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Dandereshy
I write sins, not tragedies. Patreon so I can continue doing... whatever it is I do.
Dandereshy
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🎵Tell it to my heart, tell me I'm the only one.🎵
Amazing story, Dander!
Good job
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Thanks so much! :3
Pretty nice, fluffy story. Clop could have done with a bit more description though.
Weirdly enough (as like #50, not that I'm some stifler for counting amazing things or something ) I think the clip was delightfully well-paced. The story's certainly great in terms of setting up the awkwardness and dawning satisfaction of confessing love to another mare - especially a timid one you one feels is far above considering them - and find it bearing fruit. It's a well-planned level of attention to detail and experience that really helps this fic come to its own.
It's also what makes Fluttershy's forwards, while a bit... weird, considering the quick transition to clop, all the more meaningful. It's done in a way I normally don't find myself appealing to, which I believe is why I recognize its effectiveness so well.
Flutters is a very lucky mare here.
And the only one luckier is the mar(v)e(l) who wrote this wonderful piece. Thank you for a fantastic FIMFic, you deserve the top of the featured box. I only hope I meet you there by the end of the day with my recent work.
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Thanks! I'll keep that in mind if I decide to edit the story at all.
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I was hoping I did the pacing well. I tried to make it as realistic as possible. Thanks for reading and liking! I'm glad you enjoyed it and to you I wish you luck with your own story.
Nicely done! Definitely a bit quicker transition to straight up sax (for Fluttershy, imho) but honestly, it’s a one-shot clopfic so that would be straight-up nitpicking.
There’s been a dearth of good clopfics (pony, anthro, or otherwise) with second-best mare so I’m happy this has been added to it!
This was great! I personally would have liked it a lot more if the perspective was written from that of a human, not a pony, considering that it's written from a second-person perspective and I'm a human, not a pony. Nor do I ever want to be a pony. The protagonist being human would have made this much more relatable for me, but despite that I had fun reading this. Well done!
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I will keep your statement in mind for future stories. I'm glad you enjoyed it otherwise and thanks for reading!
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I'm glad you liked it. Thanks a ton!
Er, what? This don't make sense.
"As long as Fluttershy, or her friends, didn't catch you in the act, you could still chicken out if you wanted" - this abbreviation, with an important change, does make sense.
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I will fix that. Thanks for pointing it out.
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While Flammenwerfer is entitled to his preference, there are many of us who would want to be Equestrian, and even if there aren't you should still write what you want. I personally don't like human in Equestria fics unless they're reincarnated as a pony.
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Wdym second? Fluttershy isn't second best anything.
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To Luna of course :3
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Nah Luna is like 7th in my book, after the mane six minus Pinkie plus Rara, but Fluttershy is nearly perfect. Even her supposed flaws are part of what I love about her.