• Member Since 25th Feb, 2016
  • offline last seen Feb 15th, 2023

Midnight Phoenix


I occasionally write clopfics, but sometimes I'll try something new. I love listening to country and rap music. Pegasi and Changelings are the best.

Comments ( 11 )

Great story mate

This is gonna be good

I like it, :raritywink: This is getting better and better, romantic drama all around, yeah I like that. :rainbowdetermined2: Awesome job my friend.keep up the great work.:pinkiehappy:

I have a distinct feeling that lying will come back to bite him in the ass

Will this story have any M/F sex scenes, implied or otherwise where the woman does most or all of the work?

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Sorry, I forgot to change the status to complete. No second chapter.:fluttercry:

At least Dash is even with him now.

Ill be honest about this.

The pacing's bad.

It escalates too quickly — things don't just go from kissing a guy she just met to a full on 'job that quickly. It seems forced for the sake of plot.

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Yea, I know it was rushed. Tbh Ive been writing this story over the course of two months. Everytime I came back to it, I lost track and I honestly couldnt think of anyway to space the story out anymore. I just wanted to get this over with so I could work a different story already.

She just sucked me off then dipped

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