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3 stories down the latest stories list = irony.

Excellent story my good brony friend....

I was actually wondering if ANYPONY was going to make a Ship Fic between Daring Do and Ahuizotl.... Especially after seeing the new episode and Daring saying, "Aw, Ahuizotl, you know I love you, but I can't give you the ring until I properly propose." SERIOUSLY!!! THAT JUST SCREAMED SHIPPING FUEL!!!! Hell even Rainbow Dash saw the opportunity with this little gem...

You know, while I was reading this, this is like what Rainbow Dash would make a fanfic like this when she did that smug face at that one part. :rainbowkiss:

"Enemies by day..."

...sexists at night!

Fancy seeing you here.

I'm expecting great things out of this. You should make it where either Daring's fans find out about their relationship, or Dash particularly, or Ahuizotl's clients find out. Either way, they get caught

Being honest I think this chapter needs improvement. 2 clop scenes in one chapter doesn't really set the tone for a complex romance, especially when one involves her practically being raped.

I love it!
Next chapter please!!!:raritystarry:

This was a really nice story, but there's one thing that really bugged me in it.

Daring was getting closer and closer to the lava. Thirty feet……twenty…..fifteen…..ten……five…… Suddenly the contraption stopped violently, dropping down a bit to nearly a foot before starting to come back up slowly.

As SFDebris once said, lava isn't like in Super Mario Bros.. There should have been either superheated air or toxic gases coming from that lava. I just personally think it would be better if it wasn't as close of shave as this, that she should probably be pulled back from a higher elevation, but that's just my opinion.

This story is completed or not?

*pokes with stick*
Yep, dead.

call the cemetary

Damn. I wish this wasn't dead...

I thought it was going to have a sad ending but I was happy. Yay! You earned a like a and a moustache. :moustache:

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