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Dustchu
I am a master of self-inserts and self proclaimed lover of Rainbow Dash, I'm also cringe as fu-
Dustchu
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RIGHT to the
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Heading up there like a rocket ship~
Thanks for hopping on board the Crazy Train as well,
I'm not a big fan of anthro. Sorry
I like it.
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>2 hooves
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY DOOOOOOOOOOG!!!!!!
DUDE! THIS SHIT IS FUCKING LIT!
Apogee having a twin brother is so brilliant, and that last scene of him checking out delta
MORE!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!! I DEMAND MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Overall I liked it a lot.
Aileron seems like a pretty relatable teen and I suppose I can't blame him for staring at his mom's perky tits.
The fact this is anthro didn't bother me personally. Will be glad to see where things go from here.
This already is an amazing start. Let's see where it goes next. *Puts into fetish/mother/son/incest box.*
.... damn it cliffhanger....
And the long awaited story of Dust's is here! So far, your fears of a negative receptions seem to be unfounded, in my opinion.
Apogee is her bubbly self, Jet and Delta are still jackasses towards each other, Delta's quite indifferent to her kids (so far)... yeah, the usual fare
And everyone is justified at being pissed - Delta for having this suddenly dropped on her, Ailly (yes, that name is cute, I'll stick with it) for having something he really looked forward to disrupted... well, Jet can't really be mad because he really should have known better than not to inform Delta.
Or he honestly forgot - you never know what all can slip your mind when you are a CEO and already have a lot on your plate.
Either way, that was a good way to start the story.
That last scene though... Ailly must be glad that Delta has a poor eyesight, she might have seen him ogling her otherwise
I've been hyped for this, and so far, I'm not disappointed at all. Definitely looking forward to more!
I, uh... I guess I should leave a comment too since all the cool kids did it.
So, uh... yeah. I reall am enjoying this story. It was hella fun to proofread and I really can't wait to read more of it!
Keep it up man!
Making a story about Apogee's twin and not naming him Perigee. You dun fucked up.
I liked the story otherwise. Keep it up.
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Eh, that's fine, not a lot of people are
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Danke!
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Hehehe, well I'm glad you like it so much! Stick around, another update is on the horizon!
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I more or less know what he's going through in a sense, so it's easy to do his character.
Happy to hear, and yee, relatable indeed
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I'm the king of cliffhangers
Awesome!
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And yeah, there's a lot of lowkey anger between them all right now, Jet's got his company and two kids to deal with. Delta's had pmuch all of her plans ruined, and Aileron? Whew, poor boi.
Whoo! Awesome dude, glad it was enjoyable, hehehe. I had a lot of fun writing this, and I'm having fun planning out and working on future stuff for this.
And yes, his name is cute, hehehe
I'm sure he is glad, who knows what Delta woulda done if she caught him 
Thanks!
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I'm happy to have you on board dude, all of your help and Damien's was greatly appreciated! And glad you enjoyed it, thanks again!
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Hehe, fair point, the thought did cross my mind, but it was too predictable.
But thank you!
Thanks for reading guys! Stick around, we'll see another update either on the 31st or the 2nd of next month, depending
ugh second person garbage
Why write a literal character and then do second person
What I really like about this story is that I know absolutely NOTHING about this universe but I can edit it and enjoy it regardless.
Glad it got featured, it deserves it.
Daddy approves
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"UGH why write something I dont like"
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I'm really happy about that, dude, legit! Your help has been amazing so far!
Thanks buddy!
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Hue~
Man at first I thought there would finally be some good female POV clop.
Oh, this is gonna be one HELL of a read...
I liked it a lot. I normally don't read things this long, but this was kinda hard to put down.
Hope to see some more soon.
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Apologies friend
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I hope so!
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There'll be an update on the 31st of this month, so strap yourselves in folks!
Is it weird I enjoy the arguing and character building leading up to the clop more in clop fics than the actual clop? Real talk....... I also enjoyed reading this!
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Hehehe, I feel that makes a clop-story a lot better imho. There's build up and tension that ultimately leads to a decently written clop, makes it feel more real.
Thanks!
Hey I'd be pissed at not going to a heavy metal concert too
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Hehehe, same.
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So in that regard I find this is the first 2nd person story I can mostly relate to
This is pretty good so far, would love to see more in the future.
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Neat!
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31st of this month, there'll be an update.
And you and the rest shall get more
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Also
Excellent CinemaSins reference is excellent
Incest is wincest!
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Unintentional reference it seems xD haha
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Yes it is!
I finally managed to read this!
And I’m terribly late to the party. Sorry about that.
2nd person, anthro. That’s very different from what I’m used to, but I like this style so far.
I think this is the first time I’ve seen Jet start a fight with Delta, not the other way around. Could he be trying to tell us something?
The parents are still perfectly coherent to canon, how is it that everyone seems to nail them down so nicey? They could be walking out of the blog!
The “twin brother” idea intrigues me, the dynamic between Aileron and Apogee is easily what I liked best and what I’ll look forward to most in future updates. Smut will also be welcome.
