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Normally I'd question if you asked the original author if you could "fix" some part of their story. But Mythril is, sadly, no longer among the living, so...
Why did people hate the original story so much?
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Because in the TRUE ORIGINAL. Sunset was basically rape and the principals didn't care how much they were hurting her.
In the end, Sunset rather go through with her 2 months detention than continue with that form of punishment.
Yay! So glad to see this fic back, looking forward to the read!
For those who want to see the full version of the cover image, check out 1642186 on Derpi.
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Okay, this time the downvotes are definitely just people bullying you. I would have been okay with the long description joking that they couldn't contact him on account of his untimely death that they swear they had nothing to do with, but some kind of explanation of the circumstances would be appropriate.
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Looks like the author, again, decided they needed to fix a part of someone else's story. And their comments on that story came two years after we lost Moth. So...
nice work
Nice one , and when come next chapter, out of curious
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Working on it now. Should have it out this week.
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oh ok and take your time
nice work
Any idea when the next update will be? I can't wait to get into the good stuff!
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Tomorrow probably. It depends.
can't wait to see more
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I figured I wouldn't get the next chapter out today. I don't have long till I need to leave for work. Though I'm almost done. I still got a long way to go before I'm finish.
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OK, but why did the author give negative feedback to his own story?
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Check out the story yourself Here and read the comments.
nice work
Damn... a new chapter already and it's over 18k words. haven't read it yet but I'm gonna take my time and enjoy this
Are you taking suggestions for 'games' for other characters to play with Sunset?
I have some ideas for the EG5, Trixie, Wallflower, etc.
I also have some for Celestia and Luna.
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The Humane 5 are all covered for! But what your idea for the other 2?
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Well, just in case you feel like it later on, here are the Humane 5.
AJ
Bondage, mainly tying Sunset up with her lasso, shibari style.
Cowgirl outfit: Leather chaps, vest and hat, high heels.
Dash
Erotic Exercise: Working out in nothing or revealing outfits.
Rarity
Sub-costumes/outfits; maid, student, nurse, harem dancer, cheerleader, etc.
Bling-harness. A harness made of a series of gold-chains, with various types of jewelry, such as rings, bracelets, nipple-ring/clamps.
Fluttershy
Animal play, with Sunset wearing various types of animal ears and buttplug tails.
Sunset only makes animal sounds.
Pinkie
Human food-table
Human art canvas(body paint/writing)
Cosplay(Superheroes, etc)
Trixie
Sexy magic rehearsals, such as 'disappearing clothes', magic panties that have the wearers share what they feel 'down there', magic gloryhole(a box with a hole that is somehow connected to one of Sunset's holes, used with Futa Trixie).
Wallflower
Pseudo-exhibitionism: Doing it in her secret garden.
Sunset wearing hidden toys, such as vibes, anal-beads, nipple-vibes, which Wallflower activated and alters at random times, such as during class or at the mall.
Celestion
Equestria role-play, where she acts as Princess Celestia.
Old-school Detention(ruler-spanks)
Luna
Nightmare Moon: A 'secret identity' of Luna's, while in areas where she might be recognized, where she wears a disguise, with a wig/contacts/etc. Sunset acts as her gimp, which hides pretty much everything, with her body-shape still being revealed, by how tight her catsuit is, along with a mask which hides her hair and eyes, with an O-ring.
Potions(used on Sunset)
Nipple/Clit extension. Extends them to about an inch.
Orgasm-Urination: Causes her to pee whenever she orgasms.
Misc/Tool/Group
Vacbed
Cock-cage/vibe combo(When Sunset is given the Futa Potion)
Flasher(Trenchcoat, high-heels, and nothing/little else).
Holiday Costumes(Christmas, Halloween, etc)
Enema
Inflation/Preg-play
Fisting, single and double.
Thoughts?
Typos aside (there were a lot of them), this chapter was hot as fuck! Shit like this is my jam! Since Sunset pretty much gave them permission, I'd love to see the sisters punch her a bit during their fun. Anyway, hope there's more to come!
Dam, can’t wait for the next chapter, I kinda hope that down the line, Sunset, Celestia, and Luna can have a deal about their alone time together, and be somewhere else
You should probably delete the old stories
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Can i ask you a question, Why do you comment on a story you don’t like and not just ignore it?
Sorry if I sounded rude in this comment but I’m genuinely curious