I like writing, plain and simple. I've been doing it for at least ten years, and I love sharing my work with others. Mostly clopfics here, but some other stuff too.
My life has been a less than average one so far. Struggling to hold a job, few friends, and the guilty pleasures of gaming and surfing the web. But that is soon to change...
For one trip to the mall was the single event that threatened to change my life for the better. That event, and the decision following, allowed me to meet... her.
The woman whom I now love, and the woman who truly cares for me, and I for her.
Sometimes, an implied lie can start something amazing.
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i'm loving this story already
8883130
I'm glad. I'm already working on chapter two!
8883163
glad to hear it
Pretty cool. I'm waiting for more chapters and I hope there will be some unexpected twists.
Ooh, I like this a lot. I'll definitely follow this story. Eagerly awaiting more!
Im actually enjoying This so far keep up the good work
8884765
Thank you, I'm glad you're liking it thus far.
this guy is lucky she didn't just call it quits on him
8884987
Well, I wanted him to tell her, but I wanted her to stay with him. I mean, both of Jack's points are valid. A business needs money, but it's also not right to take help away from people who really need it. Although, I think Redheart may be a little biased at this point, since she seems to have developed feelings for him.
8885308
i think what could of happened is that Red heart fakes being angry and pretends to pack up to leave and jack asks what he can do to fix it and Redheart says a date at a fancy restaurant
8885321
Actually... I rather like that idea. I might change it!
8885330
i'm happy you like it
I like the idea but I think everything happens way too quickly.
cute BOY I met
along with multiple violations of not spacing after putting a period, and one account of re-asking about olive garden
I give this chapter a 7-10 fix those errors easily 10-10
8956492
I transferred this chapter between several formats and word programs. They all said stuff about not having right features, so things might be changed. I went through, and fixed all errors, at least all the ones I saw. Hopefully all of them. Thanks for letting me know!
8956548
your welcome and keep up the good work
this was super cute but if I had to change one thing
that would be
I'd love to call you my girlfriend Jack.”
then jack would reply with something cheese like does my but look big in these pants and they would have a quick laugh
Nice chapter the sudden roommates thing did seem to come out of nowhere tho
9373657
It kind of is. It's been so long since I last did anything with this story, I don't think I'm in the same groove anymore, so it's probably going to change a little bit. I'm trying my best to keep it relatively similar, though.
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Well keep up the good work
So... How was Redheart a practising Nurse, without going to College/University...
9478014
Uh... it runs in the family, her dad owned the business before her... something else? I actually didn't think about that. She's not specifically a Nurse now, just a business owner of a nurse like concept.
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Don't get me wrong, I like this story. But you can't be a nurse without years of schooling, and even running a rehabilitation clinic requires trained professionals.
I really hope you keep this story going because i fucking loved it.