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I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

Comments ( 14 )

This is ok because it’s 50% masturbation because shining is 50% his dads genes

And Cadence just sitting there enjoying this shit?
.....................ok I'm in. :pinkiecrazy:

sigmund #4 · July 7th · · 1 ·

Hoping for a sequel

SamPines #5 · July 7th · · 1 ·

Everything you wrote is beautiful in their own way. Keep up the good work man :D

*wonders if he should sugest the cuckolding and voyerism tags for this too*
cadance likes to watch, who knew.

Is this an incest fic? Cause my brain tells me it is...

Nomen #8 · July 7th · · ·

this was one of the most intense clopfics i have ever read

Willsaber #9 · July 7th · · 2 ·

Ohhh yeah I cummed

Please more!

Good stuff!

Shining came out the doorway as well, with both stallions standing at the porch and looking around with alarmed expressions. While the doorway was left open, Cadance quickly slid past the two so she could sneak into the house unnoticed. Her mind was throwing multiple cartwheels in her head, and she wasn’t able to even think about why she did such a risky move in the first place. However, if Shining Armor was really carrying a secret big enough to make him worry about divorce, Cadance would’ve never forgiven herself if she didn’t try to learn what it was herself.

She should have thrown a muffin at one of them. It works for Agent 47 as a non-lethal attack, after all.

This was fucking great. It had only one sex act and you rocked that scene. So much visceral imagery, excellent pacing, delightful tension and conflict. I dare say this is one of the best contest entries I have seen for Incest is Wincest since the group started anew earlier this year. Please write that second chapter. You left me wanting more, and that alone is the highest possible praise I can give a piece of clopfiction.

To the author - Oh my god i've been hearing about this fic since i don't know how long ago that was! many things stopped me in the process of trying to finish reading it & now want to comment...
props to you for writing a positive, non-abusive m/m incest clop fic (there's not a lot of gay incest fics are very rare and a few in-between. while mostly dominated/known on this site are straight incest clop fics are cliché & boring. i mean no offense to other authors who do write those!)

p.s: congrats on being in 3rd place & possible sequel

Please continue this!

I've been waiting for someone to do basically this exact scenario for so long, and you did it perfectly! The buildup and tone were just right. Shining's relationship with his dad was so adorable. And Cadance's conflicted attitude about the whole thing was great. You kept it interesting all the way through. I really want to see where this goes. As long as it still focuses on the characters and the conflict, without the story turning into just "and then the three of them fucked" for the whole thing.

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