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You can't give up your laughter 'cause you're scared of a little pain; rainbows won't up the sky unless you let it rain. —Autumn Blaze

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This story is a sequel to A Daughter and her Dragon


When Cotton Candy was adopted by Sir Spike the Dragon, she never expected to become part of such a large family. Unfortunately, there are some members that she never had the chance to meet.

These are their stories.


Pre-read and co-written by Crystal Moose
Edited by Dreams of Ponies
Cover art by NixWorld


This is a collection that answers some questions in A Daughter and her Dragon, so it contains spoilers up to chapter seven. It is recommended that you read those chapters first for context.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 16 )

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That one hurt.

Well written as always, but I hate to see any of the mane six pass on. That said, I'd like to see a different endings for Fluttershy and Dash (I have some ideas naturally).

Hmm, on a related note, does the whole map table and friendship mission thing exist in your world? Have the Elements been replaced? If not, I have an idea for you set... mmmm, 2 years or so from the last chapter of DaD.

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When it comes to the first part of your comment, I'm in the process of writing another ending for Fluttershy that I'm planning to stick to, but I'm a bit stuck at the moment.

BIG SPOILERS FOR DaD MAIN STORY HERE
In terms of the Alt U: Crystal Moose (the original author) started this story just after season 3 ended. He had no idea the whole Tree of Harmony arc was going to happen, or the battle with Tirek. Because of that, Twilight and Spike live in Canterlot Castle, so no Friendship Castle, and no friendship missions.
No, the elements have not been replaced. I have a very long and detailed outline from Crystal Moose, and it was not a concept that he had taken into account when he wrote it because there was so much else that he wrote in. I have since added to it, but I don't know if I can put in another subplot, and it's probably too late for that anyway.

You're welcome to share your ideas with me, though. Just send them to me via PM.

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Well, that bites.

Is Fluttershy's kid around still? I can't remember.

Way to completely tear a good mood asunder with that last sentence.

I guess I don't understand why Rarity died, why she went back inside instead of leaving through the hole the foals went through.

Just reread the description and did anyone else hear the Law & Order dun-dun in their head when they read "These are their stories"?

oml this is so sad! :(

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My guess is after she got the foals away from the fire, Rarity went back in, and my guess for her death is that she could not escape the fire or ge back out, plus she was ready to die. It is all Rarity to care so much fir her fellow ponies that she will sacrifice herself for them...

I want details ... but just ... that hurt my soul. Poor Scoots.

I can see Dissy trying to bring her back anyways. Thankfully he didn't make her a zombie, or a litch, and Discord turned out to be a good dad. Well ... at least his daughter turned out alright.

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And Eris is adorable.

My heart hurts. Those were excellently written, beautiful even.

Just as I read this the radio plays, Its The End Of The World As We Know It. :fluttercry:

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