This story is a sequel to Apologies After the Love Wave
It's been a few days since the Canterlot Wedding of Princess Cadance and Shining Armor. But the wounds are still fresh on the minds of everypony. The Mane 6 complete their community service to clean up from the attack. They then return to Ponyville where they intend to make things up to Twilight, meanwhile, Shining Armor is on his honeymoon with Cadance but is not able to completely enjoy himself as the words he said to his sister still haunt him. Meanwhile, Queen Chrysalis plots her revenge on them for her defeat.
Featured 11/9/23!
Part of my Headcanon and Apology Verses.
Also now serves a prequel to Luster Dawn New Days of the Magic of Friendship.
Chapters (12)
There are a few mistakes in here maybe have an editor look of it again.
The characters have no emotions, and you do not clarify if there is a dream sequence or not.
It is not clear when the dream sequence begins and when it ends.
You should look for an editor and have them look over the story with you and tell you what you were doing wrong.
apologize with TEARS!! how could you do that to my favorite apple lovers!!
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How does it not have any emotion? Celestia breaks down, seemed pretty emotional to me when wrote it. Though looking back maybe add more on the others.
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Eh, I need to check more throughly I guess.
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Like I said, maybe you should have an editor look over it.
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Eh I can do it myself. As long as I really go over it.
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Also, like I said, there is no clue indicator between a dream sequence and the present day.
You might wanna work on that.
Ohh I mean I guess that's true but I'm sure it was just a misunderstanding
Okay I know it's a dream and everybody gets upset but I know for a fact that Twilight we'll never do something like that even if she's angry well I mean she did tackle Cadence but still
"Nothing you can do can make up for this!" Bright Mac shouted.
Look I know giving a second chance can be very hard to receive and everything especially what happened but it doesn't have to be forever they will always find a way to forgive you just need to take time
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Yeah. You do need to take time to get over the guilt. But seeing as Twilight attacked Cadance that shows she can be wrathful if pushed too far. Applejack is really feeling bad about it.
Nice breaking the fourth wall but in a sad way but I guess this is what happens when they want to have to spice out the show people love drama
Okay wow that is interesting starting over story so we're going back to season 2 and 3 so it looks like Applejack and the others are doing community service after the event of the wedding even though technically it wasn't their fault but I guess guilt really is the strongest feeling of them all and they really want to prove that how much they were so sorry for not believing Twilight even though Twilight felt even guilty about how the others felt horrible as well basically there's no right situation everybody is just an emotional wreck I just hope that they all try to figure this thing out I guess we'll find out next time
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It may not have been their fault the changelings attacked but they could have averted the disaster if they'd listened to Twilight.
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It may be but sometimes without any proof which unfortunately that's always going to be the strong point of it words would not be enough and it sucks but unfortunately that's how it's supposed to be and I remember watching something like that before
Okay that's a little bit excessive but also kind of funny
Exactly you can't just feel guilty all your life it's going to consume not just only you but the people all around you who cares about you will filled guiltiness and it's not very healthy
Just wait in season 9 Twilight will be the princess of Equestria
Well technically it was the changelings (except for thorax) was the one who damaged the city
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Yeah it was kind of a Reference to that episode where she disguised herself in Friendship University. Also Rarity tends to kind of excessive like when she kissed Celestia’s hoof repeatedly, and the drama queen.
The sad thing is it is true because even if you knew they were faking or lying you need proof of evidence or else nobody will not believe you
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Yes but as I said had they listened to Twilight they could have averted it.
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Well just like Twilight said if she just slow down and think about how to tell them that she's a fake without jumping conclusion without any evidence and like I said everybody was at fault but Chrysalis knows how to play her card right until the end
Ok wow that was something so it looks like the girls finally finished their community service and Celestia will make announcement to the City about the reason attack that she have failed them not listening to Twilight and also leading up to the destruction of Canterlot and everybody was pretty mad but Celestia calmly told them that they will make things better for now on and even Applejack and the others make their apologies to Twilight and even Twilight also apologize as well hopefully once they get home they can figure this thing out and hopefully they're guilty conscious will be too severe I guess we'll find out next time
can you bring twlights parents in
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But maybe that could change.
Unfortunately they never made it into the plan I drafted.
Nice job so far.
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Yeah thought it would be nice to go back to building up from my original story.
when is the next chapter coming out
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I managed to get it done last night. Probably sometime today or tomorrow after i edit it. Been busy these past few Fridays and couldn't sneak some extra writing in.
You have two had
Yeah two wrongs doesn't make a right
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That's not a typo.
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Really huh that is interesting
Does she really think that the elements of harmony chose wrong 😕
Are you sure that's how the writing supposed to be writing doubles
And that's why I liked about she doesn't really hold grudges too much even though she has the right to but that's what I liked about these kind of characters maybe I'm just a softy as well
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Yeah sometimes too hads are used consecutively.
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Hmm, that could be changed maybe but I think it works.
I liked it, it show what could've happened imbetween scenes, I like how Luna used her own example, and provided that blame must be shared equally
Yeah sometimes it could be very messy but even with that I'm sure you guys can pull through
Yeah in your dreams chrysalis
Okay so it looks like the main six finally returned back to Ponyville but the other still feels bad for what they did to Twilight even though she keeps on telling them they should not felt that way they were all tricked and yeah it is painful but sometimes relationships can be very difficult without any ups and downs and Applejack told her family about it and they were pretty upset with her but I'm sure they can work this out somehow hopefully they don't have to feel too much of it because hanging on to that guilt will bring nothing but heartache
Riding the coaster with Cadance, her holding his foreleg as she screamed with both joy and fear, not to mention him managing to avoid throwing up on her, or anywhere.
I definitely how I feel every time I ride a roller coaster
I think it's in both ways
Oh yeah the mmmystery on the train that's what I mean you need proof or else nobody will not believe you
Yeah as much as she's right about that she jumped the gun too fast without thinking first
To be honest I wonder if he did discover something was wrong in the show but then he was really mind controlled
Yeah about that....