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ShadowLDrago #1 · Apr 14th, 2017 · 2 · · Prologue ·

~Earth: 64,329,746 years ago

How specific.

What history wouldn't tell you though is that during this time people did exist, and lived happily with the dinosaurs and other creatures of old.

What, like Flintstones? And considering the sheer amount of dangerous carnivorous dinosaurs and the people there being presumably VERY primitive, I find that a little tough to believe. Why am I nitpicking a Power Rangers story?

“You fought… valiantly…” the red warrior, apparently the queen, said grasping her companion's hand, “Your sacrifice… shall not be in vain…”

Well, I hope you're right.

Her own armor then faded, revealing a fair skinned woman with impossibly long and full multicolored hair and pink eyes.

Zordonlestia.

“Spike… I'm trusting these with you…!” the queen said, “Make sure they find their way… to women who are worthy of the power…! Only those who are worthy…!”

I know little about Power Rangers, but I'm pretty sure that the transforming trinkets, Power Coins in this case, only work for those who ARE worthy. Then again, I've been wrong before. And there's a reason 6th Ranger Traitor is a trope.

“Did you really think you could hide from me, sister?”

Well, she did try so, yeah. Kind of a stupid question there, buddy.

“Now, tell me where the Crystal Heart is!”

I always wondered why villains bothered with this type of stuff when they should know full well the hero isn't going to tell them, doubly so when they have nothing to lose and everything to gain by not telling you.

“Foolish sister,” the green warrior threw the Queen into a stone pillar, causing it to break upon impact, “Power is power! It doesn't matter whether my heart is “pure”! All that matters is which one is the strongest, and currently that is me! You are no longer a Power Ranger, so you cannot defend this land any longer!”

I mean, it is possible to have a heart of pure EVIL, look at Cell, he was implied to be able to use the Spirit Bomb which only the pure of heart could use and he's not pure good.

“I shall do as you wish, your Majesty,” the young man, Spike, said, trying his best to hold in his tears. He stayed with the Queen until her body became lifeless, and then cast a spell on himself and the castle. No matter how long he had to wait, or how much the world would age, one section of the castle, along with himself, would remain the same, forever frozen in time until the day he met the five women chosen by fate.

Besides, why women? Could easily be guys. I mean, I know it'll be 5 of the Mane 6 since, I've seen the tags and I can put 2 and 2 together, but I don't think there's ever been a Ranger team that's only ever been one gender in canon. I've been wrong before though.

VampDash

VampDash #2 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8095853 And... a mixed bag of genders is a necessity because..... why?

Unnamedwriter #3 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

And it arrives!

VampDash

VampDash #4 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

.... AJ's a bit of an entitled prick and I really don't like Sunset right now.

Azure Sandora #5 · Apr 14th, 2017 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

8095907 So you mean to say... AJ is a teenager with attitude? *raises eyebrows up and down*

I'll go into the corner now...

VampDash

VampDash #6 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8095913 A bit TOO MUCH attitude.... and yeah the fact you just said women IS kinda..... one sided. The original was fine in that it could've been ANYONE that could've gotten them had they been worthy. Not a bad start but it's tripping over itself as well.

Edit: Also expect PM to come your way soon.

Azure Sandora #7 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh, don't worry. The whole "all female thing" will be addressed at some point. Nothing I do is accidental.

ShadowLDrago #8 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

That was why Applejack hated it so much here.

Ever heard of the old Chinese curse "May he live in interesting times"? Because boring may not be fun, but it's certainly safe.

She had just moved into this town a few days ago, and was now going to be attending Ponyville High School. She didn't want to live here though. After her father died she wanted to go live in Manehatten with her rich relatives. She had always lived the simple life, and was ready to see a life of luxury for once.

Well then. Ain't that a departure from canon?

Instead of eating expensive caviar, she was eating inexpensive home cooked meals.

Trust me, home cooked meals can be just as if not better than expensive fancy ones. Plus, caviar's not that good.

Instead of having a maid to do all of the work for her, she had to get up at the crack of dawn to help with a few minor chores before coming to school.

... Fair point.

Macintosh sighed and looked forward, “Ya… wanna talk about it?”
“Nope,” Applejack said simply.

Role reversal between these two always amuses me.

