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Base off of the Secret admirer, Spikes Sacrifice series by 1jckuhn.

Takes place in the combination of these three stories:
A Secret Admirer
A Secret Admirer 3: Spike's Sacrifice (AU)
Chrysalis' Beating

Note: This story will resurrect the original canon where Chrysalis and Tirek were sentenced to be executed before 1jckuhn change it to life in tartarus because of readers demands.


The Legion of Doom had been defeated and Equestria was saved once again only this time victory came at a terrible price; The death of Spike. He gave his own life to protect six of his harem of lovers and the world with a selfless sacrifice.

The Mane 6, CMC, Smolder, Starlight, and gabby mourn the death of their decease lover and wanted justice for his murder.

After their defeat Chrysalis and Tirek will be put on trial for their crimes against Equestria and the death of Spike the dragon.

They were both facing the death penalty for what they did and knew that this was their end.

OBJECTION!!!!

luckily for them it turns out that one mare is willing to stand up in their defense for she believes a great injustice is being committed and she refused to just sit in the background and allow it to go on.

Raven Inkwell decides to defend the evil duo in court and make sure that justice is truly served by exposing the truth behind the attack on Equestria and the lies of the one who started it all.

This fight will be a great one and Raven knows she'll be outnumbered. But who said she'll be fighting this war alone.


This story was requested by 1jckuhn. This isn't just a simple request, 1jckuhn and I have a history that goes back to the many comments I left in his stories, mainly the ones up top.

This story is a combination between his story and mine fuse together. So, basically, it's a cross-over.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )
Comment posted by ChazMLPFIM deleted Dec 10th, 2023

before 1jckuhn change it to life in Tartarus because of reader's demands.

Which instantly destroys the story's and the author's credibility if they're so weak-minded to change the story because people demand they do so.

And of course, this version here won't last very long. Hardly the first one of these you've done.

Go go Chysalis! You're the Queen no matter what!

As an avid isekai reader, seeing my favorite changeling destroyed those braindead harem protaganist's cocksleeves with words was an unexpected fortune and truly made my day.

Thank you author for such a gold.

the victors write history

Chysalis is so dope! And why did cozy and tirek have problem with killing?

Cozy's magic stealing plan likely killed thousands of cloud dwelling ponies already.

Tirek wouldn't dropped a bomb in middle of ponyville if he cared about needless slaughter.

crycalis death is warranted in my opinion no matter what

cozy glow is a real psycho but warrants no more then a daily spanking

tirek also need's to be killed hes too much of a treat to the world just as much as discord

a woman vengeance is scarier than a man I know that from life experience great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Umm... yeah. You should change the short description into something more clickbaity and to tge point. Like "Chysalis V Spike's harem by Anthony Raven Inkwell"
"Raven Inkwell drag discord out to justice"

All right. We are back, y’all!

he deserves all the guild, nice chapter ^^

Those tears of idiot harem fleshlights.... Feel so good!

And the aftermath is so gruesome. Worshippers of Khorne would be prouded.

Honestly, Discord's full reform is a mistake. He should've at least remained a wildcard like Q from startrek. This is a good spot to send him away from harmonists.

His apperance meant he won't fitted in no matter what, they hate him for his chaos, and trying to go against his chaotic nature will literelly killed him.

By all mean he's the one at fault here and I should have him... but he's the one who broke that cringe-worthy harem...

The giant crowd of creatures watch on in satisfaction as they enjoyed Discord's Beating. Some even began shout at him, voicing their hatred for the monster who got Spike killed.

How uncivilized.

"I should have never become your friend." Fluttershy said.

Go go Discord! Get out of Equestria and find happiness somewhere else!

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