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Marezinger Z
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Marezinger Z
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really hot
good job
I'm not a fan of anthro but the pairing catch my attention enough to at least give this story a try.
I feel like you've probably been downvoted more for the m/m pairing than for the incest (and for both of those far more than any real quality issues), but I thought it was surprisingly sweet and well-written. You do have a few moments where I had to pause and ignore the fact that dicks don't work that way (refractory periods are usually on the order of 20-30 minutes, longer the older you get; there's also a bit of Tab A -> Slot B), but honestly, you have lube involved so you're still doing better than like 70% of fanfic. And there's feelings, which go a long way toward... ah, easing the way, ifyouknowwhatimean.
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Thank you for the input. If you're correct about the downvotes then I guess I can understand, although the story advertises the content so I would think reader's would know what they are getting into. Although I'm still new around here, so if there is any existing biases for this type of material, I have no clue. Even so, given that this is my first go at something like this, I'm glad that overall people are enjoying the story. I always try to give my 'porn' a heart, so knowing that is getting through is great.
Bra so good
To the author - so after reading another fic then saw this story in new or popular section & thought ''ooo i'll check out that one later.''
then Saturday comes around i'm like ''alright let's go/read!''
4 someone who doesn't write m/m fics you did a very awesome job...omg thanks for doing something that no author has done before!:)
p.s: also for writing night light having an open sexual relationship with shining armor (instead of a being forced/abusive one. there's an old fic I read way back on this site & still exists.) spike's an added bonus...I love that dragon to bits! he's one of my favorite/under-appreciative characters in the mlp show as well as flash sentry...please don't hate or bash me for liking him.
lastly all of this was meant to be written on Sunday but being the person i am got sidetracked and i'm giving my thoughts a day later.
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Thank you, I appreciate that. Writing out of your comfort zone is always a 'hit or miss' deal; so seeing that this story is being well received is a great feeling.
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To the author - no problem. just hope to see you around to read my story that is...whenever i get around to publishing/finishing it
p.s: I don't want to give out any details, so PM me.
this was written like about several hours ago!
I’m more drunk tonight than any night I’ve read for this contest, but that doesn’t change the fact that this fic’s writing style is intolerably boring, lacking any sense of depth and being little more than mechanically competent. Try harder.
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Well, sorry you didn't care for it. But given that "boring" and "lacking depth" are baseline, subjective opinions that stem from sheer taste; I see this more as an instance of my style simply not appealing to the taste of reader rather than an instance of not "trying" hard enough.
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Yes, THIS. A good writer accepts that what subjects he writes about aren't going to be everyone's cup of tea. A great writer though, knows that there's a difference between people who do not like your work because your writing is bad, and people who dislike your work because they don't like the subject matter. Which just confuses me and makes me wonder "...then why bother reading it when it's something you don't like?" You don't like the subject matter? Then DON'T READ IT! It's that simple.
These are the same type of people who immediately leave 'thumbs down' ratings merely because "GRRRR! STOP LIKING WHAT *I* DON'T LIKE!" But you are stronger than those types of people. Thank you for writing this; I've always loved ShiningLight slash. ^_^
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Glad you liked the story.
I appreciate that, thanks.
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Any plans for a sequel?
Since those don't exist in EQ, it feels a lot like a nod to the audience
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Since this was a one shot and an AU, I just placed the story in a modern setting; pretty much all my anthro stuff exists in a contemporary world similar to our own.
I faved this awhile ago but just decided to read the comments. I loved the story wholesomeness and the sexy parts (i may or may not love shining in briefs <3 bulges) especially since it's incest.
There is one thing I'm confused about. The whole sex scene happens without any care about what their wives think nor at the end. It's wierd to say "I miss them so much" then have the three fuck and nothing is mentioned of them except the advice. (And the comments NL makes but yeah...) I kinda want a sequel not just for the porn but also for this reason.
Also for shits and giggles, Shining never took off his undies just pulled them down :3
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Thank you. About all I can say about your questioning of the sex scene is that this was designed to be a one shot for a contest and when I do write something like that I don't really focus on the 'before' and 'after' of the scenario. I wanted to make an appropriately dirty story but also contextualize in a more wholesome way; I was always really happy with how this turned out even though I got a POS for a judge, and to be honest I've thought about writing a sequel but given the way I approach these types of stories I kind of ran into the same conundrum you brought up. I don't really know where to take it narratively in a way that just doesn't dismiss or downplay the aftermath of what this night of fun for them means in the long run.
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Writing porn for the sake of porn isn't a bad idea. Might even come up with some idea if you wanted to keep the story. You could just keep it that way where it's downplayed/dismissive as it may be no big deal. Like the hundreds of stories where Cadance doesn't care and all that lol. Or hell the girls are doing the same. Just some suggestions, hope I didn't offend.
Also yeahhh TEB was a bit harsh and...I don't understand how that counted given his...circumstances...
That was pretty great
I hope we see more Spike in hot stuff in the future