Grounds for Wrath

Twilight did not wake up to a bad day. It happened after she hears of something new and absolutely horrifying.

Needless to say, she does not take it well...

(Not what you might be thinking. Or is it? We'll see...)

Note: I make no apologies for this story.

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Anon E Moose

Anon E Moose #1 · Sep 28th, 2018 · · ·

I had a feeling that's what it was leading up to.

Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #2 · Sep 28th, 2018 · · ·

And here I was thinking it was fanfiction. This is even better though.

HB_DS2013

HB_DS2013 #3 · Sep 29th, 2018 · · ·

If it were up to Twilight, she'd try to research a way for her to well, research without sleeping.

Kevin Lee

Kevin Lee #4 · Sep 29th, 2018 · · ·

"I see nothing physically wrong, aside from a large bruise on the back of her head and some blood seeping out of her ears," she said. "Nothing has worked to get her out of this?"
"Not so far, Princess." Applejack replied. "Yellin', makin' noise, Pinkie's loudest party popper...an' even Dash hittin' her on the head didn't work worth a lick." Celestia arched an eyebrow and looked at all of them.

Heh! I got my hands on the first draft of this--and the note from the admins that unless this part was changed, it would have to have DARK and GORE tags

RebelNarrator45

RebelNarrator45 #5 · Sep 29th, 2018 · 2 · ·

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Uh...not what I...what did...how...

DID YOU SERIOUSLY ADD SOMETHING GORY TO MY WONDERFUL TALE????!

I WILL END YOU. SLOWLY. PAINFULLY. COMPLETELY. UNLESS YOU APOLOGISE IMMEDIATELY FOR SUCH ATROCIOUS BEHAVIOUR.

I hope you liked the story!

(I MEAN IT. APOLOGISE!)

Yutah123

Yutah123 #6 · Sep 29th, 2018 · · ·

At first, I thought somepony had defaced/destroyed a book, but when the paper bag came, I then thought that she saw some quesadillas. Decaffeinated coffee, though, I didn't think of that. (Probably because I don't really rely on caffeine except for really important/bad days.)

Anyway, decaffeinated coffee was first made by Friedlieb Ferdinand Runge, but that was for science. The first one for commerce (which also happened to be by accident) was by Ludwig Roselius.

Kevin Lee

Kevin Lee #7 · Sep 29th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Oh, I love the story.

And I apologize for hacking your first draft. Really, I'm sorry.

Kencolt

Kencolt #8 · Sep 29th, 2018 · · ·

One thing that has been glossed over by most previous commentators is this simple, unvarnished fact.

Twilight isn't wrong.

RebelNarrator45

RebelNarrator45 #9 · Sep 29th, 2018 · 2 · ·

9200316
Something about that apology seems off... But I'll accept it.

FOR NOW.

But I am keeping an eye on you, buster!

Block

Block #10 · Oct 1st, 2018 · · ·

I went to Google Search, and it turns out Ludwig Roselius invented decaf.

TheGreatEater

TheGreatEater #11 · Oct 2nd, 2018 · · ·

"How long did ya say she's been standin' like that?" Applejack asked Spike, who had rushed to collect all the Element bearers in a complete panic.

Cap.
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"Oh, I hope we can get her out of this soon!" Fluttershy said worriedly. "I don't like seeing her like this!" Celestia smiled.

move to next line of dialogue.
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"Yeah." Applejack said. "Just what in tarnation got ya in that state, anyhow??" Twilight's eyes flashed dangerously.

same as above.
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Decaf is my mortal enemy. Whoever thought of it deserves to perish horribly.

*dies laughing*.

Same here, whoever invented decaf is the worlds most evil super villain. And needs to be punished as such, honestly. With that ending, I fully get Twilight's reaction.

LunaFan183