Warning: The following story is currently unedited and follows more of a Twilight Zone episode.
What you are about to witness is a nightmare. Her name is Cozy Glow. Though she may be young, she is a genius manipulator, strategist, and child actress who has conned herself into the most significant role of all. She will be our guide into a world where “truth” and “lie” no longer have meaning. Where the darkest Machiavellian instincts are given free rein; and tolerance has become a thing of the past. With no one to balance out her newfound power, Cozy Glow can shape Equestria in any way she pleases, by whatever means necessary. Yet, this young tyrant will have to deal with the fallout of her own making. She will have no outside help within her borders… of The Twilight Zone.
Just reading the description but I'm old enough to remember watching The Twilight Zone on TV.
"It's A Good Life" (Jerome Bixby) S3 E8.
The reason she never learns is that everything is looped over and over. Twilight is not even trying another way to make her understand, just using the same lesson, til the end of time. And the worst part is Cozy does not even remember it. Every living being learn from mistakes, and she cannot learn anything if Twi keeps erasing her mind
It's insanity to do the same thing over and over, expecting the results to change. If you want a different outcome, you need to modify conditions of experiment.
One would think that Twilight would know this as somepony with passion for science.
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If I change how the very beginning and end start, would either of you be satisfied?
And if so, how?
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don't need to change anything my friend, this is just my opinion
don't let a crtitize comment afect your story (unless its a Multi-chapter story)
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Believe it or not, I’m not against changing it, just so long as there is there a good reason behind it and, more importantly, how to do it.
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I'm only criticizing Twilight's in-story actions, not you for writing her doing those actions. Sorry for not being clear on that.
Hmm, no mirror, but I can see some of the nods to that episode.
And for better or worse, Twilight's showing them more mercy than I would
Oooh, I liked the twist at the end. Rod Serling would be impressed indeed.derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/8/2/689199.png
(Also, appropriate related song.)
That was a interesting story.