“Pa is dead,” Applejack said somberly, “What he wants doesn't matter anymore, cause he's not here to say it to my face. He'll never be here to say it to me anymore…”

Perhaps not. But he lives on in the memories of those who knew him. Death is inevitable. Nobody lives forever, however, as much as you aren't going to want to hear this, you have to move on. Staying stuck in the past is not healthy.

“Yeah, these things “just happen”. That's why I ain't puttin my faith in anything like the afterlife or some magical bullshit. Cause if that's true, then God's a real asshole.”

Maybe so. But there's not a damn thing any of us can do about it, so I say if God's an asshole, let him be an asshole and be happy anyway because fuck assholes.

DAMMIT TAKEI!

She had long wavy purple hair with a white highlight in the front, and was wearing dark blue eye shadow, dark red lipstick, sexy black skirt that only fell just under her rear connected to a matching corset top that accentuated her bust, fishnet stocking, and black high heeled boots.

Well. An outfit like that truly is a Rarity.

As she drank from the water fountain, Applejack couldn't take her eyes off her. She didn't want to say it out loud, but the way she was dressed didn't look like the dress code, or if it was she just passed it.

No, you're right. I very much doubt that this would pass ANY dress code standard of ANY school.

“That's Rarity,” her companion said, “The school calls her “Easy Rare” though, for obvious reasons.”
“I'd stay away from her if I were you,” the original girl said, “Unless you want to catch something, mmkay?”

Easy Rare. The being somewhat oxymoronic amuses me entirely too much. Also, an STD joke. Subtle. If you spell subtle by shooting a flaming Optimus Prime out of the Death Star in orbit of Earth while blaring heavy metal with fireworks going off everywhere.

“They're right, you know,” Rarity said softly, “About what they said about me.”

To be fair, their comments stem from the way you behave yourself and choice of outfit. It's your own fault if anything.

“She got kissed by Easy Rare…”
“Dude, her thing is to never make the first move…!”
“I wish she'd kiss me like that…”

To be fair, she would. If you were Applejack. But you're not. So she won't.

She was careful how she picked her books out of her locker, else they'd fall over when she grabbed the ones she needed. She also picked out her pens for the day. It was Monday, so she was supposed to use the black ballpoint pen today for the first half, and then the blue push pen for the second half.

I never bothered with a locker, I just took all my stuff in my bag. Easier to keep an eye out on and no risk of being late for class because I forgot my locker code. Also, what difference does it make whether you use blue or black ink and what kind of pen you use? Is the school really that strict? If so, I'm amazed Rarity's outfit got past their standards of what counts as decent.

“Flash…” Twilight said softly, her heart racing. He was her crush since freshman year, and time hadn't calmed down her feelings. Instead, her feelings had gotten even more intense. No one in the school knew how badly she wanted him. How her body would heat up at just the thought of him, or the sound of his voice. She tried to be neat and tidy all the time, but Flash Sentry was probably the only person she'd be willing to cut loose around. Maybe even do something more… “dirty” with him.

I suspect that more people know than you think as it's not impossible that someone has overheard you saying his name while looking longingly at him.

Sadly though, there was one person who did know about her crush on Flash. Said person walked right up to him and hugged him, kissing him softly on the lips. This girl had fiery red hair, and wore a black leather jacket, a red one piece mini skirt, and matching boots. The girl shot Twilight a sideways glance, and she quickly turned around to hide behind the corner.

Sunset Shimmer. Considering that she's wearing her EQG 1/Rainbow Rocks outfit, I'm guessing this is her EQG 1 self.

“He's gone now,” she said. Twilight closed her eyes and slowly stepped out, trembling as the girl motioned with her finger to walk over to her. When she did, Sunset grabbed Twilight by her hair and pulled her head back, “I saw you lusting over my man just now.”

And right on the nose! Also, she's only looking, she clearly doesn't have the confidence to do anything, something you're probably at least partially behind, and last I checked, looking at someone whom you find attractive is not criminal.

“Of course he didn't see you. Why would he give a damn about a freak like you?” Sunset asked before slamming her hand on Twilight's books, making them fall to the floor. Twilight naturally panicked, and when Sunset let her go, Twilight knelt down immediately to pick them up. When she was almost done, Sunset kicked one book away and laughed watching Twilight scamper off to grab it.