You tease
I’ll definitely make sure to see where this is going. Have a like and fav
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Heheh, it's totally fine dude, there's no rush for anyone to read my stuff
Yeah, it's a new style for me to write as well. I've written anthro of course, but 2nd person is still a new avenue for me. So far it's pretty fun to explore.
Hmm... good point, and perhaps he could be, we'll have to wait and see. Hehehe.
I just studied them super briefly, looked at the pictures and some vague words on the trio, tried my best to nail them all down best as I can.
Ooohohoh trust me, this dynamic was fun to write out, I was a little nervous to introduce someone like Aileron into the Space Ponyos thing, but he seems to be pretty well received so far and I'm loving the characters and how they're coming out. I'm also enjoying the dynamic between Gee and Ailly, it's a nice change of pace from the normal stories that come out.
And yes, smut will be very welcome, huehuehue.
Danke danke!
I said it before, I'm gonna say it again. That was a truly lovely chapter, and I can't wait for the next ones. Excellent work, Dust!
Oh? are we going to have some brother and sister fun times?
Amazing chapter, buddy. Poor Ailly though
all he wanted was to make her fillyfriend happy and enjoy Metallicorn (I like this name better) C'mon, Delta, we all know you like this band too. Take the boy there for some fun and enjoy yourself too
I also loved how Apogee cares for her brother. I'm telling ya, something heartwarming will happen between them.
Keep it up, Dust!
Glad to see the update came as planned
Also glad to know you’re better, Dust 
Really enjoyable read, great update
Poor Ally, he’s between the hammer and the anvil, I wonder what he’ll choose? Will he stay at home, respecting his father’s request, and possibly engage in smut, or will he sneak out to the concert, and possibly engage in smut? The possibilities are endless!
Take all the time you need for the next update, we loyal readers aren’t going anywhere. I’ll gladly wait in the name of quality.
I like that the story actually has a sense of pacing instead of just jumping into lolsex. Quality often suffers when authors try to rush.
Keep up the good work. :)
fuck you
The first chapter was interesting but this one felt more like filler. Too much, actually. And the main character is a lot of angst and spineless. I hope DV calls him out for being such a pussy.
Heh, morning wood. Bumping into Delta with it, though? Awkward.
Silver lining - it had calmed down on its own thanks to that!
Ah, the classical guy freeze up when a girl asks him something... and then her overreacting by running away before he can explain.
That was quite a shitty day.
Seems like Ailly also has quite a bit of repressed anger that's just waiting to blow - I predict that when it happens, the choler will be aimed at Delta.
Now that will be a shouting match for the ages!
I might be wrong, but if I'm not then I'm absolutely looking forward to that
Very good chapter!
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Thanks man, happy to have you and Damien on board this train
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:rainbowkiss
Yep, that was all he wanted to do, poor Ailly indeed. Maybe if Delta pulls herself together, they'll go off and enjoy the concert together
And oooh, maybe!
I'm hoping to show some cute stuff between the two of them, hehe.
I will!
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Yep! Didn't wanna let you guys down, and happy to be better dude.
And I'm glad it was enjoyable!
The possibilities are endless indeed!
I guess we'll have to wait and see which our dear friend chooses. Huehuehuehue.
Glad to hear dude, hopefully I'll have the update out soon
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Yep, I know what you mean dude, hehe. Most tend to rush right into it, I'm more into pacing and such... save for rare occasions, of course.
And thanks!
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Love you too
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I'm sure~
Mmm... I suppose I can see how it came off that way. I just don't wanna rush into the cloppy parts. I'm sure we'll see some character growth for Ailly soon, he won't be like this for long
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Oh yes, very awkward! Haha, hopefully it won't happen again...
And very~
And shitty day indeed, hopefully he'll be able to explain things to her soon enough.
Hahaha, who knows? We'll certainly see!
It certainly sounds interesting, and Ailly might have lots of repressed anger, hehe... we've all been that way at his age once.
Thanks!
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Thanks dude!
Thanks everyone for reading!
Love you all.
Good chapter. I hope that his friends will be used more than none. They seem pretty interesting.
So goddamn suave, he'll switch his name on you and convince you he didn't.
Great, i cant wait to read more of the story! i dont think ive read the comic or anything i'll have to try and find it myself later. I also like the 2nd person its a nice touch.
I'll be honest I read this originally cause potential twincest, mother son incest plus shino's awesome OC's was going to be hella good. But then you hit me with massively well done characters and a 2nd person view I actually feel connected with and just made me go from "ooooh good erotica" to "Holy shit good fucking story."
Big props my man, looking forward to more!
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ikr, i still hope for the incest tho, there have been quite some... teasers
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Same bro xD
Rip nearly one month since last update.
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Hehe, that's a possibility
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There's a link to the tumblr blog where the comic is in the description of the story.
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Hehehe, glad you all liked it so far! I'm doing my best to make this story the best I can, want to be careful and such with these characters.
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The reasoning for this story not getting fast updates is because I'm wanting to be careful with this one. I'm taking my time, doing my best to find typos, spelling errors, and this is my first 2nd Person story. So I'm not exactly well versed in how these types of stories work, I'm being cautious and shit.
Thanks all for reading, I'm doing my best to get another update ready, just been hitting blocks recently, you know how that goes. Stay tuned friends.