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I can't lie to you guys—this work ain't my best.

I tried going for something different, but having an over-the-top Spike in such a weird situation is just, well, fuckin' weird! It was interesting to see where the story went, but to be honest, the fucker stumbled, found a sex scene, then fell asleep. Even still, I'm grateful for this fic, even if only suggested I go back to my usual way out planning out fics.

Hopefully, there were bits and pieces you enjoyed, and if not, perhaps my next work will be enough to entertain you.

Peace.

I'm sorry to say this, but typos in the description doesn't do good in attracting an audience

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You don't have to sweat saying sorry if you're offering advice.

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Allow me to specify.

Two N's in 'Shining', and two G's in 'changeling'.

Y'know what, I'm gonna read this anyway. I'm drunk and looking for something to read, and the complete idiocy of the description (I say that in a good way I promise) makes me giggle like a fat kid in a candy store

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Thanks for the saves, though if I may say, someone of your skill will find more enjoyment from how bad the fic is. If I may, I suggest trying another fic of mine for something decent to read.

That aside. I wrote this in two hours, at four AM, and now I need to crash.

Catch you on the flip-flop.

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It was like watching Space Dandy I mean it's a funny anime but only thing Dandy talks about is booty and boobs, and even me a straight guy gets tired of that, so I don't think you can blame us for when we say this might have been a bit subpar no offense though you're great writer but there's just some things you can't get also I think it would have been better in third person than first person.

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Dude, shut up...This was fucking brilliant. I couldn't stop laughing the whole time reading this, those I kept reading Spike was your typical gangster new yorker. I want a whole fic of just Spike going around ponyville giving girls with big booties advice, I laughed like a motherfucker during that whole bit

i like your story but when Spike says baby it makes me cringes.

Must admit I wasn't the biggest fan of Spike's characterization here (I prefer it when he's at least a bit more sensitive, rather than smug and obnoxious) but this was a fun read. Almost feel bad for Shining; first he feels guilty over some deceptive sex, then he has his wife cuckold him in response! :rainbowlaugh:

the fact that he keeps saying baby reminds me the she animated series Space Dandy. a good show.

Hah. I don't know what everyone's talking about. This was great! :rainbowlaugh:

I can't help but think of Spike as a bit of a sweetheart, but in his own special way.

Just one gripe:
It's Shining (Armour). One "N". He is not the embodiment of shin scrapes (shinning).

Came here late to the party, but I found it hilarious that Spike is almost exactly the image of every "Chad" coming from Incels and Niceguys. I don't know why this single aspect is so funny to me.

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