Generic High School Bully it is. I'm incredibly glad I never had to deal with people like you.

“Whoo boy, what do we have here?” another girl asked, this one with blond hair and a cowboy hat, “Homeroom hasn't even started yet, and I already found the local mean girl an' this school's bully!”

Looks like it.

“Mind your own business, hick!” Sunset shouted.

Ohohohoho that was a poor choice of words. By which I mean you disappoint me. Seriously, calling Twilight a freak and Applejack a hick for no reason other than to try and make them feel worse than you do inside, shouting at her simply for pointing out 2 things that are clearly true, and most likely could do so much better than you are currently. I'm very glad canon you was handled so much better in Rainbow Rocks than in your debut.

An' jus' so we're clear, I was mindin’ my own business, then I saw somethin’ that I just can't stand. A waste of space.

... 10 points for Applejack.

“Oh, you are asking for it now, bitch!” Sunset shouted. She threw a few punches, but the girl in the hat effortlessly moved out of the way of each attack. After a few seconds, she slapped Sunset hard on the cheek.

Make that 50.

Sunset was wide eyed as she held her cheek, “Did… you just… slap me?!”

Bitchslapped, but yes. Because you're a bitch. Here's the thing. Bullies are weak. They think they stand so high on their mighty tower built on fear, not realizing that a single person standing up to them and proving that they're not so high and mighty is all it takes for that tower to crumble. Even yours.

“Yeah. Weird, right?” the girl said, “Looks like you an' I have the same homeroom. So here's how this is gonna work, kay? You're gonna sit far away from both me an' her, an' yer gonna avoid both of us for the rest of the day. As long as ya do that, we won't have a problem. But if I so much as smell your cheap perfume anywhere near us,” she leaned in close and narrowed her eyes, “I'm gonna do worse than slap ya next time. Now get outta my sight.”

This is why I say Applejack is best character. Especially the kind of Applejack that doesn't take anybody's shit.

“To gather as much information on this new girl that I can and become her friend!” Pinkie Pie cheered, “This is fantastic! Finally a true hero has come into the school!”
With that, Pinkie Pie rushed out of the classroom to her locker. It was lunch now, so she'd have time to get as much information on Applejack as possible. Everyone in school thought she was crazy, but this proved it. Heroes were real, and Pinkie Pie was going to be friends with one.
And then, the two of them would save the school.

Oh Pinkie, your eccentric and probably not entirely sane behavior is always a delight.

If Sunset tried anything, she'd just break her arm or something.

Sad thing is, you'd probably get in trouble for that as much as she'd deserve it.

“Sorry! Sorry! I guess this looks really creepy. You're probably thinking to yourself something like “Oh my God I just saved a complete weirdo, she's probably not going to leave me alone now”, and I'm sorry for coming off strange. I don't really know how to talk to people, even though I'm talking to you right now, which I guess is a bit of a paradox. Oh, did you know that the word “paradox” comes from the Greek word paradoxon. The two parts of the word mean-”

I can tell that I'm going to like you quite a lot.

“Right. Good idea. I'm Twilight. Twilight Sparkle. I'm seventeen years old, blood type A positive, IQ of 175, I like reading, writing, playing video games, and messing with-” Applejack held up her hand to cut her off.

Twilight, while I understand your thought process, I think you're giving her a bit too much information at once.

Something about her just seemed really odd, but it seemed like she wasn't trying to be weird. Actually, it seemed like her issue was that she was trying to be normal, but didn't know how.

You hit the nail RIGHT on the head.

“You're Applejack, right?” Twilight asked, “I heard your name in homeroom, and everywhere in school. Did you know that the entire school is going crazy over you? Something about being kissed by Easy Rare. Are you a lesbian? I'm not. Not that I'd mind if you were.”

If this is anything like Code Lyoko EG, and really any Rarijack work, then probably yes.

Something told her to stay though, that she'd be a real bitch if she left her.

No, but trust me, you'd be surprised how much just having someone friendly to talk to can help, especially for people like Twilight.

I like eating alone. Well, I don't know if I like it, but I'm comfortable eating alone.

