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Oh man i can't wait for more!
Question will the Rainbooms make a appreance and the CMC?
Shit Apple Jack is dead who will be next, hope Apple Jack suffer and begged for forgiviness before she expired.
Ten to one Rarity is next.
8118613 I'll take that bet... Wait I'm the Author, damn it, there goes my get rich quick scheme.
Sunset Shimmer has gone all Carrie.
She's out for blood.
I'm liking this perspective of this story and where it's going.
I hope to see more so have a follow and like
I'm not really one for revenge fics, or fics where the Mane 6 (or Humane 5 in this case) get killed, but this is getting interesting.
Pretty sure if they confrotn Rarity and Sweetie Bell if they went to them sweetie Bell fessed up.
Thanks to them so many innocennts have died, Sunset been driven fully mad, and will not stop till she spills thier blood.
Ummm did you skipa freaking part or so? this feels and read more like a chapter five rather then four.
8122846 Everything in the entire story is from Dr. Blood Hounds perspective and he is not a cop. After The Home he went home. His part in it picks up at the police headquarters when he is giving the sirens a lift to therapy and everything goes to hell. Why the remaining Rainbooms are there is simple, the have a raging she demon after them and did the smart thing, they went to the cops. At the end of The Home the car bumper shows that pinkie saved fluttershy and headed to the police headquarters. In The Farm He loses the trail of Sunset and Applebloom in the burning orchard. Given that Sunset figured out Applebloom was part of Anon-a-miss she was most likely very vocal about what she was going to do to her. Applebloom escaped on foot and grabbing her friends and they went to the police. Rarity and Rainbow Dash had the bad luck to show up last and got killed because of it. As for SciTwi's guest appearance, she was visiting her brother when everything happened. The pieces are all there and this was where they all came together, only it is still from his perspective. I hope this clears it up.
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Got dammit i was really hoping to see or hear the aftermath of the real Amon miss confessing, love to seen Rarity and Rainbow Dash faces before theyw ere killed.
Hope the guy points out the guilty party, love to hear Fluttershy and Pinkie reaction so many lives lost and ruined.
Well there you go, CMC. How can you spend more time with sisters now that they're DEAD?!
8123170 Duuuuude......Too soon........!
This is fantastic!
*cringe* Ooh… somebody fucked up hard. Holy fuck, Sunset is out for blood and goddess, if this chapter is anything to go by, it’s going to be sweet
That was freaking fantastic! And the description of Applejack was awesome! She did lie, after all. She lied about Sunset being family, lied about her being a friend. You don’t treat friends or family the way Applejack treated Sunset. And Applejack’s biggest humiliation is being made a liar out of, so she did it to herself. Also, please tell me that mention of Sonata means we’ll see the Sirens come into the equation soon enough! Oh wait… Sunset’s on a mission of destruction… NO! DON’T KILL MY BABIES!!!
Fluttershy was smart. She knew her brother was dead and called for backup. Of course it would be Pinkie. Gods, I hope when we get to Rainbow, the word traitor is burned in huge block letters around her body.
Raaaainbooms, come out to play~ay!
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Who?
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I didn't see a reply yet, so I'll explain what little I know. If I'm right, Carrie was created by Stephen King and has been turned into a horror movie about a high school girl whose parents who treated her like crap in the name of religion. And on top of that, she was treated bad at school and nobody cared. At the prom, or whatever dance it was, she was voted the Queen/Princess/Whatever only for it to be a cruel prank. They dumped pigs blood or something on her when she went up to the stage and she ended up finally snapping. Not sure how, if she was telekinetic or if it was some recently awakened power, but yeah she tore through those who treated her like crap. I know this may not be wholly accurate, but it is pretty close. I never saw or read it, just know about it.
As for the story, I love it. It deserves the 👍 I'm giving it. This is the second one of your stories that read today, and
I have to say I'm loving them
Please continue!
This is such BRILLANT concept!
Seeing the events of Anon-A-Miss backwards and from the point of a detective!
I'm disappointed that the story wasn't from investigating a crime scene to Anon-A-Miss.
I'm more excited that the fact that this story has a rampaging Sunset, a mythologist, cops, and plain old violence.
Continue.
IMO the Rainbooms abandonment was a group effort. If you punish them then I hope you punish all of them before defeating Sunset and not just the ones directly connected to the Crusaders.
Telling the story from an outside perspective is creative and although I'm not really into gore, I've found this story eerily compelling.
(P.S. Zephyr deserved genital mutilation after the s*@# he pulled or at the very least permanent magic induced E.D. Just saying)
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Zephyr actually saved Fluttershy by being a foul mouthed but brave idiot. He could have just let her chase after Fluttershy after distracting her the first time, but instead he kept her chasing him as long as possible and trying to give Fluttershy as much time to run as possible. Mostly his plan was just keep her mad enough to keep chasing him, running like hell, and hope the cops arrived in time to save him.
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I'm fully aware of what he was trying to do. It doesn't change the fact though.
Please continue.
Please continue.
I hope this continues!
Ooh... Sunset had snapped.
Man, really hope this continues! This is a good read.