• Member Since 23rd Jan, 2012
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DarkRyu


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Yes from me

Great! Incest is wincest. But Mac/Dash is fine too:yay:This story definitely needs to continue. Please, make more.
P.S. You have my "like"/

Not super into clopfics...but this was pretty good, you should continue it. :twilightsmile:

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Whee! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

MORE!

This is a nice little triangle. I do approve. Please continue. :rainbowkiss: Though I do wonder if Rainbow Dash will continue taking birth control as things grow more heated, and I wonder if Applejack was on the pill at all. :ajsmug:

Well done, this is one of my favorite pairings. Please continue it, I'd love to see more :ajsmug:

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Knocked up ponies are unhappy ponies. :pinkiesad2: So yeah, no impregnation here. I have done impregnation in the past and in some cases it can work. But I generally prefer nice, clean sex. I don't think Applejack would intentionally let her brother finish inside her if she wasn't protected. Same with Rainbow Dash (though I pointed out that she was protected in the story). I intend for all ponies to remain protected in this story. No use complicating things with a foal. Can you imagine how much it would f*ck things up if Applejack or Rainbow Dash got pregnant?

Please sir, can I have some MOAR!?

This is just Awesome!

wow! that was hot. more please :pinkiehappy:

I must have more! INSTAFAV!!!

:pinkiecrazy: There better be more, or I will send Slender after you.

:pinkiehappy: I love it!

Yours truly... NecromancerX69

Ps... :pinkiecrazy: I am watching you from now on, sleep tight :pinkiehappy:

More stuff, more things.

Absolutely loved it, more please.:ajsmug::ajsmug::ajsmug:

When you will continue it ? I really want to see more of that.

"Can you imagine how much it would f*ck things up if Applejack or Rainbow Dash got pregnant?"

That will be totally adorable and absolutely perfect !:pinkiecrazy:

Would really like to see this continued. :eeyup::heart::rainbowkiss::ajsmug:

I don't like incest stories. This one's an exception. Good job! :pinkiehappy:

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Oh yes, of course. But not being able to make any major edits, I need to think very carefully about everything I write as I write it. So rather than just puking words all over a page to get my ideas out, then heavily editing and modifying it, I try to make a story as I write it. I'm not saying doing it the other way is bad or anything. But I think it shows skill to be able to just write it and be done with it. Don't get me wrong. I would definitely edit the crap out of it my work if I were to actually become a published author. But that's not going to happen so I can take pride in zero editing.

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Oh yes, I'm well aware of this. I didn't say it was perfect. Hence, the reason I pointed out that it was written with zero editing or revisions. Maybe one day I'll get to the point where I don't have to edit and have a 100% perfect story, but I doubt it. The point is, I just make it up as I go along. No outlines. No changing situations or characters. And no modifications of any kind. Though if there's a terrible typo that makes a sentence not make any sense, I might fix it (though I did none of that with this particular story).

... Continue...

Please continue.

Continue, please...

Yeah, the moment Rainbow revealed her plan, I knew what was going to happen; and I was disappointed. Applejack was right the first time. Once Mac learned the truth, he'd have felt betrayed and used.

I desire more

So cute! And the way they tricked him was fun and creative. I'd love to see more of this.

Rainbow Dash totally deserves a threesome for that :rainbowkiss:

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