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RisuUmbra


I’m not Adorable! I’m adora-bloodthirsty... there’s a difference.

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Anon has lived in Equestria for a year now and has a prospering business as an Event Planner but he would throw it all away for one mare Pinkie Pie, he would even give her his heart which would be hard as she hates his guts
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Contains Pink ponies, brotherly dragons, a shipping cult, and a wild purple smart... enjoy!
Featured 10/11/2020

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 37 )

Why does Pinkie hate him?

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You’ve seen her almost go insane when her friends wouldn’t go to her parties and get mad jealous when she though cheese sandwich was replacing her so this isn’t far off of what would happen if she didn’t understand immediately

Break up your paragraphs more. Or at least make them shorter. Just a little friendly criticism. I still like the premise.

I love this please make more!!!:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks for the tip
I’ll gladly take it into account :twilightsmile:

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I’m so happy your enjoying it!
I’ll happily make more :twilightblush:

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i think because pinkie thought she got dumped?

Some typos, gather the others, not the other XD, well, good chapter, now things will start to heat up

I been looking forward to this

The ending has me hyped lol

I'm intrigued to see how somebody writes a Pinkie Pie that hates somepony.

I never would have expected such a cute pony to hate anyone. Im still gonna rub her belly.

Please vruh,an update?

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Sorry life has been stupid but the next chapter will be up soon so don’t worry :scootangel:

Not bad, would be fun though to see the next chapter showing Pinkie Pie's point of view as she had lunch and talked with Anon; here's hoping it will show Pinkie that Anon is not a bad guy or worth her hate?

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Yeah having a different view would be good. Love to see Pinkie's side to all of this.

Thanks for the chapter! Dont worry, we understand ... I just had 3 midterms today.:pinkiecrazy:
Take aaaaaaaaall the time you need.

Holy run-on sentences, Batman!
Good idea, but you should probably focus on sentence structure.

This needs a few rounds of proofreading. You have huge chunks of sentences that should be multiple smaller ones, no commas where there should be commas, and multiple characters talking in the same paragraph.

Woot your back! Thanks for the update!
I completely understand. Back to college myself and its definitely been a rough start.:pinkiesick:
Good luck with classes!

lol did you just give pinki a reality check? xD

Ooooo! Like it.

Can't wait to see what happens, thanks for the update!

I think it's a good chapter. Keep up the good work!

Oof...... well.... damn. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

Wow, Pinkie feels neglected and now she is exhausted and brain-addled, the poor girl needs a confidence boost

Oof, well the main conflict has arrived! Hopefully the romance will ensue!
Thanks for the update, and take your time! School comes first!

Yay, new chapter!!!

It's all good. Love this chapter and.. I don't like Pinkie.. she is a meanie face

OOoooo. Ivy's a Dryad~ Cool!

I really want to know more about Ivy's backstory

It's been awhile since I've actually looked forward to updates on a story good read:moustache:

The song at the end ruins the chapter for me

Interesting conclusion, to say the least

why did you make Pinkie Pie the one who is a jerk to anon. He loves her but she doesn't for a dumb reason makes her unlikable. It would be more intresting if Pinkie had a crush on Anon but he hates her guys

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