This is so like me it's actually mildly unnerving. I get you though, nobody around to judge what or how you eat and you get to be alone with your thoughts, which can be quite pleasant.

“There's someplace I want to go tonight, but I can't get there on foot because it's too far away. I need someone who knows how to drive to take me there,” Twilight explained, “We can use my Dad's jeep to get there. He doesn't mind if I'm out late as long as I'm not alone. I'd ask my older brother, but he's staying with his girlfriend for a few days. But then I thought that if I asked you, maybe you'd take me.”

No worries, I understand your logic.

“Yeah, come to my house before seven, and I can remove that limit for you,” Twilight said, twirling her finger in her hair and swaying to the side a bit cutely. She looked dead serious too.

Twilight is usually good with tech, and she's the Billy of this, and so was Billy, so, yeah, this shouldn't be too hard for her.

“I don't need you to be my chauffeur for the year,” Twilight said with a confused frown, “Just tonight will be fine.”

I think she was joking.

Was she actually going to consider doing this?

If you want to move the plot along and become a badass and not just deal with the wretched hive of scum and villainy that is high school, then yes.

ShadowLDrago #9 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Never said it was. I'm just saying I don't think there's ever been a Ranger team of only one gender in canon.

VampDash

VampDash #10 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8095926 Good thing this is an AU then.

ShadowLDrago #11 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

I know. I was just thinking out loud, is all.

MDCommissioner #12 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Alright.....so two chapters in and despite the fact that I have your Code Lyoko fic on my backlog.... *clicks on the Tracking option*

Is your next trick going to be a Persona fanfic?

Azure Sandora #13 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8096061 *laughs* Oh, that's not coming for a while.

Like... maybe as my biggest project EVER.

MDCommissioner #14 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

.....I sense a lot of Patreon support might persuade you.

Seriously though.....first Code Lyoko.....and now your take.....on reboot of a 20 plus year old concept. I just need to know who the fifth ranger is before I potentially gush once again. Come on Flutters with the Dragonzord.

nintendohero64 #15 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Is this base on the reboot?

Azure Sandora #16 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8096141 Yep. Don't worry though. I'm taking it in a slightly different direction so it won't be a carbon copy of the reboot.

nintendohero64 #17 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8096216 No problem it's your story I was just wondering if this is based on the reboot or just using the image cover.

Azure Sandora #18 · Apr 14th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

8096237 Um... you're welcome for existing.

And I hope you enjoy this story.

Hidden Scorpius XI

Hidden Scorpius XI #19 · Apr 14th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Sorry, but the description alone tells me that this is a re-write of the movie, only changing the names.

Azure Sandora #20 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8096341 It may seem that way, but I promise you that I'm not following the movie exactly. I also plan on going beyond the movie.

Bahamut Omega #21 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

So Twilight is willing to sabotage a tracking anklet to go somewhere with her new bestie, which I'm pretty sure is a felony depending on the reason for house arrest. I like her already.

Unnamedwriter #22 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

No one was ever angry at her. They just kept looking at her with pity, hovering around her and trying to make her feel better.
She hated it when people took pity on her. She wasn't weak. She didn't need anyone to vouch for her that she was a “good kid”. She needed her father to hold her.

This has to be one of the best pictures of grief I've ever read. Not only does it establish AJ's somewhat canon departed character, but it shows us the depth of her pain in a way I've only seen a few other fics do. Bravo.

Azure Sandora #23 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Also, what difference does it make whether you use blue or black ink and what kind of pen you use? Is the school really that strict? If so, I'm amazed Rarity's outfit got past their standards of what counts as decent.

Oh, Twilight suffers OCD in this story.

ShadowLDrago #24 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Right, right, I somehow thought that was AJ's train of thought. My bad.

hakim35

hakim35 #25 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

I didn't watch the movie yet but this is good already.

ponylover2 #26 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8097104 I've seen the new power rangers movie and here's my prediction so far I believe that Applejack would be come the the red ranger, and twilight sparkle would be come the blue ranger that's what I think so far tell me if I'm close, far or spot on. I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting

Azure Sandora #27 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8097728 You're actually spot on. Applejack will be the red ranger, and Twilight will be the blue ranger. Actually, if you pay attention to the descriptions of what they're all wearing, you'll see that I'm not trying to hide anything concerning who's what color.

ponylover2 #28 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8097792 I'm sorry about that I'll try to pay attention next time my friend but the reason y I guessed is because in the movie spoilers for those who didn't see the movie Jason standing up to a bully for Billy in the movie

Azure Sandora #29 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8097884 Well... ya ain't wrong. *laughs*

ponylover2 #30 · Apr 15th, 2017 · · · Chapter 1 ·

8098000 guess not *laughing* let me know when the next chapter is uploaded I'll be waiting my friend

VampDash

VampDash #31 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Wow. I hate Rarity's mom and feel some anger against her dad.

