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This story is a sequel to You've Got Debt


Takes place after the events of You've Got Debt by, Coronet the lesser.

Note: This is a non canon sequel.


After just becoming The new Ruler of Equestria, Twilight learns that The Crown is in debt of six hundred billion bits shared across many different kingdoms, all because of Celestia's many economic blunders that she didn't know of until now.

It turns out Celestia kept many important secrets from Twilight and with each new info revealed to her like how she have to marry The Saddle Arabian Prince, Saladin, just to cover half of the debt that is owed, only made her more angry and outrage, when she also learned that Celestia trick her into performing a marriage ritual for the The Saddle Arabians.

So with no other choice Twilight vows to fix all of the problems left to her and pay back the debt in full and make sure this crisis never happens again and the second all is said and done she will make sure that Celestia pays for all this.

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Comment posted by nlinzer deleted Jan 13th, 2022

I hope Twilight gets her revenge Celestia really deserves it.

Meanwhile in the human world

Sunset: (resting aside from the portal alongside her friends and the rest of the school) take a while to princess Twilight ti figure out?

Pinkie: even i don't pull up a Yoshi to evading taxes

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Yep! Both Celestia and even Luna are gonna have a massive "karma storm" on their asses. And to make things better. Twilight could have told the truth to everybody in Equestria ( Especially her own friends and family ). Thus, destroying both Celestia's and Linda's reputation for eternally. :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

P.S. Cadence is also in deep shit as well. I mean, she COULD have known what is happening too, but did she warned or tell Twilight??? F*** NO!!!!!!!!

And for her brother's sake, hope Shining Armor was in the dark as well. Otherwise, this will be like the Canterlot Wedding but times INFINITY!!!!!!! :twilightangry2: :twilightangry2: :flutterrage: :flutterrage:

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SMG4 reference!

Well i for one hope the Prince is a nice guy, Else let's look forward to Twilight getting her magic around those two, Who knows she might be able to track them Down do to the magic they left in the amulet for the sun and moon, and it's not about if she finds them its about when

Yep, that thing has fun potentional😂

Go on with it and that might be my favourite "Celestia why?" Story!

So first time i read this was just before work and i had just gotten up now i am rereading it to get it all,

And bloody hell They do not seem to even have the ability to see what they did here is right out evil

"Twilight! I'm so sorry!"

And then there is this line Like this is hollow, And then there is her Sister in law, like i Don't think there is anything she can say there will earn Twilights forgiveness, For how Celestia talks about her she knew about this, She even owes her 75 billion for that just sounds like Cadance was just thinking about how she can get her money not even thinking about the stress she has throw onto Twilight:facehoof:

All i can say as this point is bloody hell i Truly hope that the Prince turn out to be a nice guy who can help Twilight so she can get to the point when she can pull the two Scam artist out and get some pay back, and with Tempest train the Royal Guard they are going to be helpful

So yeah heavy looking forward to more

I can tell it's a good story, but wow, this urgently needs an editor to go over the whole bloody thing, it's borderline painful to read!

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I know, I will go over it again and try and fix things, and I’ll make sure this isn't repeated going forward.

I agree with the others. This Saddle Arabia Prince could be a nice guy to Twilight. And maybe, just maybe, Twilight will actually like him too, and they actually hit it off. I mean, it's better than Pony Flash Sentry, am I right! :rainbowlaugh:

( While I have no problem with Human Flash, and he could go back together with Sunset. )

twilight could do some pretty good payback for this. say capture and imprison celestia and luna in tarturus for as long as their new personal debt to twilight is (depending on how twilight wants to play it 1 bit can be subtracted every year or day) and since they didnt sign anything about this debt they have taken out from twilight then she can not only set the intrest rate but the payback way and payment in genrel aswell.

I really do find it hard to believe Cadance here for she did loan 75 billion to Celestia and knew Twilight was going to pay for it

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Understandable. Just give her a chance to explain.

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Sure But it's still one hell of a hole she and Shining is in right now, Like i hope they can fix this and move past it maybe even help Twilight gets those two Con artist

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i hope she repossesses the empire. hell of a way for her to send a statement and show them that at the end of the day the secret they chose to keep wasent worth it.
plus since twilight now rules equestria and with how smart she is i wouldnt put it past her to now have a "money celestia and luna owe equestira" debt they have to pay.
I do wonder if twilights new husband will understand and work with her when he gets filled in on what celestia and luna did.

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I hope you are right, Else i do 100% agree with you in that i hope the Prince turns out to be a Great guy

p,s Thinking about it the Prince might be pissed for Celestia lie to him and his dad, For what they knew off Twilight knew what she was doing, When they learn that she did not and was trick into it they might not be happy

I'm wouldn't pass it if Twilight will finally snap, say "f*** it", and turning evil as Midnight. It will be Nightmare Moon/Day Breaker all over again. But it's MUCH worse, and it's times one billion!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Luna at least should have seen this f******* coming!!!!! :facehoof:

Now, she is NO better than her idiot big sister back then. Hope Twilight insult her and remind Luna about that.

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and if he has any reason to suspect foul play from twilight then im pretty sure there is a lie detector spell so she can explane all about how she was set up and so was he to take the fall for celestias debt. becasue at the end of the day them marrying would make it her husbands debt too wouldnt it so celestia screwed over both an incredibly smart pony and another country on the way out.
Maby they could start by banning celestia and luna from equestria and the country her husband is from then as they pay off the debts they can pay extra to make it a slowly growing world wide ban

May I suggest grammerly? It’s helped me catch stuff I never would have found on my own. I noticed a few things that you might have missed. Otherwise this story has me laughing my head off! Keep up the great work!

"Twilight! I'm so sorry!"

If you really were, then you shouldn't have done this in the first place. :ajbemused:

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No! None of my stories are. I’m just trying to dig myself out of the deep hole I dug myself in and trying to finish all my short stories. Starting with my oldest work.

This is so cool because I can definitely see it happen, that is, the vast majority of professionals never manage to keep up with the evolution of their profession

I highly doubt Celestia can keep up with developments in politics, society, law, economics among many other fields

I imagine Celeste taking priority in politics and law leading to this economic disaster

This is so good it can't end here please continue :raritydespair:

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