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Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.

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When friends have a little cider, sometimes internal thoughts become external. When Applejack and Rainbow Dash both accuse each other of being lazy, they decide to settle that argument by recruiting changelings to imponyate each other.

Originally written for AppleDash Competition 3.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 19 )

Best chapter ever!!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh:

It was nice but very short.
all this chapter could be in one and there wouldn't be any loss of quality

I'm trying to think of things to say other than that I continue to love your dialogue more than the dialogue of literally any other writer on this site.

If I had anything else to say, I guess it's that I wish you were a little more careful about pacing and description (and, in the case of other fics, finishing things) so that I could add your stories to my top faves. :ajsmug:

Whose idea was this, anyway?”
“Yours,” Applejack pointed out.
“Whose idea was it to listen to my idea?”
“Also yours.”
“Ugh!” Rainbow repeated, letting her head slam against the floor. “This bites!”

Ooh, burn.

“Yeah. Mom and I didn’t exactly get along well, either. Why do you think I moved out the day I hit legal age?” Rainbow asked rhetorically.
“Oh,” Applejack said, understanding in her eyes now. “That’s what that whole ‘birthiversary’ thing was about.”

:pinkiegasp:
Headcanon!!!

By the way, kind of is two words. You wrote kindof twice.

I like the Changelings.l really do :pinkiehappy:

*Grins* Interesting start and ouch that line about Berry from Rainbow.

Very cute fun, but a bit confusing. You're spot on for dialogue as always, but it was a bit rushed and messy in spots.

Ithri and Remi make this story. :twilightsmile:

A nice story, some interesting discussions, but Ithri and Remi really are the saving grace of this story.

I absolutely adored them and really, really, really would love to see another story (or several) involving them.

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Thanks! fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/365/c/a/clapping_pony_icon___changeling_by_taritoons-d5ps0kg.gif
I can't promise their return exactly; but two changeling twins named Ithri and Remi will be back to help Twilight adapt to her new role as changeling queen in a later story I have planned.

Remi and Ithri tried to steal the show. But overall cuteness helped AJ and Rainbow keep the spotlight on them.

A fun story and a cute ending.
Nice job :ajsmug:

This is gonna end well.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Hahah. Figures Twilight would be unable to resist knowledge. I bet Chryssie sent the two to her just to make Twilight stop pestering her.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Pfft, at least two lings are sane around here.

Cya
Raziel-chan

These two Cutelings make this story.

Cya
Raziel-chan

This was a really funny and nice story! I love it, and it definitely deserves more love. Thumbs up!

Normally I'd say RD's remark about Berry Punch was a bit OOC, unless she meant it as a joke, but she was drunk, so it gets a pass.

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