I'm no passing fancy, you know. 🍀🌸
A distraught Sunset Shimmer meets an odd loner, who turns her once fading world upside down.
Now with growing light in her life, she has to work on bettering what she has become.
Or risk losing all she loves again.
Now in a episodic format, takes place before Pony Sunset Shimmer arrives in the human universe.
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This story sounds like it needs an alternate universe tag. Why isn't there one?
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Because it's the main universe, just before Pony Sunset brought her brand of crazy to the world.
This Sunset is the original Human Version of Sunset.
This is pretty well written and definitely interesting, if not a little hard to follow. Then again, I get the sense that there's a lot I'm not supposed to know yet.
I'll be keeping an eye on this 👀
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Yes, it is a story that slowly paints the whole picture.
I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it!
first coment ...
continue please
Oh hey, this is back. Neato!
Juniper sucks. 'Nuff said.
I love Sunset and Wally's dynamic here. I'm always a sucker for Sunset going all super protective big sister when it comes to Wallflower--she's so fragile and precious and pure and needs to be cherished and protected 🙏🙏🙏
Wally's parents not being home makes sense, as do the implications of such a thing. There's no way the girl we saw in the show had a very supportive home life, what with the original version of her song ending with a thinly-veiled hint about suicidal thoughts. Child neglect, unintentional as it may be, makes a lot of sense here.
Definitely looking forward to more. Keep it up!
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Don't worry I am! 💖
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Thank you, yeah I felt that too.
Main reason I wanted to explore this idea of mine, also I agree the dynamic is very fun. Sunset the perfect anchor of strength for Wallflower who is totally a delicate flower.
This was adorable and tugged at the heartstrings in all the right ways.
I can't help but feel like tragedy's about to strike somehow...
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Tons of fun just writing a simple hang out scene.
I guess my one big complaint is the over aboundance of "!?"
Most of them are unneeded as the context tells the reader if the sentence is meant to be louder.
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Ty, edited.
This got noticably darker, gosh. Not unexpectedly though. Poor Wally ._.
Oh btw, her eyes are brown, not dark green.
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Grr, I put dark brown.
Lol, my auto-correct just sneaks stuff In all the Time.
Especially with Bat Mare, if I'm not careful it sometimes shifts to Bat Man.
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Edited.
Ty for the catch, anytime I edit I always miss something.
If it turns out to be Luna parking in the faculty lot, I'm gonna be very impressed and happy for some weird reason.
Yep. That seals it. I am in love with this story.
This is the kind of adorable SunFlower fluff I dream about. They're so puuuuuuuuuuure \o/
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my go to quote all the time. :)
Dang, Wallflower is savage.
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When facing insurmountable odds, one must go all out! Lol.
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Mine too,
Full respect to anyone who can finish that monster I mean for fuck sake I thought the fucking nachos at Tony's were big they serve those motherfukers up on a fucking Pizza Pan
I'm so proud of my baby 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I know this friendship is probably gonna end in tragedy given the story description but Let Them Smooch Dang It. Sunset is the best and Wallflower deserves the best therefore they're perfect for each other and SunFlower is canon. QED nerds qB^)
Interesting, but it's already January
I'm surprised this lives again, though with such a sad and bit weird end. I'm guessing naming this episode one means you'll do a sequel.
However, i must point out that some of the characters don't feel like themselves, mainly Rainbow being rude and specially Celestia being aggressive with her students when they're clearly going through hardships.
I'll wait to see where this story goes in the future.
Interesting premise. I saw you posted the sequel and it piqued my interest. I'll be reading this one!