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Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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Pipp Petals may be the number one livestreamer in Equestria, but when a new streamer appears, everything will change.


Written for (and third place winner of!) the Third Cozy Glow contest.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 39 )

Okay this is a pretty interesting start of a story so it looks like some of the Pegasus are still searching around the old town and I'm assuming that's Ponyville which it is kind of sad seeing the place so run down but it looks like they found a necklace and queen Haven could not wait to show this to zipp and the sound from her she is not too enthusiasm about it but she's going to work because for her mother but she wanted to give it to Sunny instead I felt like that necklace could be something but let's see how this will work out by the way there's a new name tag and it called Sunny and her friends the Mane 5 so in case nobody gets left behind

Sage giggled. “Alright. I think I have time for one more question tonight. PlzLeaveMeAlone775 says, ‘My dad keeps barging into my room, like all the time. I’m not even doing anything wrong, but I’d like a little privacy. But he doesn’t care. He just says stuff like “his house, his rules”. How do I get him to stop?’.” She exhaled, puffing out her cheeks. “Golly, I picked a hard one,” she murmured. “So first of all, you’re completely in the right here. You’re your own pony and you deserve basic respect and boundaries. Unfortunately, if you’ve brought this up and he keeps brushing you off, you might not get that until you actually move out. And when that happens, stay firm. After all, by his logic, your house, your rules.”

Golly?! Oh no it can't be 😰

Okay this is pretty interesting again so somewhere in Zephyr Heights was getting bored so he checked on what is live streaming and apparently pipp is not on yet but there was another streamer name Sage wisdom and she's been giving out some advice even though some of them were kind of odd but apparently there was a couple of ponies showed up and everything but there is something up with that girl meanwhile at Maretime Bay Sunny was just working then zipp gave her a present Apparently one of the books from the old time and it could be the Friendship book talks about the history of the friendship lessons and yeah these are pretty interesting so far

Cozy Glow!!?

That is a shock

It looks like things with that Sage wisdom is giving out some attention to some of the ponies especially with her advice to the viewers and everything and even pipp wondering about that as well but she went to find sunny and talking with her about something about the tea sets or something like that but Sunny even explained about this whole Buck ball and he really want to try out the sports game but the problem is they have no idea how so they basically wing it out which that usually always happens

Hitch gave it a try, bouncing it off the ground. Zipp kicked it back, where it ricocheted off Sunny’s outstretched hooves, off a rock, and right into Hitch’s face.

Ohh right to the Head

Good story i need to say, but the thing with Cozy taking “bodies”… could be better, but at least you had a good idea.

Overall I think 7,5/10

So looks like the day start out pretty interesting for pipp because it looks like somebody outshine her on the live streaming normally it doesn't really bother her but she couldn't help it and it looks like sunny and the others are just hanging out even checking out some of the old stuff from the past that Queen Haven found preparing for the opening of the museum and that sounds pretty cool and it looks like Queen Haven really wanted to talk with her daughter

Huh things are really getting strange lately so it looks like pipp don't worry about the numbers that she's getting and apparently zipp was kind of off lately wait but then pipp ask her mother if she felt unpopular and she did give out some encouraging words to pipp but it looks like she's been kind of concentrating to zipp with her lessons and everything and pipp could not help but feel a little jealous I wonder what's going on

Pipp is feeling a little down after hearing this Sage wisdom getting so much views she's getting very jealous about this so she decided to go out for a little while and the others wanted to see who the heck is this Sage wisdom she's been giving out some interesting advice and even try to be very sneaky again something suspicious about that girl

“I just… I don’t know,” Sunny said, uncertain of her words. “I don’t think she’s doing anything ‘wrong’. She’s just… I don’t know. If everypony listening to her just did the first ‘nice’ thing she said, then yeah, that’d be great. But the way she jumps right to the ‘here’s how to manipulate others into getting your way’ is just… It bugs me. She’s clearly very good at it.”

I knew that sound familiar it's that crazy kid again but how is she even here

Well apparently the other is starting to realize something about this whole Sage wisdom and the way how she's been giving some advice some of them are kind of manipulative and they really don't like how she gave them like that there's even times that Queen Haven despite not wanting to do it but she wanted to ask some advice from Sage wisdom but apparently she just basically told her to back off of her daughter and she didn't even give her any more advice and Greenhaven really wanted to relate to her daughter but she really don't want to push it too much and Zipp why was she been acting like that this is getting really worried some

Talk about twist after twist. Gozy Glow proves she's the most dangerous. Thank goodness Pipp smacked Sunny in time or that would've been it.

So, with all the logic she could muster, Izzy jammed the phone in her mouth to hide it.

What the okay unless that phone is very small or Izzy's mouth is pretty big

Pipp pulled the socks higher up her legs. Her heart pounded. She couldn’t believe she was actually doing this. What would her mother say? Zipp would probably make fun of her, or be supportive, or probably both.

Oh pipp come on this is not how you get attention from your viewers

I’m kind of hoping that if you continue this story that you keep Cozy Glow as a major character maybe as a unwilling mentor for the M5(as in she gets freedom in exchange for helping them)

Fifi backed away slowly.