Also the chapter is good.

Azure Sandora #32 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

8099734 This is how some parents are sadly when dealing with kids like Rarity. She's not innocent in this however. She does sleep around, and just does what she wants.

However, her parents are DEFINITELY a part of the main issue here.

VampDash

VampDash #33 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

8099767 Hope to some goodness in your heart that her parents after a while.

ponylover2 #34 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

8099734 I agree with u vamp I can't wait for the next upload for this story that Sapphire is working on

ShadowLDrago #35 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Most of the first arc is finished, and I've been working on it nonstop, so this story will update pretty frequently up till the end of the first arc (in other words, where the movie technically ended).

Going beyond that, sweet! Though, please, don't overwork yourself.

She'd come home and then sneak out like always, when she was supposed to be asleep.

I'm conflicted. Normally, I'm all for genre savviness, both heroic and villainous, but, considering what it's being used FOR...

Now they didn't want anything to do with her, and instead did everything in their power to push her reputation as a slut.

Considering your behavior, choice of clothing and reputation, you've not exactly done much to dissuade them.

“It's not about you getting pregnant,” her mother said, “Your behavior and attitude when it comes to sex, it makes you-”
“A slut, right?” Rarity asked looking at her mother slightly, “That's all I am, after all.”

For now. You'll become a badass later. But what fills me with a burning curiosity is the why? What motivated you to be a slut in the first place? Why do you keep acting like one? It's clear that you don't entirely enjoy it, so I'm going to keep paying attention to this, not only for giant robots, explosions and general awesomeness, but for your motivations, you, my dear Rarity, are truly, well, a rarity, if you'll excuse the pun. From a classy business owner of a clothes shop in canon, to a Russian lesbian transfer student in Code Lyoko EG and briefly a traitor against your will, and here, apparently a slut. And you're presumably also different in Chrono. Most characters are roughly close to their canon selves, but you, you're the one who changes the most, and that fascinates me.

It was a shame, because Rarity and her mother used to be really close. After “the party” though, she just became another person who treated her like a cheap whore.
Not like she was anything beyond that though.

Ah! More information, wonderful! A party was all it took for everything to change. Not even a full 24 hours. Hm, if I were to guess, I'd say you got drunk and lost your virginity at said party, and regretted it, because your then boyfriend broke up with you and well, rumors spread and distort over time. And eventually, you took them to heart and did become "Easy Rare".

“Calling her a slut isn't going to help. All that's going to do is make things worse.”

Perhaps. But, complimenting her is probably not going to help either. Neither of you are helping. Right now, I think Rarity's hurting inside, and I think what she needs right now, is someone whom she can confide in, to tell the full truth of what happened at said party, no lies or rumors involved, and someone whom she can just talk to and know won't say a thing.

“It was nice,” Sweetie Belle said, “A new student came today. Her name is Apple Bloom. Scootaloo and I are going to make her a part of our group.”

I bet you are.

“Was her name “Applejack”?” Sweetie Belle asked, “Apple Bloom said she has a big sister named Applejack.”

Correct.

Rarity looked to the side pained, “I'd… like that… but…”

And it seems that there's more to Rarity than meets the eye, yet again.

Once alone, Rarity hugged herself and broke down. Even if she were to try and become Applejack's friend, it wouldn't last long. Once she realized how much of a slut Rarity was, she'd run far away from her.

Self esteem issues. Also, trust me she won't. Sapphire's far too much of a Rarijack shipper to let that happen.

“Why in tarnation am I even considerin’ this?!”

Plot is a wonderful thing.

every game system ever from the third generation up, and a shelf full of games organized alphabetically and by generation and genre.

