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GrumpyMonk97


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A story about the four major dragon characters from Friendship is Magic (Spike, Smolder, Garble, and Ember) in the wake of Equestria’s fall as they work to unravel the mystery behind the collapse, and work to stop the pony who caused it from doing anymore harm.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 36 )

Congratulations on your story passing,My story is still under review,May I ask how long your story has been reviewed(cry)

Nice to see the comics acknowledged.

So this ties in with g5 and the previous king and queen of Abyssinia reclaimed their throne right?

So that's where she went. Like the execution of Luster being a battle-hardened yet excitable boss

If you need an OC, let me know via PM.

Comment posted by GrumpyMonk97 deleted Oct 3rd, 2022

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Correct. After Meowmeow was deposed in the Season 10 comics, the former rulers reclaimed their thrones

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You’ll have to tune in to find out ;)

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I wonder how he came to be though? Or if he's related to the former King and Queen in any way? We'll never know. Either way. Would Sparky be involved?

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Sparky may or may not come into play. There’s only one way to find out 👀

Since she's a fire alicorn or so we think. I had a hunch she wants their flame.

Spike, Smolder, and Ember I can understand, but is Garble really that important a character?

Why haven't you responded to my comment yet?

This is an incredible epic! Will Spike have a showdown with Opaline? Will he do what needs to be done, or go too far and loose himself in vengeance.

An eye for an eye. Now Chummer and Capper are eyepatch buddies!

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Maybe not within the show itself, but I figured it was a good chance to get him some spotlight 😄

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Thanks a lot man! Makes me happy to see that people are enjoying it.

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Indeed they are. Funny thing, that was pure coincidence. I completely forgot Chummer had an eyepatch 😂

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He didn't even after the crash. Which means he got it while attempting to start the rebellion. But yeah now he has it. On the other eye opposite Capper had here to boot! :rainbowlaugh:

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Her daughter has a great childhood and a stunning imagination! I wish her a prosperous future.

Comment posted by GrumpyMonk97 deleted Jan 24th, 2023

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I didn’t feel that the story warranted it. Might add it later if it comes to that.

Huh, it seems Spike hasn't heard of the three places. Are they really undiscovered areas even Twilight doesn't know about?

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If you think about where the story is heading, you’ll know what they are referencing 👀

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Speaking of which, they just revealed new lore: https://www.equestriadaily.com/2023/01/official-size-chart-for-g5-ponies-and.html?m=1

Maretime Bay is thankfully a separate place, apparently it didn't even exist yet. Don't know if it'll impact your story but I can fix that by chalking up as Carrion seeing its future. Maybe like Opaline is going after Cloudsdale and the Everfree Forest that'll become these forseen places. If not, we can leave it like that. It did say they moved somewhere.

Comment posted by GrumpyMonk97 deleted Jan 25th, 2023

One thing I always wondered at the back of my mind was a dragon's eating habits. Gems aren't typically food to others, but I don't think dragons should eat too much either since it's most probably candy to them.

No, if anything, she wants you to be happy. That's all that matters.

“Come on. We don’t wanna be late.” Spike gestured ahead as he adjusted the strap that ran across his chest to the single pauldron on his right shoulder. In the wake of their battle against Opaline, Princess Luna decided to create a task force of sorts to help restore order to the world, the Knights of Harmony, of which they had all been made members. They each bore the sigil upon similarly designed pauldrons that they had all donned for this important occasion. As they passed by an open window, Spike looked out and felt a strangeness in the air, as if something groundbreaking was about to happen.

New Knights of Harmony more like. But anyway, so ends the end of g4 and G5's beginning. It's been a wild ride. I thoroughly enjoyed the action that was presented, which I think unfortunately won't be a thing in g5 I think. Up until this chapter, I was assuming it's way before g5 considering Fluttershy died by the time of G5. Yep. While the timeline is still unclear, it's generally accepted that it's not too far out if Luna and Celestia only lived long and by g5 they might've died of old age if they're not immortal otherwise. Without magic, Discord can age. It's also not too close either because of Fluttershy's death. I'll like to think she died of old age than because of unnatural causes. I say all that because of Misty, like wow, she must've really lived long.

Regardless, I do enjoy this story. Best work of the connection between g4 and g5. Who knows what really happened? And if we'll know. This is all. Adios amigo.

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Thanks for sticking with it man! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Like I said, I’m working on getting the rest of this story into comic form as well as having an original project in the pipeline so there’s more exciting things to come! Hope you’ll consider giving them a look!

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I will. By the way, if a story's complete, you can set the status to complete. Unless there's more?

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