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Princess Celestia has her mind set on a mid-morning snack but a concerned Luna wants her to work out with her in Canterlot's gym. With not enough time for both activities, can Celestia come out of this predicament with her cake and her sanity intact?
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This is the 33,333rd fanfic on The Writer's Group.
Also, this was hilarious. I loved it.
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That I saw as I was putting it in.
Thank you!
That was a nice little twist in the end when it turned out that it was Button playing with the Celestia and Luna dolls.
If I were to choose, I would have to go with Luna's decision. Eating too much stuff will make you fat, Celestia!
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Thanks.
I liked ending things with a twist. Deep down Luna cares about her sister, even if it means using her Canterlot Voice on her.
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Well that was an interesting twist.
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Thanks.
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I was also wondering why Celestia didn't just send Luna to the moon. Nice twist.
Quick question. Are the guards still alive? Funny story. ~hug
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Luna was making a joke...but even so, I'm sure Celestia would have found a way for her guards to breathe.
Thank you! *hugs back*
I love the creativity, especially the ending! it was a well-written cute little read. I enjoyed it!
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I appreciate it. Thanks.