For the past three months, The Mane Six, Starlight Glimmer, the CMC, Gabby, and Smolder have all been receiving love poems, love letters, or small gifts with no name saying who it's from. They become determined to find out who this mysterious person is and why they're so infatuated with all 12 of them. When they finally reveal who it is, however, the answer to their questions is something that no one saw coming.
Takes place sometime in Season 9.
Sorry, I couldn't fit Starlight's tag on this story. I wish FimFiction would allow more than tags for main characters.
Featured on Spike's page on April 12th, 2021. Thanks, everyone.
Chapters (5)
I feel ya. The whole limit thing seems ridiculous.
I'm betting my handful of air that the messed-up admirer is Spike
I mean it's pretty obvious. No crud, Sherlock.
huh, how convenient
Commence Operation Heartbreak Kid!
So the CMC, Gabby, and Smolder have a thing for Spike that's 5 of the 15.
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Maybe Trixie, Marble and Limestone Pie could be additional.
Ain't that the truth lol 😅
Hmm I feel like I know who the secret admirer is but then again I could be wrong but still he's not really helping his situation
This is just my opinion, but what if it’s not a secret admirer but secret admirers?
Ohhh yeah that is a huge problem there😰
Ok, let’s say it is spike, now that he knows their plan he could easily find a way around it.
Upstairs
Was whoever the secret admirer even trying to not get caught?
i feel like i know who the admirer is but im not gonna say it until the next chapter
Question: is the story taking place in ponyville or canterlot because you say they are in the crystal castle but keep saying canterlot.
I'm sure it spike but again I could be wrong but let see what happens next
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Castle of Friendship. I forgot that the castle wasn't in canterlot. Please refresh my memory on here it is.
It’s... gonna be spike isn’t it?
All griffons: have a name starting with g
Rocky: I’m a bad boy
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might as well throw in Ember and Thorax while you're at it
and imma like the harem even more
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Maybe just Ember.
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When I say, "not a long wait", it usually means less than or a full week.
Wow, imagine being in love with twelve other girls.
Spike become lincoln loud
Its lovely in seeing Spike getting a harem there.
Wonder how Luna and Celestia would react?
Definitely seeing a reaction from Cadance due to her being the princess of love there.
Boy Spike hope you got a hell load of stamina
Now when I think about it, who would actually want a harem?
¿sequel?
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Nope, sorry, buddy.
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:(
This story was so cute i loved it and don't care what other people say i love this story and its ships
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Yeah and the rest of the money is gonna be for the children they have
This is a good story but could use a once over by a editor and some polishing on some parts. Overall a good story with an interesting selection of love interests.
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Why do you ask that?
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Because, it seems like one of those questions are obvious, but I wanna see how many actually put some thought into their answer.
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Well it certainly is good for those who love more than one person and it keeps people from fighting over you. If you love just one person than don’t make a harem.
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Yeah, but I feel like it wouldn’t be that simple to choose. I feel like it requires more thinking.
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Nah he’s more Cody from Total Drama.
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Yeah it’s a bit unrealistic in my eyes.
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That’s true, but who knows? Maybe there’s someone out there with twelve girlfriends.
I love it! But was also hoping Ember would've been part of it XD. Still an awesome story!
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That why we here in this website
I'm sorry, but... I just can't buy this. He writes love letters to all the females in his life, never mentioning to each how he also has his eyes on a dozen other girls at the same time, but they don't mind? Nope, can't accept that. I know the fandom makes Spike into a god, but come on. The story acts like being with Spike is an honour to each and every one of them, even Spike acts like his time and attention is something they need to earn before they deserve it.
Nobody ever points out stringing several people along is a bad thing. The only thing called out is how horrible it is that only one can be with Spike, and the rest live with the pain of not being with Spike—by Spike! Like he's such a wonderful, super-special being that a fate without him must be the worst thing in the world. That's pure arrogance. Does he actually deserve any of them? That "harem hoard" excuse doesn't make it better, that just creates emotional blackmail because now they MUST all be okay with being his little harem wives.
Sorry, sorry. I know, I'm ranting here. I just feel like the story does everyone a disservice; Spike by not addressing what he did in playing them all (and yeah, that's exactly what he did!) and the rest in just happily accepting that they will be just another feather in his cap.
Is this a troll fic?
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Nope.
But what about the 13th secret admirer Spike's into. The 13th admirer
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Smolder: Yeah, even if Spike was into Raven, she would’ve been too busy to spend time with him, being Celestia’s assistant and all. Plus, he overheard Raven saying how she didn’t “give a damn” that Chrysalis mocked him in his Grave and how we beat her up for it and, needless to say, he was not pleased. He had seen that whole confrontation and beatdown and felt that even though he wanted to give her the benifit of the doubt, there was no good in her.
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Raven: Wow! You must be a mind reader or a good guesser, and remember this is an alternate universe different from yours so anything can happen.
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Just like your cannon story.
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Smolder: Hmm, true, but you have a lot to make up for if you want to be on his radar. Not going against his final wish to forgive Discord, he says, would be a start.
Next time, just write something like:
"After recounting her experience to her friends,"