30 year old man from California who likes to fight with swords. Author of Successor, Love Mark, and Daybreaker at Canterlot Wedding Verses.
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This story is a sequel to Apologies After the Love Wave
After hearing about how Twilight was captured by Tempest Shadow, Shining Armor pays her a visit to check on her. He also plans to have some words with her friends for abandoning her and hear an explanation.
Part of my Headcanon and Apology Verses.
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I like how Shining didn't get too carried away.
A lot of times it can feel like the characters are mouthpieces for the author's feelings (don't even get me started with many of the Anon-a-miss fix-fic stories) but I didn't feel that here. It really felt like the characters were talking here.
How would he handle meeting tempest
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Dont know, probably not the best at first.
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How can you imagine it
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Him shouting YOU KIDNAPPED MY SISTER upon meeting her.
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Not to mention turning his wife to stone
Rainbow Dash is lucky Twilight didn't tell Shining Armor the part when she did the Sonic Rainboom that revealed the position to Tempest.
Still, why didn't Twilight stop RD from doing the Rainboom? That was stupid of both of them.
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She did try as I recall. The ponies tend to make a lot stupid mistakes.
Yeah I would kind of figured that's how shining armor would react after what happened during the movie I can't really say everybody's are at fault because they should have thought This through And they should have talk before things went South but you know hasbro love this kind of drama
I do think that both parties were at fault (even tough Im a little biased toward supporting Twilight), however the thing that I didn't like about this scene was the fact that Pinkie kept yelling at Twilight and nopony said anything but then the moment Twilight yells back it makes it seems like she's completely at fault.
I would have liked if instead this, it descended into a shouting match with Pinkie calling her out on her action and Twiling venting out all of her frustration and pointing out everything that went wrong only to be interrupted by Tempest capturing Twilight right in front of her friends (it would have make it seem like there was no true winner from this argument wich was the case).
OK just to give a little heads up They didn't really tactically leave her They just want to be in the other side of the island not far from where she is just to give each other some space So they can talk to each other properly Without screaming at each other or pointing fingers or hoofs at each other OK sure the others should have taken this whole situation's very serious Specially the invasion on Canterlot And probably the whole equestria But it didn't help that twilight got too frustrated and not thinking straight despite Yes understandable that she wants to save her home So I can't say who's at fault They all should have thought this through without Jumping in conclusion And again pointing fingers or hoofs at each other who's fault it is Now that's just my opinion I know this could be a couple of people will disagreed with i said but I'm just saying What I think about this whole situation
Bullshit, she already had to deal with the Mane 5 being fools the whole time so honestly they are more at fault.
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Think what you will, but Twilight shouldn't have resorted to stealing.
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I never said Twilight was blameless but she was also at fault.
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Yeah that’s a big issue with Accusation Fics, that’s why I tend to have the characters feel guilt on their own accord or just don’t go too far with the lecturing.
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They were both at fault for the mess. Twilight was trying to find the one thing she thought would help her people and the others weren't even thinking about those poor ponies who were captured or the princesses. No Twilight shouldn't have been stealing but I understand her desperation. The others didn't even try to be serious about the fact that they were on the run and without a home.
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Hi! I'm your biggest fan and also good point!
LOL
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Glad to hear it!
No, it's not. Even if I agreed with the whole wedding issue, this is not the same situation
Love these kind of stories.