You personally don't believe in Valentine's Day. Thinking the real reason it exists is to increase the profit of card and flower companies. To you, the holiday is meaningless. Many would say you're just sour you have nobody to spend it with. But that's not the case. No, no, you have a valid reason as to why you dislike Valentines Day. But your perception of the romantic day is changed when you (quite literally) bump into a ditzy classmate.
*Yeah it's a day late, oh well. Hope you enjoy it nevertheless.
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I like the Charisma Vault Boy in the A. Note.
I liked this story. I didn't like how he was so negative in the beginning, but the end made it bearable. Keep up the good work.
IMO I would suggest changing the semi clickbait image.
I don´t really like her picture, I just image another one.
I would like to see a sequel, such chapter make more or less really good prologues for a real, or just longer story.
Some people maybe don´t agree with me, but I like it that Ditzy usually has this little sad background story, that makes it somehow more sweet if she get´s a reason to be happy.
I would have liked a little talk in the end, but I think Derpy was just so happy to see him there, and immediately thought he agreed to her letter. Of course he did, but I suppose that there where more people, and not just them. I just thought it would probably not so easy to tell that he was there for her.
Well I would like to see a sequel, I rarely like to touch a one-shot, but half of the time they are little treasures, that just are to short.
This was a really great story. :) keep up the good work.
This was sweeter than heart shaped chocolate
I love your art work for this story!! Plus Awwww that was cute!!!!
This bucked up but I was in school with her. It was called "lazy eye" back then. Plus her name was not Derpy or Ditzy ! She was very kind and caring A lot smarter then most gave her credit for. WOW that's was 30+ years ago.
First story I've read in a while on fimfiction, way better than what I usually read
almost the same way i feel about valentines day absolutely hate it its a pointless holiday in my opinion
Single's Awareness Day lol
Despite the ah, interesting cover image choice and the seemingly forced 'indecency' tidbit, I found this really enjoyable.
Cute, I liked it
a not so secret admirerer anymore...
I like it wish there was a sequel with a happy end :D
J
The cloud has claimed another victim those who is not yet blinded by the cloud beware and trust your faith in the God emperor and he will protect you in his holy light!