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A lowly 'pleb' having sex with Royalty? Gross. This has to be the most degenerate kink I think I've ever heard of. xD 😂
Plankton: Yes. YES! YEEEEESSS! Come to PaPa!!!
I feel this should have a sequel, but thought it's possible, it would be difficult to do another as entertaining XD.
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Not really. He'd just have to get certified by the certified group for the certification of Certificates (and get it notarized by Luna since she seems like the type who'd be a notary) as Royal Heat Sink and bam, he's good to go. Also, she's Celestia. Whose going to tell her no?
Boy, we seem to be running into each other a lot lately. We must be connected in some psychic way!
... I did not consent to this
Really enjoy me some casual lewds, specially with Celestia being so normal about it 10/10
I... never expected this. Despite the title.
Nice
Honestly, I actually really liked the logic Good Fortune uses. Even if it was slightly problematic, I've always thought that the power of just asking someone can get you a lot of things. Granted, this is a very extreme example, but the logic is there.
Good story!! Want a sequel, but will not be too upset if one does not happen.
Though, if you do indeed do a sequel, I wouldn't mind seeing him knocking her up, either hyper or normal. And possibly getting egaged/married eventually.
Also, what kind of pony is Good fortune?
I use a iMac G3 to write and i used to use a top of the line iBook G3 SE at school to do essays until it got stolen last week.
I have the biggest boner right now, and it came from the computer specs. BTW, if your writing machine doesn't connect to the internet, how do you transfer your writings? Thumb drives?
Fun idea, but the sex itself could use some work. It reads as very clinical and plain. And only two paragraphs?
Celestia also seems very disinterested, which is kind of a turn-off. You make it a point that this is the first partner she's had in centuries. Shouldn't the old girl be a touch more into things?
As for Good Fortune, I appreciated his bluntness, but he also comes across as kind of flat and ultimately self centered. He espouses how perfect Celestia is and how bedding her is a dream come true... And then doesn't even ask if she enjoyed herself?
Cute idea, but the execution needs some practice.
It's soundly written.
But blunt and shallow nature of Good Fortune and Celestia's lack of interest in the process are massive turn-offs.
Since Celestia finds his audacity more interesting than his stallionhood, I wonder what the sequel might be. As a side note, I highly doubt that in her millenia-long life as a princess she never encountered someone being as rash and straightforward as this particular guy.
Maybe it is unlikely, but is it more or less unlikely than Celestia granting his request in the first place?
Good stuff.
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Well he is really lucky, and he really wanted to impregnate her. I think his good luck made the spell fail.
your setup also has a starlight plushe right there
staring right into your soul
I liked it. simple, to the point, and honest.
now...is there more?
This was actually pretty good I'm glad I read this. A little sad that Celestia didn't get any pleasure out of it the intercourse I mean but of course how would she.
4.5/5