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Dandereshy
I write sins, not tragedies. Patreon so I can continue doing... whatever it is I do.
Dandereshy
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Who made the cover art?
This is a re-make. Either I'm suffering from the Mandela effect or I've already read this EXACT story word for word years ago.
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The what effect?
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I believe you. The effect is real.
8642695
The Mandela Effect. It's basically when you have a memory of seeing or experiencing something that isn't real or didn't happen. Named after Nelson Mandela after many people thought he died in prison. Theorists think that it's basically when something that happened in a parallel universe seeps into our reality and we think that happened. It's just false memories though.
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I call it the Mancala effect.
Not a bad story at all, but it could do with a proofreader to go over some minor issues.
Also, I feel like this could do with an epilogue, either with Fluttershy wanting to give birth to their foal in the place it was conceived, or perhaps they'd go there again a few years later when Fluttershy wants to have another foal in the same place they made their first.
8645804
I also agree for a epilogue.
O sweet Celestia, that's HOT! You sir, have a gift!
Thunderlane being a nice guy? What has the world come to?
Oh hey! Female POV clop! There really isn't enough of this sort of thing...
Please Link the art correctly.
https://orang111.deviantart.com/art/Fluttershy-s-Waterfall-709226050
ThunderlaMe? Wow, stealth insult.
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Somebody caught that finally. I'll be damned.
Wow, I have no words for this
. Except... that was so BEAUTIFUL
!!!
Wonderful job, Dandy! Wonderful job
!
So, my only question is: since she's in heat during this, did she get pregnant?
Also, great story. I love when there's emotion and detail in the characters.
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You know, you're not the first person to ask that. Some have even suggested an epilogue about her and a baby. Perhaps it's something to look into if so many people are curious...
8645804 I really like this idea...both ideas, but especially the second one. Why not both?!
8896535 I just really like stories where the mare gets a foal and a stallion (or a mare with something extra instead, temporarily or not, to make said foal), though doesn't have to be in that order (most of my stories end this way, unless I'm specifically asked not to add it in a commission, or it's anal/oral only).
This story has serious expansion potential, and I'd personally love there to be an epilogue or even sequel personally (perhaps something like Mythic Night suggested below, or possibly just her simply cuddling with him while pregnant, or even not pregnant? Not to impose of course...), but that's up to you if you wanna continue this, or leave it as a oneshot.
Either way, what's here as is has more than earned a place in my 'top faves' category.
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The problem with expanding upon it (with an epilogue, for example) is the audio reading it got. It's already been read, so adding to it would mean it has to be reread.
Also, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Not nessecarily a full re-read. It could just have an additional reading of the epilogue (or sequel or whatever) as a separate video as an addendum. Especially so if you were to post it as a separate chapter, which is usually done with epilogues or other additions.
Please don't take this as me hamfistedly trying to 'force' you to write something you wouldn't want to, it's nothing like that; you're simply presenting problems, and I potential solutions.
You know what I love best about this story? The fact that Thunderlane is a beast and kept pounding her through his orgasm! Anyone who's had sex knows how hard it is to do that! Your body desperately wants to lock up and go over, so the fact that he can keep going means he should be considering a career in porn!