Her parents are most likely quite rich then. And she's quite an avid gamer.

“The mind is essentially an organic computer capable of infinite information and processing. My mind just happens to be better at that than most.”

Infinite feels like a bit of an exaggeration. If that were true, we wouldn't forget things.

“What were you saying?” Twilight asked. Applejack didn't move for the longest time, but then hugged Twilight tightly, “Oh! Okay, we're… hugging now…?”

Yup. Hugs can be awkward. Especially when impromptu by someone whom you don't really know.

“You are wonderful!” Applejack said, “I could jus' kiss ya!”

You could. But, last I checked, Rarijack seems to be Sapphire's shtick more than Twijack. Which I don't think I've ever read. Hm. Wonder if there are any good Twijack fics out there?

“S-sure…” Twilight said lightly patting Applejack on the back.

Uncomfortable with physical contact. I getcha.

She knew that it was late, but she needed to be someplace quiet. Somewhere away from all of the energy of her house. Both of her parents were hippies, as was her little brother, so they didn't really take any of her issues seriously.
But out in nature, she felt truly at home.

Fluttershy?

She sent a silent prayer to the gods of the forest, thanking them for allowing her to come here and be at peace. She felt her heart beginning to calm down a bit, and was about to get up and begin her nightly ritual

Huh, believes in forest gods. Interesting.

The girl yelped in shock and scampered behind a tree, looking out at the lake. She saw a girl with long purple and white hair step out of the water, wearing nothing but her black bra and panties. She walked over to where her clothes were apparently and picked up a towel to dry off.

Rarity.

She took a deep breath and decided to follow the initial intruder. She needed to see who else was coming to invade her sanctuary, and if possible, drive them out.

Sanctuary, eh? I could very well make an unfitting joke. In fact, I will.

(Skip to 1: 37) Don't give me that look.

“But the sign says…”

Twilight is perfectly literate and comprehend what that sign means. She just doesn't care.

“Now, why are they going to the Everfree Forest?” Pinkie Pie asked. She giggled to herself and then rode in after them.

You're giggly. Granted, that's not that different than your usual self.

“I've been planning this for a long while,” Twilight said still walking, “My Mommy and I were going to come here together, but she died before we could. Daddy's too skittish to want to do this, but I wanted to see what Mommy loved about this place.”

I see. You're oddly confident about that.

She ran next to Twilight and walked next to her. Twilight didn't respond, but if Applejack didn't know better, it looked like she smiled.

You'd be surprised how far Loyalty can take you.

“Now, try not to take this the wrong way, okay? Cause I ain't tryin to offend ya or anything. It's jus'… somethin’ that's been buggin’ me 'bout ya.”
“I'm very hard to offend,” Twilight said, “You can ask me your personal question.”

Good to know.

Applejack played it in her head a bit before asking, “What's… your deal exactly? I mean, ya seem sorta… um…”
“Strange?” Twilight asked.
“I… didn't want to use that word…” Applejack said taking a deep breath.

But yes.

“A bit,” Twilight said, “It's not severe or anything. I just have problems with social interactions and understanding humor. At best, I'd be considered highly functioning autistic.”
“Ah, I see. Well, that explains a lot,” Applejack said.

It does, doesn't it.

“Most students tend to get freaked out and run away from me when I say that.”

Why? It's not a disease, nor is it contagious or even harmful. And as she said, apart from her OCD, the only other way it affects her is her being sometimes blind to certain social cues as well as humor and sarcasm.

“Really? That's a shame. Ya seem real cool to me. Super smart, nice, reasonable, an' you’re a gamer. That's sounds like an awesome person to me. Bein’ autistic or whatever doesn't take that away.”

I've said it before, I'll say it again. BEST! FUCKING! PONY! Or, human, in this case.

Applejack was wide eyed, but suddenly felt really touched. Now that she knew why Twilight seemed so off, she saw a lot of her mannerisms in a different light. Something told her that her asking that outright like that was huge.

As someone with autism, believe me when I say it is.

“Honestly, I figured we already were friends.” Applejack said with a smile.

I REALLY like you.

“Well this is a surprise,” Rarity said covering her eyes from the light, “The new kid making friends with the one girl that's always alone. You're just making waves everywhere, aren't you?”

