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A couple of dejected people meet at a fancy hotel, and become disillusioned with their love lives.
Written around 2015 in greentext, just now got around to converting it to prose. It's an earlier work, so it can be rough at times.
Amazing cover art by my boy Pedro Hander.
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Hmm...
Not too bad. I like where it's going.
Interesting, can't wait to see what happens next
Good story,needs a human tag
So far, so good! Keep it up!
I like the fact you used an artwork of mine as the cover art.
Fleur is best pone.
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Sorry.
7850016 Why, you don't have to be sorry! I liked it.
It's the one that's in my avatar picture.
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Ooh cliffhanger
Looking forward to how he plays this
Well written mate!
Might not have been the ending i was expecting, but that's probably because I have no foresight.
Loved it, and looking forward to future stories
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If only you were THE dude.
Either way, I appreciate your, like, opinion, man.
Have a young, handsome Jeff Bridges.
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Twilight is a cunt
Real feels bad man. Good story though
Well done, my friend,
Bittersweet little story. A good one, though.
Such a bittersweet story, a little bit more to the bitter side though.
I'm genuinely pissed at Twilight. She doesn't want to disappoint Celestia, she should've stood up and said that she have a life outside being a princess and try to negotiate with Celestia with her princess duties. If she can't compromise with Celestia, then she should know that she should let Celestia go because she's controlling her life.
Instead, she still has that teacher-student relationship(though it feels like a puppy-master relationship on Twilight's part) with Celestia and expects that Anonymous would just let go all those three years that they have spent together bonding and start from scratch. I don't know what to do if I was him, all those years, nothing. Maybe I try to live a happier life without her to just annoy her out of spite by living a not-as-stressful life and trying to look happier than ever in front of her.
At least, he has Fleur now, maybe... maybe, he'll be happier with her.
"You take a sip from your trusty Hotel 13 tumbler."
A Fallout New Vegas reference...nicely done.