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dirty little secret
I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)
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Lovely story with great ending :) Very much in the spirit of the movie.
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Wasn't expecting to hear that!
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You got these characters almost spot on, if not exactly how they were portrayed in the movie. I can absolutely see them doing this and hear exactly how they'd be saying what they said. Very well done, almost wish there was more, but that was great. <3
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I watched the movie multiple times in preparation. Good to hear I did a good job with them. I was worried about writing characters that I wasn't as familiar with.
For some reason, I kept hearing a particular refrain while the gang was getting it on:
Gonna work work work!
Got so much to do!
Well I don't mind the work
'Cause I get to work with you!
That was really good. And clever. I wonder who wrote the porno that they used as, uh, reference material?
Uh, was Sunny expecting to birth a fully grown alicorn like how the book said Pinkie Pie apparently did it?
Nice!
Yeeesh. I hope they never tell those foals how and why they were conceived.
"I was disappointed when you were born, because I was expecting a Princess."
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Well, they were working pretty hard.
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Well, you can thank my SubscribeStar supporters for the clever part. One of them suggested this story idea!
It's in the story. ^.^ Iron Will wrote it.
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It's magic, okay?
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Thanks! ^.^ What's your favorite part?
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I'd assume that -- in general -- most ponies wouldn't want to know exactly how they were conceived.
Most people, too.
This was amusing more than erotic really with a extremely warm, heart heavy ending. I mean, it technically has clop, yes, but if you aren't smiling the whole way through...maybe it's just me? 😉
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Clop that leaves you smiling is best clop. ^.^
Funny and heartwarming, with a nice cloppy core. And yeah, you got the characters really right!
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Always love it when mares are impressed by their stallion's size, that's my jam!
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Good to hear! ^.^
The clop was more like a cherry on top of a delicious desert. The lead up was a multitude of flavors all working together to the foreshadowed end. With a great and hilarious twist of a book by Iron Will.
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Heh. Cooking is fun! ^.^
Thought for sure Sunny got a hold of one of Twilight's personal fanfics.
Man, Old-Equestria sure was a weird place.
Imagine if they made a tv show about it!
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I, for one, can't wait to see all the callbacks that will inevitably happen in G5 ^.^
Realizing that your parents had sex at some point is a stock horror scenario.
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Just knowing what position you were conceived in would be ... uncomfortable.
Romantic, raunchy, hilarious and heartwarming.
Perfection
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Oh no!
If I've already achieved perfection, then everything else is downhill from there!
Congratulations, I guess?
I honestly have no idea whether this is intentional or just a typo...
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Don't you go tempting me to write a story series based on this...
There's a lot of disagreement out there on how to pluralize 'pegasus'.
Just be thankful I didn't use "Pegapodes".
(Usually, I just go for 'Pegasus ponies' instead. Guess I forgot to this time.)
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Okay.
Maybe later though...What's the chance he is a direct descendant of
?
I was looking for a ponified version of the That's the Neat Part, You Don't meme, but couldn't find anything...
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Sunny: "I may or may not had read this part over and over for hours. Just for science, of course..."
Well, we don't want to take any chances, do we?
Did she just imply... Of course she did.
Because that's what friends do!
Sounds like a perfect ending to me.
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
Alternative ending:
Hitch couldn't take it and refused.
The mares were disappointed, but accepted his decision. As such they searched and ultimately found a different stallion willing to do his part: Sprout.
The good news: they succeeded, and he gave Sunny an alicorn.
The bad news: it's this alicorn, and she takes great inspiration from the past endeavors of her father:
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I have no idea where you found that alicorn, and I'm kind of afraid to ask...
11287924 Don't worry, I'll just give you the answer without you having to ask.
This alicorn appeared in the special "Make your Mark". Her name is "Shadowy Alicorn".
(No, I didn't made that name up! That's what she's called in the voice credits.)
Here is the relevant scene:
And here are the thoughts of Dr. Wolf on that matter:
(What's the chance this scene gives you inspiration for something?)
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Oh damn... I've been getting out of date and I really need to catch up.
Aight, so who was it that hid the smut so well nopony found it? 😂 Certainly not Twilight, she wouldn't allow such defamation of its pages! 🙃
Magic is as magic does, but in truth half of that was all wrong! It was actually a changeling Royal that performed the swapping energy transfer, fueled by the previously gathered energy (by way of specially modified fertilized eggs kept inside the donors for the week prior) and transmogrified in the power of their love! Or something like that...
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Yeah ... or something like that.
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😂🙃😘
11288336 Update:
It seems her real name had been revealed to be "Opaline". We also got a better picture:
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Some weird theory I saw while writing this comment:
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I'd like to see them try again!
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And over and over and over again, I'm sure! ^.^
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Opaline is... comically evil. Like, Dastardly Whiplash kind of evil.
One wonders what happened to make her so ludicrously stereotypical. Maybe... maybe despite having the ideal body (alicorn) she's just not getting any. Like none. And she can't figure out why, because surely as an alicorn she should be just rolling in sex constantly. But she's not, and so she's angry and so very frustrated, which translates naturally into an awkard, grasping "evil" as a cover for, well... nigh-insurmountable deep-rooted awkwardness.
And now Sunny is boning all her friends and Opaline only has Misty to talk to, and that just makes everything worse! What's Sunny got that Opaline doesn't also have in spades?! Rargh!
Maybe an actual alicorn is what Sunny was missing from her pregnancy ritual...
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I really need to get around to watching that...
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That theory about Misty has of course been proven false, but I still couldn't resist.
Misty: Oh ho ho! I'm the final boss of this game! What a twist! OH HO HO HO...!
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What do you mean? The show isn't over yet...
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Source and Source.
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Okay, so it hasn't been proven false, but from what I've seen Misty seems more likely to wind up rounding out a G5 mane 6 than being a twist villain. I know this isn't the place for canon speculation, but I imagine she'll get her cutie mark during the protag showdown with Opaline, with Misty being caught in the middle but ultimately choosing to stand with her friends.
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To update my earlier comment: Her full name appears to be "Opaline Arcane".
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In case you haven't seen it, Hasbro was nice enough to upload many scenes with Opaline to YouTube:
At least until the 10 minute mark, then they suddenly change the subject.
Also, here the final scene of Chapter 2: