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Ahh good, It's here. Quite the brutal beginning though. Shall be interesting to see this unfold.

Why not have Sunset contact Twilight to see if she can find some replacement gems for the Sirens, but instead of causing people to argue and get angry make it so the gems will make people around the Sirens happy and lighthearted or even to the point to make them horny, it would be cool to see the Sirens live off of positive emotions like the Changelings, that way they get their powers back and regain their immortality and not have to worry about Tamamo no Koemi and Aiko then if they cross paths with them.

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Their actually friends with Koemi and Aiko, all be it the type of friends who lead them into adventures that involve drunken debauchery of epic proportions. :pinkiehappy: As for their powers just wait, but don't think losing their powers is the same as being completely helpless.

No, Twilight will not be handing back their powers as a Deus Ex Machina moment of laziness on my part. :facehoof: There will be a couple of magic MacGuffins in this story, but that is part and parcel with Kitsune, Tanuki, and other magical beings being involved (and a running gag I'm planning to have in here).

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Well if the Sirens do get some kind of magical items to regain their powers and immortality can you make it so they don't make people and ponies around them argue and get angry but become happy and full of love/lust, this way they wouldn't have to feed of negative emotions but instead positive ones like Changelings.

If anything goes south for Sunset she can call upon Celestia who can go all mama bear

Hmmm nice. Still hope they shackl her to the lwoest depts of hell for children eating.

Ah i liked the spa sister i never like jt when they have to be the bad guys sigh oh well still good story

What does Tamamo no Mae mean in English?

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there is no real translation for her name. The closest you get is that she was also called Lady Duckweed.

OH man, Rarity is in Trouble now, I hope she figures out she is being used by Lady Duckweed, or as I like to call her Lady Bitchweed since that is how she acts, I hope that they take her out and then stop anyone else from trying to find out about Equestria Magic, maybe Sci-Twi's magic drainer can be used on her to drain her of ALL of her magic and make her mortal too.

Uh oh! Things are heating up! And not just in the spa!

The Sirens never got Demonslayer from me (It's my old double barrel that can kill demons. It fires shotgun slugs filled with angel blade shards.)

I also have a machete made of angel blade if they're interested

Others are just jealous of how much better her balls are than theirs. :pinkiecrazy:

Regarding the BattleAxe:

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
BURN MAIM KILL
BURN MAIM KILL
BURN MAIM KILL

Where's the Colt?! Your not using the Colt?!

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Sorry, but no enchanted revolvers and I liked the look of the 1889 custom broomhandle luger more than the 1910 colt. It struck me as having more of an Adagio feel to it.

The bullets from Who Framed Roger Rabbit. :pinkiecrazy:

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Damn....

Welp! More enchanted weapons for me~:twilightsmile::pinkiecrazy:

Oh boy! Here we go!

Discords shaking things up!

I have neutral ground with Lilith. My grandfather in the Silverstreak family sacrificed his life to save hers at one point. In return she has given my family safety from being harmed.

Tamamo no Mae can't harm my family without breaking Liliths deal, which would be catastrophic in some ways. In other words: Tamamo hurts my family, Lilith hurts Tamamo.

(I know this won't be relevant to the story but I kimda wanted to do a little back history story......thing.....idk. Let me know what you think Chaos)

Ummm question what is a Shinseidenai Daitengu i looked it up and it said it was spelled wrong.

Also awesome chapter! Love Sci Twi meeting Discord and Fluttershy!

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You do realize that she is now using her ex's skull as her throne. So yeah, good luck with that since being near Tamamo no Mae might actually be safer.

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Use google translate. Shinseidenai means non sacred or unholy and a Daitengu is a smart super tengu. Also look up the Basan in Japanese folklore, you'll get a kick out of it.

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Looked it up a little but didn;t get much. all i knwo these super Tengu are suppose to be seen ina better light then REgualr Tengu.

sure she not actting stupid, she should learn everything about Scoota, she becomes a stronger Tnegu asking fo trouble.

With her obession over Dash it a recipe for Disater. Still very good story, and hope this kitsune is defeated and slained, Rarity really screwed up, and wodner hwo bad the conqunces will be for her.

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Yes, Daitengu are some what better than normal tengu, but she is creating 3 Unholy Daitengu with a bastardized hybrid of science and magic.

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Oooh boy! On a scale one to ten how bad will Scoota be? I mean she sold her body to aDiamond dog already wants pay back and all on sweetie Bell. Plus her Obession with Dash....it's a 15 isn't it!

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I kinda have a backup plan with that but I didn't know if Lucifer tried killing her or not

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You forgot to factor in the fact that they are pumping her full of drugs, booze, human blood, and the liquefied body of a magical creature, accelerating her age and growth, and then flat-lining her before bringing her back as an unholy Daitengu. So I would say somewhere between completely f@%#ed and so screwed the demons in hell just barred the gates to keep her out.

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Well then my backup to that was that his grandfather protected Lilith and fought Lucifer alingside her. Lilith was almost defeated but the grandfather sacrificed his life when Lucifer tried to finish her off.

Strange haveing a nephelum aa your grandfather. (All of this is as my OC perspective. None of this is irl for other comment readers)

Hmm this version of scoot turnning into some type of yokai... Somehow I don't think that bodes well for Sweetie or Dash if for different reasons...

Of course given that Scoot was the driving force behind the events that ruined rarity's life I don't think that bodes well for scoots either.

Comment posted by Firefly_ deleted Feb 15th, 2018

I love adagio's weapons, mainly because i love ornamental stuff and anything Winchester, lever action is just so badass

Also heres two types of bullets for ya

1. Skittle filled bullet followed by a voice that comes out of nowhere saying 'taste the rainbow'

2. It just shoots out confetti while a party favour sounds off (ever seen red vs blue?)

Keep up the great work!

I'm really really really hoping it blows up inehr face big time and also hoping that...Rarity starts to pound her head into a wall for a long time on being so easily to trick.

Seriously master manipulator or not charming kindgs and such or not. She didn't really have to try hard with Rarity, she was the type to fall for sucha sob story even before she became evil.

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Which is why I said in the notes that she played her like a harp from hell.

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Well not sure what Rarity Fate will be int he end, or what going to happen. But look forward to the next chapters.

Hmm, I am sort of looking forward to seeing Tamamo no Mae's plans crashing and burning if only to see her taken down a few pegs...

Also I am beginning to have the distinctive wish for princess twilight or someone to knock some sense into Rarity's head for being so easily manipulated.

Well that has to be massively bruising for all those tengus' egos to say the least given the nature of tengu...

So does Yellowbeard have a ship of his own and if so what's it called, can't be the Black Pearl or the Queens Ann's Revenge, I would like to see what kind of ship it would be and if he were to have any special powers with it. Of course I can't wait to see if the Siren's were to find a crystal from that underground cave and if so maybe it could be used to give them their magic back but in a different way. Also do you think any of the Changelings will find the portal and go through it, it would be cool to see what they would do if they came through the portal and into Human Equestria.

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No, Yellowbeard usually just stole whatever ship he could and then upgrade when he captured a better ship. As for the changelings in the human world, not likely to happen.

Pip/Yellowbeard needs the Blundergat from CoD Zombies. IT WOULD FIT SO WELL!!!

So Pip is now a pirate version of Shazam? :pinkiecrazy:

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More like they tag in and out as needed. At the end of the day Shazam is still Billy Batson inside while Pip is tagging out and letting his chaotically violent ancestor loose with a huge boost of strength, speed, agility, and toughness that he brings with him from being dead. Yellowbeard for the most part is just enjoying beating people up, protecting his legacy in Pip, and is kind of watching what he does and says since Pip is too young, but not completely.

I admittedly already considered Scootaloo to be dangerous simply because of her obsessions...

Hmm beyond that it looks like Discord might throw Tamamo no Mae's careful plans into delightful chaos and she won't even see it.

Well of course Toshi is badass, he's OLD. You know what they say after all, Old man is Old for a reason.

Literally ANY of the Bullet upgrades from Enter the Gungeon would fit perfectly in this.
Flak Bullets, Remote control Bullets, Magic Bullets( can turn enemies into chickens) Ghost Bullets( they go THROUGH obstacles and still deal damage if they hit the target.) +1 Bullets, which split into 2 bullets on impact, you get the idea.

So I wonder if Pinkamena comes out to play and Tamamo no Mae sees her why do I suspect she going to find reason to flee be somewhere else far away?... Also why do I suspect that won't help?

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