, but seeing how this story is being written. I guess I don't really need to go that far. Not saying I still won't be doing a couple of them, but it all depends on what I decide to do when I get to those certain moments.
Huh
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I didn't even notice that it was incomplete. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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You could write the sex scenes as a separate story. Thus preserving the main stories integrity and having some hot smut to go along with it. A lot of other writers do the same.
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I couldn't agree more.
This was a hilarious concept, tarnished by countless grammar & spelling mistakes.
Random Pitch Meetings reference is random!
I love it!
good start, but man.
getting through celly's dialog was a chunky chore.
Gotta admit, I wasn't expecting a Pitch Meeting reference in a pony fic.
Seriously, proofread your description.
And learn how to make it shorter. You can get the point across with a lot less words. The concept is not complicated.
sneaked
snapped
open
as she quickly
panicked
looked
uh... drawing a blank here...
there
height her
fucked
then
wall she
in Twilight
castle she
shocked
cleared
could
couldn't
could
placed
orgasmed, you
stomped
touched
spoke [and... really... this is BAD FORM]
filled
helped
frightened
she had forgotten
were
glanced
looked
were
true then
there
couple, Twilight
had cast
kept, remained
could
focussed
reversed
Ok... There is purple prose and then there is this ^^;;;
Seriously you overdescribe things there is REALLY too much.
Then try and keep an eye on consecutio temporum, you jump all over the place with the tenses.
Nice base idea.
The explanation of the teleportation incident went on way longer than necessary.
Ryan George would be proud.
Well done!! I am very curious to see why Celestia isn't so worried about what Twilight did.
Very curious indeed!!
nice
I want this to continue. This is the ONLY kind of drama that I really like.
But, it's one thing to know about Twilight's crazy fetish of foals. BUT, Celestia of all ponies didn't seem bothered by any of this? Even the foal bit!?
Celestia, WHAT Are you trying to say!?
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Celly isn't known for her foresight.
11720868 You can say that again!
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Celly isn't known for her foresight.
11720895 As has been demonstrated by the show numerous times, especially "Twilight's Kingdom."
Very good chapter, i look forward to seeing what happens.
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What they did wasn’t illegal. it could be endgame for a normal person, but twilight is royalty and immortal. She just have to wait it out.
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It's a weird fetish, but it's a transformation between consenting adults, and therefore morally ok.
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If you say so.
It's so morally dubious, the Anonfilly thing. Like, it's two adults, but Anon was transformed into a filly.
Every pone will think Twilight is based
I know I do.
Was this just a one shot? or will it become a story?
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It's a story. I've been working on chapter 2 for quite some time, trying to get everything written out right. I know what I want to do, I just need to pave the road so things can move forward smoothly.