She has main protagonist syndrome. She does that.

“Four!” a high voice said from behind them. Everyone looked and saw Pinkie Pie standing next to a tree waving to them, “Hi hi!”

Hello, you hyperactive delight of a nutball.

“What I do is no one's business but my own.” Rarity said turning her nose to the air.

WHO you do, is another matter.

“Because of this!” Pinkie Pie said motioning around them, “You've made friends with both Twilight and Easy Rare! You're totally the hero I've been looking for!”

“But that's the thing, this is how it always start,” Pinkie Pie said holding Applejack's shoulders, “The mysterious transfer student comes in and shakes things up, makes friends with the school's social outcasts, and then gains some super awesome power or just ends up saving the entire school!”

... I got nothing, that's, actually spot on.

“You… watch too many cartoons,” Rarity said pointedly.

... Yeah, so?

“Well… I suppose I am curious,” Rarity said with a shrug, “Fine, on one condition. Stop calling me Easy Rare.”
“You got it, Rarity. Let's go!”

Easy enough.

Rarity sighed and ran after the group, albeit not as fast as she was still wearing high heels.

Which is your own fault.

“Please don't hurt me…!” the girl begged, her voice soft and melodious, “I won't tell anyone… I promise…!”

Right, definitely Season 1 Episode 1 Fluttershy.

What shocked Applejack was her bust though. While Rarity was pretty top heavy, this girl looked to be at least a high D-cup.

She is usually depicted as the bustiest of the Mane 6, yes.

“Yep. I'm sure of it. She's super introverted, and runs away from most people,” Pinkie Pie said, completely oblivious to how much Fluttershy was trembling.

Pinkie, you may wanna calm down a bit.

“Please… Please go away…” Fluttershy sobbed, shaking her head and hugging herself even tighter.

... Some form of anxiety, maybe?

Twilight straightened her glasses.

Ooh! Do they do the cool thing where they shine briefly?

“We… shouldn't leave them…” Fluttershy said softly.

Correct.

Azure Sandora #36 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

8099823 I did not know you were autistic. I sort of figured with some of the comments you made while prereading, but I wasn't sure.

That's kinda awesome actually. I hope I continue to showcase Twilight in a positive light for you then, and thank you for being such an awesome friend.

ShadowLDrago #37 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Aspergers, more specifically, but yes. It's kinda why I can more or less get into the head of characters like Billy or this Twilight. I can understand how they think. And trust me, you've been doing a wonderful job.

MDCommissioner #38 · Apr 16th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

She knew that it was late, but she needed to be someplace quiet. Somewhere away from all of the energy of her house. Both of her parents were hippies, as was her little brother, so they didn't really take any of her issues seriously.
But out in nature, she felt truly at home.
She waved her impossibly long and full pink hair to the side

DANG IT!!! ....I wanted to see her ride on what a rebooted Dragonzord would be. Also....

What shocked Applejack was her bust though. While Rarity was pretty top heavy, this girl looked to be at least a high D-cup.

.....is this something to make Fluttershy even more similar to Hinata? A sizable bust?

Azure Sandora #39 · Apr 16th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 2 ·

8100030 I'll PM you later about that.

ponylover2 #40 · Apr 17th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

That is an awesome chapter my friend I'll be waiting for the next upload for this story keep me posted

ShadowLDrago #41 · Apr 17th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

“There are rumors of monsters attacking people when they enter.” Pinkie Pie said brightly.

You, you're kidding, right?

“You're crazy,” Applejack said to herself, “Everyone in this town is absolutely crazy.”

You, do realize that includes you, right?

“I talk to the forest,” Fluttershy said hugging herself, “It's warned me to be wary of this place.”

I, can't tell how serious she is.

“Peer pressure is a real bitch, isn't it?” Rarity said

Yup. One of the reasons I decided to stop caring what my classmates thought of me halfway through my first year of high school.

“Are these… coins?” Applejack asked, picking the red one up and looking it over, “They don't look natural.”

They do look pretty weird.

“There's five of them,” Twilight said, taking the blue one and looking at it in her light, noticing the odd markings shining through them, “They almost look either alien, or ancient.”
“Might be both, ya know?” Applejack asked.

Valid point.

