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Twilight is a newly appointed alicorn, she just got her wings a couple of days ago. Of course, the first thing she did was study them but after doing that she promptly passed out. Waking up the next day, she soon realizes that she couldn't feel her wings. In a panic she checks her medical books, will she be ok?
For the quills and sofas speedwriting theme: broken wings.
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This is delightful! I've done this exact same thing tbh and WebMD always says either I have cancer or I'm already dead no matter what the symptoms are.
Aces! Loved this story! I've done this sort of thing a few times!
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IKR i have done it too!! XD always gives me death as well
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Thank you ^u^
I can definitely see this happening: Twilight being a hypochondriac over the most minor thing.
10428842
Thanks! I thought so too.
Sorry Twi, but even if no one in Equestria saw it, we did, and laughed!
10428854
We did and I am super glad it gave you a giggle ^u^
Another Twily Nana story and its good
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thank you ^u^ yes twilly nana all up in this story
Always fun to search symptoms. Best results I’ve gotten were for feeling dizzy immediately after standing. Pretty sure there were at least two separate fatal brain conditions on that list.
No pins n needles?
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Lol!
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Dang, personally give me anxiety like twilight in this story. Also wow, that is a crazy suggestion for just being dizzy.
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I'm sorry?? I'm not sure what you mean, sorry ^u^
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oh its uh, when a limb gets its circulation cut and falls asleep, and then gets blood flowing again, all the nerves that got numbed begin firing back up again and are hypersensitive to any touch which can be very uncomfortable, in a sensation that feels like pins and needles jabbing at your skin at every movement for a few minutes.
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Sorry I should of clarified I know what it is I'm not sure what your comment means like over all? Do you think the phrase should be referenced or something? Or does it not sound like pins and needles enough??
Cute.
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He meant that he was surprised Twilight didn't seem to feel the nerves firing, just the blood flow.
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thank you!
10430138
OOOOO i see! That makes so much sense. Thank you!! I should prolly add that in!
10430138
Yes! Thank you!
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Sorry for all the miscommunications, (I added it in) ^u^
And THEN Twilight got a clot and then it went into her brain and she died.
And after another impromptu visit to the Astral Plane, she was plopped back with 2 MORE wings!
Hold it. Twilight didn't get the title of Princess of Friendship until Season 4's finale. Not in Season 3's. She only got the title of Princess Twilight.
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I'm sorry but I dont remember if that's right or not. If you are I'm will to change what needs to be changed. But unfortunately my memory is very bad and I just dont know. I can through it into AU until I find an answer if you think that would be best.
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Its 100% show canon that Twilight didn't get the Princess of Friendship title until Season 4's finale. Giving it to her now wouldn't really work to make this story an AU.
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Yes, you were right which is why I changed it to AU since it goes against cannon, I honestly am so poor at writing I don't know how to go back and fix it so it fits with the cannon. I'll play around with the writing a bit and give it my best shot. I'll also take it out of AU since you said it doesn't fit there. I'm very new to all this.
there is the new wording i hope its better maybe
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Her OCD did interfere with the time traveling spell, which created a bootstrap paradox. Since it is already established that her OCD can interfere with magic in creative ways: she could mess up the return to flesh from the astral plane too :D
It may be a bit more dramatic to accidentally return without any wings because the forgot....