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sounds like an interesting idea
Sigh, let me first say that I honestly like this story and I do not mean to be offensive in any way, but I'm not going to lie, every time an update shows up and I see the cover art I completely forget that. I hate the cover art with a passion. I would suggest switching back to the original one until you can get someone to draw one for you that's more.... animated? professional? less like something drawn by a gifted six-year-old?
Though if the cover art in its current appearance reflects something about or is tied into the story in some significant way I can understand your choice, even if I despise the art style itself if that's what you would call it.
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I'll take that as constructive criticism. It doesn't detract from anything to switch it back to the original.
EDIT: Trying a different image of a Pearlwort bloom.
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Thanks for the catch. Writing and editing on a cell causes a great deal of issues. I review a chapter and later find three things I missed. Wouldn't be surprised if I ended up causing errors when doing edits, with how awkward it is navigating the text editor on a four inch screen.
Hmm i going to guess that Biblo's mark means she is good as socking up info or something like that
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Information, personality traits, skills, and desires. Copying them into herself. She is like Rogue from X-Men without putting ponies she touches into comas
I just noticed the tragedy a really hope this doesn't go with a all of the characters we love but one dieing on us
Ok, i like the new cover art, the green and grey background give off a FoE vibe, that just draws me in.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I think that need a new botany book
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thanks, caught and corrected replicate phrase.
Well damn brutal luna brutal
When does the rape take place, and is it female on male?
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Rape is way back at the end of chapter 6, it is male on female.
You know, i don't get why you write "Hallow Shades" when everyone else writes it "Hollow Shades"
Is it an error or is it deliberate? just checking
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Time changes names of many places over time. Some subtly others more dramatically, with a few maintaining names. Hallow Shades is how I want to present it here.
Maybe you mean ponies there...
*reads the end of the chapter*
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How come no one has caught this errant letter before me pointing it out to you?
This word is often spelled wrong with the e in place of a. It is supposed to be like this: separately
That'd be "solace"
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Story definitely needs a strong editor pass. I write everything on a phone so that leads to some interesting errors at times.
My stories just ever seem to garner much for comments, never clear why. Like, I see people reading, and have a number tracking, yet I get very little comments.
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On a phone? Hot dam! I feel sorry having to type out all this on a phone. I get cramps in my hands just writing on a computer!
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Yes, all my stories are typed out on a phone, I might make an occasional editing pass on the computer at work, but 99% of the work is done on phone.
8894058 if you’re still liking I can offer my editing services if you’d like ^^. If you’re interested let me know
Interesting to say the least.
Awesome story I don't like the ending just for the fact that I wanted pearl and mera to be together forever
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Feel free to read the sequel in progress. Ponies of Ocid. Mera makes a comeback, though I have to warn the tone is far darker.
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I'll give it a read later. Keep up the good work
Why isn't there a sex tag?
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Because the deed is never actually described only mentioned.
oh, it just hit me: "Starlight's Folly"-is it "Equal town"?
yep, good old Pinkie, unpredictable as ever!
this reminds me of several stories where Pegasai and Thestrals used a type of weapon called "wingblades"...
reminds me of several times fans called Fluttershy a doormat...
i remember one story where they said that the spell for letting two mares have a child had a side effect: the child would always be female! and that's why Equestria was 80% female in that story...
"A mark of appeal", by Estee.
this made me think of the online comic "Tales of the Questor": someone with magic who had a nightmare could accidentally make illusions of it, frightening other people nearby! they called those night terrors.
wow, this got really weird really fast...and how could this be Pearl's fault, like the initial description implied?
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Have to get to the finale, won't end like you think.
Anime.
Is the Twilight Princess actually Twilight Sparkle?
Could it be that this tree is the Tree of Harmony, just grown to a massive size?
Ok, what the hell happened in Equestria over the years? Why are the ponies acting like racists to Pearl? Why is does the Lunar Guard rape her?
What happened with the Harmony and the magic of friendship in Equestria?
Great story!
I kind suspended the main villian in the beginning but it was well worth the read!
On to the sequel!
Considering the titles of these chapters, this is where the "slice of life" style ends, right?
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The sequel is password protected tho....
Hee, fish breath kisses. Cuuuuuute!
To heal can be traumatic, as much as what caused the pain in the first place. But to heal is important and necessary if one is to move past whatever pain was originally felt.