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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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Marble gonna go Cupcakes on Sugar Belle
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Luckily she's getting action with Cheerilee/Feather Bangs!
What if the roles are reversed?
Her cherry? You mean like how Spike took Gabby's cherry?
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Decided to lay off the maledom for once!
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Cute!
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I imagine Spike and Gabby on their first date only they are being spied upon by his friends.
Good luck *sees all the comments here, and none on mine*
This is fine 😊...
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Building an audience takes time; most of the fics I love have few if any comments and poor ratings. Just have to keep grinding away and practicing, success will come eventually!
Wow nice story.
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Thanks!
Sunburst? Now that's unexpected stallion for Limestone of all ponies. Then again, she wanted to lose her virginity that badly.
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She wanted a sub stallion!
Looks more like a prequel not a sequel... Also a very shor quicky
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Yeah, it is a prequel but so far as I know that's the only way to link it; fans asked me to cover Limestone's virginity loss so this is what I came up with!
Sorry for the short length, but I decided to challenge myself with a 1k fic for the contest I entered. Normally I just write until I run out of ideas or get too bored!
All sex with Limestone is angry sex! Quite an unexpected pair, but it works... at least for Limestone.
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Don't worry, Sunburst enjoyed it too!
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
And make sure to allow notifications from the contest group and/or follow Dirty Little Secret to get the full results and the awards show post on June 9th!
You can also check the current ranking, thanks to garatheauthor's unofficial ranking of the scores that have been publicized so far.
------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Cursing does seem more at home with Limestone's voice. It fits her better than Marble.
-slimy -- I'm not entirely sure whether this adjective is gross in a good way or in a bad way.
-Very short and abrupt, but that's kind of fitting for Limestone.
-A little vague on positions and how things are working, such as how is her pussy dripping onto her asshole when she's right-side up (I think)?
-It's a cute idea to pair Limestone with someone she can dominate so easily.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 62/100
Allure: 33/100
Enticement: 71/100
Immersion: 60/100
Prose Quality: 85/100
Total Score: 311/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
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Just because it didn't take very long doesn't mean it wasn't fun! And you can always go again after a little breather. Your clopfic was the shortest by Fimfic's word count!