• Member Since 18th Apr, 2013
  • offline last seen 13 minutes ago

B_25


Thanks for Coming In! | Retired

T

Greatness is a desire created by fantasies. Rarity has always wanted to be the greatest fashionista, and Spike the greatest hero. Yet when they get what they want, they find themselves empty instead. The two then enjoy a weekend together.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )
jw278 #1 · Jul 19th, 2021 · · 1 ·

Really enjoyed reading this, thanks :twilightsmile: If ya ever do a sequel please let me know :pinkiehappy: I'd love to see where this goes after the vacation or during it. Tho to be fair it was a great way to end it, sort of leave it up in the air. But I'd still like to see if they find that something better :rainbowlaugh:

Either way thanks for sharing this story & keep up the great work :twilightsmile:

Haven't read this yet but it already looks amazing!

I’ve actually wanted to write a story about routine meaning absolutely nothing for a while. I feel like it’s a very nice story, and one I feel like applies to absolutely everyone.

I particularly like the angle that the story takes with relationships meaning a ton and fame not really meaning anything without those relationships to share it with. Both of these characters are famous, but they’ve been famous for so long that it doesn’t really mean anything to them anymore.

While I feel like the Sparity wasn’t really necessary, I still enjoyed reading this a lot.

:fluttercry: How's the vacation?
:duck: It's on an extended schedule
:yay: How long?
:moustache: Until she's in kinder garden
:moustache::raritywink: We had too much fun on the beach
:facehoof: I should of booked single rooms in the first place... The treasury Department's going to skin me alive.
:moustache: Don't worry we gave the spare room to....
:flutterrage: Discord - Get back in here I'm not done with you mister!
:twilightoops: Why do I get the feeling that magical mutant hybrid babies will soon grow up and take over the kingdom?
:moustache: Why is it always Taco Bell when I get diaper duties?

That was inspiring! :heart:

(And it’s 10x better if you listen to the Howl’s Moving Castle OST on a loop while reading~)

Grammatical errors aside, this is a heartwarming take on life and the meaning of friendships and relationships. What is life, without anyone to share it with? :heart:

B_25 #7 · Jul 21st, 2021 · · 1 ·

10909191
Curse me and my cursed words! Glad you enjoyed the story in spite of it :D

10909191
That's on me; I was supposed to help B_25 proofread this, but some IRL stuff sidetracked me and I wasn't able to provide as thorough of an inspection as I would've liked. I've since looked over the story a second time, and B's made all the grammatical edits I sent him. If there's anything I've still missed, feel free to shoot one of us a PM.

10918155
It's no big deal. Life happens to the best of us sometimes. :rainbowwild: It didn't take away from my enjoyment of the story any. :twilightsmile:

I've thought about editing stories for authors on this site for a while, but I have this fear that it might be too similar to a sizable part of my current job's responsibilities to be enjoyable. It could be one of those things where you'll never know if you like it until you try though.:trixieshiftright:

B_25 #10 · Jul 29th, 2021 · · 1 ·

10918540
We're always hiring, and we pay absolutely nothing!

10918564
I'm tempted enough to give it a shot. :pinkiecrazy:

B_25 #12 · Jul 29th, 2021 · · 1 ·

10919632
You're more than free to edit any of my old stories that catches your eye—goodness knows they need it.

Or, if you want, I can send something new your way once something comes out of the pipeline.

Cheers!

Great fic, it is nice to see the things from rarity pespective, really love the dialogs and the pacing...
You always deliver B_25

Login or register to comment