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Foal Star


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This story takes place after the events of: "The Ticket Master."

Twilight and Spike are new to Ponyville and are getting settled in. As Twilight helps her new friends and Spike tries to get golden oaks organized for business. He notices that a strange pacifer and foal bonnet keep appearing out of nowhere, and he slowly starts to use the strange foal items and even starts acting like a baby. Twilight notices his strange behavior and has to find a way to remove the curse from these items, and prevent Spike from becoming an actual, "baby dragon."

Edited by Superpinkbrony12


Edited by: Shadowmane PX-41

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 52 )

Ah! I do love how you found a follow-up for that chase montage in "Ticket Master". That validates this story quite well as there could certainly be more to it than first met the eye during that fasco.

I once saw a picture that modified the picture to show how Twilight likely went all the way with Spike by putting a diaper on him. It was cute.

Seems there will be far more to this story in the future. I'll keep it book marked and check back to see when updates happen.

Really liking all the canon tie-ins in your recent works. They help to add some more visuals and insights to the situation in your stories. They also make you see them as "Unaired Episodes", too. :)

8302136 I believe I've seen that image to which you refer.

Good story so far, can't wait for the cuteness that's sure to come!
Also, will this story jump around from POVS or is it still unknown how your gonna do this?
Anyways, hope to see more of this soon!

Cute beyond belief. Keep up the good work 'M dude.

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This will be mostly done from Spike's POV. But I will do some of Twilight too.

Twilight's maternal instinicts are gonna take over, and soon she won't want her baby dragon to be out of diapers. I can tell. :twilightsmile:

I'm soooo glad to see another chapter to this story, I definitely want to read more!
I wonder how others would react if others do find out? Maybe some like Fluttershy and Pinkie would automatically find him adorable and treat him like a baby or at least support him.
I also can't wait to see how Twilight will act once she gets into the whole "momma Twilight" role.

Oh, how I've been waiting for another chapter in this story. The wait was certainly more than worth it, too!

The alluring disembodied voice that appears to hypnotize Spike is certainly quite the force. Being non-detectable by magic makes it all the more dangerous. If Twi would have known Zecora I'm sure the Zebra Shaman could uncover the truth behind what is going on with a balm, ointment, or brew. But no Zecora means all Twilight has is magic and magic is not going to end this affliction / symbiotic relationship between Spike and the cursed stroller.

I really like how you touched on the aspect of how Spike, being still young, may be impacted by the trauma of moving from familiar surroundings. The psychological aspect allows for either a great distraction from the real culprit or it could be what is allowing the 'voice' to gain more-and-more control of him. In any case, being just Chapter 2, we are getting more possibilities of how it will end with how nothing concrete has been fully established. Way to keep the interest up!

Awe, cute widdle Spikey! Also, since Spike is still in Twilight's room...that must mean that the Ponyville Library still exists in this fic...*SNIFF!*

"Didn’t Applejack mention something about a shadow pony?”


Allusion to the season 7 finale LOL!


Also, Twi's gonna be a mom for Spike again! :D

"Spie rolled his eyes and grumbled" Spie sounds like ship name for SpikeXPinkie! XD
"Now how about you push me back inside like a good baby?" Spike should have said: "Sorry, like you said: 'I'm a BABY'; I don't know how to push!"

"Twilight and I just moved here,"


Oh, that's why the poor Library is in this fic! RIP Librarby! :'( XD

Very cute and quite surprising. It seems the buggy has other plans that go beyond influencing Spike to be a baby again? What could the enchanted stroller have as its end game? Could some other force be at play to ensure Spike and Twilight do not continue their studies on friendship? Maybe some pony has taken it to themselves to see Twilight discover 'The Magic of Motherhood' instead of friendship?

Definitely lots of questions as all those items from "The Ticket Master" return to bewitch our heroes.

So nice to see this story continuing. It gets more fun with each chapter while opening up more-and-more possibilities. :)

Yaaay another chapter!
I'm really enjoying this story and just like your other stories it is so adorable.
I practically come back everyday just to see if there was a new chapter up and I certainly was not disappointed by this chapter.
Can't wait to see what happens next!

so looks whats happen is from chapter one is curse baby thing and it make spike turn younge and is now get twi to baby him or something but i like it do more

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Yes Fluttershy will babysit him next chapter

Can't wait to see Fluttershy baby Spike for a few hours, I know she'll take good care of him. :yay:

Awesome chapter once again! Baby Spikey is so adorable! :3 :heart:

Baby Spike and Angel. Let the fun begin!

