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Just a Writer trying to make stories. My Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/ClintHoyt and My Ko Fi: https://ko-fi.com/clinthoyt
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I think I would have preferred that Fluttershy had simply left the unrepentant Twilight Sparkle with a feeling and expression of deep sadness rather than leaving her forgiveness on the floor. Mind you, not for a lack of Fluttershy wanting to forgive Twilight, but wisely seeing how pointless it would be to do so.
The cool waters of Compassion offered to the Unrepentant, is pouring your drinking water out on the blazing hot desert sands.
The hand of Mercy offered to the Unrepentant, is a hand that only gets bitten/stabbed.
The face of Forgiveness to the Unrepentant, is a face that gets spat upon.
That sure was an interesting read. Puts a refreshing new spin on the Post-Fall idea. There are a few issues when it comes to the details, and a few things could have been developed in more detail - but over all, I liked it. Thumbs up!
7178801 thanks. You know, I might just make a Sequel to this later, talking more about the fate of Rainbow Dash. But I will be busy with a few Updates on my Fanfics also.
Interesting. Post-FoE is not my cup of tea in general, but I'll try to give some positive feedback regardless.
I think you kept Fluttereshy well in-character. It's in her nature to be forgiving. It's also a nice change that what happened is not presented as just a good thing, since it involved a lot of death and serious consequences following. I actually felt bad for Twilight. I can see why she won't forgive in return, why she'll be hung up on getting revenge for the revenge of others. I may not endorse it, but I understand it. That, too, was presented in a believable way with just the right tone.
And personally... there's some interesting ideas to be had about Twilight eventually escaping and trying her hand at her own brand of revenge. Maybe I could find some inspiration for a Post-Post-FoE story from it.
7178956 Thanks
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You are very welcome!
This raises ideas for an extended Post FoE universe and canon.
You should do more; this is good...
Aside from a few details, and tired Posted-Fall tropes I really did enjoy this.
I feel like there should have been more one shot fics regarding characters that are confirmed alive or at least think are alive like Apple Jack or Twilights parents, Rarity, maybe even Spike and Celestia as I don't think much was said about her. It could be interesting to see how they fared after the war and assassination of Dainn: lost loved ones, newly formed friendships, personal hardships and even how they feel about the treaty with the Caribou. This feels like it should be a series of one shots.
I may have missed it while reading, but what did she do to Spike?
Interesting story, makes me wonder what happened to Celestia and Chrysalis to a greater extent than "she escaped, war ensued." That and what happened to Spike, I could see that one being beheaded due to instability and danger. Frankly I would behead Twilight too, that one is a lost cause, frankly an execution would be both mercy killing and justice.
7179586 I'll work on that one as I am already working on the sequel to this.
Good story and sorry Fluttershy but, Twilight is a lost cause. A mercy kill would be the best option for that broken and lost mare who is now spewing terrorist threats.
Man, it's sad to see Twilight like this, maybe for the rest of her life. I wonder what happen to Celestia and Cadance.
Oh Fluttershy...Twilight...the things you and everypony else had to go through
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Sanitary