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Askre


I'm just someone who likes writing stories.

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Dew Doe loves chasing Private Iceland with a brush, the question is why? And why does Private even let her? Why does that small pegasus mare think she can get away with it? Does Private secretly like it?


Romance tag is on because this is totally a romance, even if the two main characters deny it.

This story is part of The Equestria Tales series

Cover made by Wiggles
Story edited by Hail King Sombra.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 7 )

Hopefully the Dew Doe and Private shenanigans continue.

PROOFREADING THINGS THAT NOPONY ASKED ME TO IS SO FUN!
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Then sometimes there was a loud crash and then silence, if Private Iceland came outside, his mane was suddenly neatly brushed and the dark gray unicorn was grumbling more than usual.

Just sounds kinda weird.

allow others too close.

Was the too intentional or no?

Nice story

Too lazy to proofread rest

9191545
I may write another one shot with those two silly ponies. :pinkiehappy:


9191975
Thanks, I have fixed the typos and rewritten slightly the weird one, hopefully it sounds better now.

9191975
The "too" in this case is actually correct.

Well, that's certainly one way to goof around with your kinda-crush.

9617454

Yeah, it's one of the last remnants of when Private and Dew Doe were supposed to be more Kermit and Miss Piggy kind of characters. :pinkiehappy: Before I took them in a slightly more different direction.

9617796
I'm sure I'll like the current dynamic they have too, once I catch up on the other stories! <:

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