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Anonymous goes to a cafe and takes a chance on approaching a cold looking mare.
This is just a bit of nonsense I wrote on a whim. Feel free to tear it apart!
You find find narrations for both chapters here:
It's narrated by Forgotten Dreams, Mica, Wuten, and Agent0Fluffy! Thanks lads!
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Well done.
I enjoyed it, wish it wasn't complete.
This is really good!
This is a great story. I got a few laughs and maybe a giggle out of it, and it didn't drag on. So all in all great job have a thumbs up. Heck have a moustache
That's some of the more well written "banter" dialogue I've read in my time. It felt natural and fitting to the characters.
I adore the cover art~
Nicely written, nicely written, hehehe
Very nice, I just love... Well, love. Hope for more in future, if you feel the muse.
A well done chapter, nicely done.
Some typos, and some stuff seems a bit odd... and that ending line feels off, cup her neck?
Anyway, still a good job well done.
It felt natrual and well written
The sarcasm is strong with these two...
So strong in fact, that I am giving this story a Like and Favorite. This was a very enjoyable read, well done, Mr Stegtorn.
That is a well preserved 57 year old burro.
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I don't understand.
I also don't understand how you had access to that other story I unsubmitted.
There's an anon tag now
Aww, nicely done. I'm going have to keep an eye on you.
So did you caunt horse years by the formula of :
1. First year = 12 human years
2. Second year = 7 human years
3. Next three years = 4 human years each
4. Each additional year = 2.5 human years each.
Or did you just multiplied by three?
Lovely
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Whoa, there is a whole horse life equation?
I just multiplied by three. I think that's the answer you mostly find with a quick google search, so that's what I went with.
I relate to this. I like the way that he thinks. Very efficiently and to the point.
This man is smoother than a polished bowling ball scoring a strike with every throw.
Awesome
Amazing fanfic I start thinking more and more octavia is the best to ship with anon