Gee-golly-gosh what an adorable chapter this was! The flow was perfect along with the number of descriptors that set the overall tone for everyone's appearances.

What I thought was really cute is how Rarity, to Spike, became a 'Mother Figure' instead of 'His Crush'. It shows there is still some original Spike in there but he is still more dominated by the effects of the sentient carriage and its bewitching artifacts.

Twilight's transformation is also well in progress. However the bonnet's effects are still being overruled by her friendship study responsibilities along with believing in Nurse Redheart's advice instead of what the carriage told her upon donning the bonnet. The bonnet is definitely starting to take over but Twi is still there and could potentially finish the job Spike couldn't finish when he tried to burn everything.

<LoL!> I also felt it adorable when Rarity got all grossed out at the thought she could have come within any distance of a 'dirty diaper'. I saw her really go into her dramatics when the revelation became known. I'm sure she's already in the shower talking to herself about the experience and how she feels she handled it and will handle it. It gives good insight as to what happens in "Baby Cakes", too. She was just more tactful, perhaps due to this experience, with The Cakes than with Spike and twilight?

Great work! Looking forward to more!

That bonnet must have some kind of mind altering abilities, putting it on made Twilight think Spike was just a hatchling. But will she be able to get Spike to snap out of his regressed mental state? :twilightoops:

D'aww x2! The whole scene with Flutters was just too cute! I can also believe she'd fall asleep while gently rocking him. She has always, to me, been a fairly easy-going Pony. She also puts a lot of work into her day-to-day so she'd be even more inclined to fall to slumber after a chance to sit, feel maternal, and rock with a single focus instead of many.

Great job with twilight and Applejack, too! The dialogue between the two was very believable for the situation that is going on. Now we just have to see what Ms. Sparkle has learned about the enchanted bonnet.

Spike in overalls is also way too cute, too!

For someone who detests diaper changing and anything foal related, Rarity certainly did a good job taking care of Spike for the brief time he was in her custody. :raritywink:

It's always great to see new chapters in this story. Points for keeping us on the edge of our seat in how Twilight figured everything out. So many moments were like, "And she's going to start explaining..." but it never happened. Nice retention of suspense as we got to watch Rarity do all she could to be a caring friend while avoiding the icky task of changing an overly saturated diaper.

What's really interesting is how the effects of the bonnet and pacifier on Spike are still increasing. Hopefully Twilight can solve everything before matters could become non-reversible.

Great chapter and a happy read for the day. :)

Spike smiled at her and whispered. “Okay, thanks, Pinkie. Just be careful with that stroller. You don’t want to end up being a baby too.”

Pinkie giggled. “Thanks, Spike, but Twilight took the enchantments off. And besides, even if I did become a baby, Mrs.Cake would definitely love getting some practice!”

Reminds me of a picture of Pinkie Pie in a diaper, and a giant stroller. It's adorable. :rainbowkiss:

Wonder if Spike can give Flurry Heart an appropriate tour of Ponyville?

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Yeah I need to do a padded pinkie story one of these days

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Well we"ll see this story will have a sequel

Hurray! An exciting fun-filled conclusion to a most adorable tale. It all wrapped up so nicely and Spike wanting a little extra comfort as he went about cleaning the Golden Oaks Library while Twi was away was a cute touch. Nothing wrong in feeling a little cozy as you romp around doing bland chores. Plus the enchantment is broken so he can just goof around as a little Wonder Bolt until it's time to make dinner.

This tale was definitely worth the wait to see its conclusion. Very adorable while, if it does, fitting in with the series of other adventures that happen in-between the canon show. Bravo!

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Thanks glad you enjoyed it. It will have a sequel.

Such a great story, and in my opinion it was very well written.
I can only imagine what the sequel will be like, maybe one day twilight finds out about him liking pull-ups and starts to treat him like a toddler (of his own free will of course!). Don't know quite what you have in mind but I'm sure it will be great either way.
The only thing I was sad about was how the story seemed kinda short, but that could be me just not wanting the story to end.

The voice said push me so the stroller is the one causing the problem simple :derpytongue2:

New chapters = story completed without me! XD

How much urine does this dragon have?! :twilightoops:

I thought Twilight was supposed to be trying to fix Spike before he completely loses his mind.

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Twilight is also possessed at this point. She likes babying spike now.

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