Oh my gosh Fifi it's not what you think lol okay that was pretty funny

Oh boy so pipp was pretty desperate to get more viewers and she was going to ask some advice from her friends but none of them do not have live streaming social media so there was only one person and it's that Sage wisdom and apparently she gave her some advice about doing a gimmick or something just to get some viewers and she was about to do that despite this is not really her style luckily Izzy stopped her in time even though why in the world did she had to eat the phone that's just weird but it was sweet of her to help pipp to think what she was doing I like that although they were trying to take off the socks off of her and Fifi came in in the wrong timing and she basically took that out of contact

“You’ll need to be patient. Bad liars don’t like silence. Stay quiet, and they’ll instinctively try and say something to fill the silence and build up their lie. And the more they say, the more information they’ll give up.”

It felt like it was a bad advice

Oh boy things are not going well here it looks like sunny it's been noticing the ponies are basically lying to each other and even the magic is starting to flicker again which that means they're arguing with each other all because of sage wisdom's advice and apparently it's taking effect on everybody zipp is feeling guilty for what happened between her mother Sunny wants to reassure her that's not really her fault that maybe they just need to talk this out better but things really went downhill when Pipp heard from her sister that her views went down all because of Sage wisdom seriously somebody needs to stop her

“Zephyrina Alabastrine Storm! It’s been you this whole time?!”

Hitch looked at the box of popcorn. “Where did you get that?” he asked.

“Mm-mm-mm,” Izzy said to the cadence of ‘I don’t know’.

Yup totally like Pinkie Pie lol

She glanced at the chat, her red eyes flicking over the words there. “Well, the ponies have spoken. I guess it’s time for a name reveal.” She turned to the camera and waved brightly. “Hey, everypony! My name is Cozy Glow.”

Son of a gun and roses I knew it what the heck

Okay I did not see this coming at all okay so sunny was worry about pipp she's been acting a little weird lately but I guess she wanted to find out who is this Sage wisdom and she's been concentrating for almost the whole day while the others were just figuring out how to play some of these games but until pipp figure out who it is and it didn't take too long to find out who that was it was zipp she was Sage wisdom but apparently she's not acting herself lately she's really like giving out bad advice being mean to everybody but pipp knows her sister would never go this far so she's not being fooled apparently somebody is being possessed and it turns out it was cozy glow she came back

Well then this was one heck of a live streaming ever so it looks like cozy glow admitted that she was possessed zipp and the only reason is to see how ponies react to anybody who would listen and apparently she thinks that all the ponies in this timeline do not deserve the magic because they have no idea how magic works she even insult a lot of them just for that sunny and the others tried to stop her as best as they can but she was pretty too tough and cozy glow disappeared once again with zipp body they need to find her and save her

“Not a lot,” Sunny admitted. “She was right. She’s pretty much been scrubbed from the records. I haven’t found anything even mentioning her, so whatever she did must have been pretty bad.”

Trust me you don't know half of it she did try to get rid of the magic before back in season 8 finale but thank goodness the young sux stopped her

So it looks like everybody know what happened during the live stream and Queen Haven really wants her daughter back from that villain but right now they need to figure out how and Ponies are starting to point at each other again but it looks like pipp give out a message to everybody not to give up hope and not letting the fear get the best of us and they had to stick together and it's starting to get the message from other ponies hopefully they will save zipp

And a selfie with Zipp, now wearing her mane in foalish curls topped with a bow, wearing a cheeky smile… as she hovered barely a foot away from Hitch’s hindquarters.

Oh dear God no that look does not look good on zipp you evil little kid

Ok so it looks like pipp message really brighten the ponies up but right now they still have no idea how to find Cozy glow and basically she's been spying on them especially hitch and she really is taunting them so now they had to figure out how to draw her here I hope whatever sunny plan is hopefully it will work

With a frustrated roar, the phone was smashed against the ground.

Well somebody is a little salty

Pipp hovered behind her, holding a frying pan. She quickly snatched the amulet off Sunny’s neck and kicked it aside, then turned to the camera she still held. “Check it out, ponies. Friendship can overcome anything, and we will never let anything or anypony drive us apart. Pipp, Pipp, hooray!” She tapped the screen. “Alright, is that it? Stream ended? Ok. Good.”

Never mess with a frying pan

Wow that was pretty Epic so it looks like sunny and the others hold a sporting where all tries playing together and even try to draw out cozy glow where is a little bit of insults and even her subscribers are disappearing and she doesn't like it too much and now she wants to get even with them and they tricked her but unfortunately cozy got other plans she even possessed Sunny and everybody put up a good fight but she was still too powerful especially with Sunny's but Zipp use the clouds to produce a lightning even though it hurt cozy but it hurt herself as well and cozy was about to finish her off with a rock my goodness she really is crazy but luckily pipp use the frying pan to strike her and they finally defeated her now that is another good live streaming way to go guys

“I think we should hide it deep underground in a secure vault with multiple traps and under constant surveillance,” Zipp said.

Yep and this time she won't get away

Wow I got to say this is a pretty interesting story so it looks like everybody was pretty exhausted after they stopped cozy glow and it looks like they're going to keep that amulet away from the public since cozy glow knows how to use magic much better than everybody else which that's a pretty dangerous combination and Zipp really got scared so now she got everybody with her at all times until she is over it but hey she won't be alone whatever villains they're coming towards them they can do it together again this is a pretty cool story nice way to see the villain again keep up the good work

Sunny sighed. “I hate to say it, but she was right. We know nothing about magic. We didn’t know any of this was possible.”

Maybe but you know what sometimes we just had to learn from scratch even though there's going to be some ups and downs

jmj

This deserve way more views. It's funny and well written. So far, at least.

jmj

Wonderful. I really enjoyed this story.

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