“Why do I get the black one?” Rarity asked.
“I'm picking them based on what we're wearing,” Pinkie Pie said, “You wear black, Fluttershy wears yellow, and pink is my favorite color.”

Fair enough.

“Exactly, but unlike you, I have permission from the gods of the forest to be here.” Fluttershy fussed.

Uh, you DO realize how that sounds, right?

“No… please no…” Fluttershy whimpered trembling, before she started saying something very odd. It sounded like a mantra, but it was in another language or something.

Huh, so she actually believes in her whole gods of the forest shpiel. OK then.

“Praying to the goddess Isis!” Fluttershy fussed, “She's my patron god, and she always protects me!”

Uh, Isis was the Egyptian goddess of health, marriage and wisdom. I, fail to see the connection there, Flutters.

They were large, and looked like golems.

The putties. Except they actually have a budget. And aren't so obviously just a bunch of guys in suits.

It was a gray and white wolf, it had piercing green eyes, and it looked like it was growling at the creatures.

What is that?

“Applejack! Applejack!” Twilight cried, “This is a bad time to turn into a hero!”

She's not wrong.

“My book doesn't say anything about them!” Twilight said consulting her book, “Whatever they are, they're not natural to the forest!”
“We shouldn't have taken those crystals!” Fluttershy fussed, realizing that she still had the yellow one in her skirt pocket, “We've angered the guardians of the forest! We probably were all cursed!”

Did you not just hear what she said? And did those things LOOK like forest guardians? I'd expect forest guardians to be made out of wood more than stone.

“Applejack, you are not serious!” Rarity fussed, “This isn't an action movie!”

She has a point.

“We shouldn't have even been there in the first place!” Fluttershy cried, “I'm going to die either by train, or monster!”

Look at it this way, death by train will probably be quick enough that you won't feel it. Death by monster...

Applejack took a deep breath, and rode as fast as she could toward the tracks. This was going to be close, but at this speed, they were going to just make-
CRASH!!!!

Seems ya miscalculated.

She was noticeably curvier than normal, and she had a little more muscle in her arms. Not super buff to the point of being unattractive, but she could definitely see a difference. Also, her hair looked a little longer and thicker too.

Sounds pretty good to me.

“Did I become an amazon or somethin’ in my sleep…?” Applejack asked as she flexed her new feminine muscles in the mirror.

No, last I checked, the Amazons were stupidly tall as well, like 2 meters plus, I think sometimes had one of their breasts cut off to make it easier to wield a bow, and were purely warriors. I'm taking this too literally, I know.

She went to turn the water on so she could wash her face, but somehow used too much strength and pulled the faucet off the sink.

Well, that's certainly some real good super strength right there.

She didn't need her glasses anymore.

Huh. Neat.

“Well yeah, we have the same History class, right?” Flash asked, “I… never noticed how cute you were up close though. I don't know, did you do something different with your hair?”

Not, quite.

Whatever happened to her, she liked it.

You'd be surprised how much a sincere compliment from someone who's opinion matters to you can boost confidence.

Also, my clothes are feeling a little sluttier than usual,” she continued, trying to pull her mini skirt down.

*shrug* Your fault for still wearing them.

“Not yet. I wanted to wait for you first,” Rarity said, “Applejack, I'm a little scared. What happened to us last night?”

You went into a castle, found 5 weird artifacts that not only made you look like supermodels but gave you more muscle as well as inhuman strength and toughness. You then got slammed into by a train while in a truck. You're lucky, if you'd taken the train head on, I don't think you'd have been quite as lucky.

The two of them ran into the school, completely aware of the looks they were getting. Either from being together, from their new gorgeous looks, or probably both.

Methinks both.

“Bitch!” Sunset shouted.

Now now, now is not the time for self deprication.

Twilight caught Sunset's hand, dropped her books, and then flipped Sunset onto the floor.

I'd tell you not to flip out, but, you just flipped your lid. And Sunset. I can't help but feel that this scene worked better in the movie though. Let Twilight show off her toughness. But this works too.

“You... really are a freak of nature!” Sunset cried, scampering to her feet, “I won't forget this, bitch!”

I'm genuinely surprised you can speak clearly after that, that should have severely winded you. Also, try to expand your vocabulary when it comes to insults, it's just variants of freak and bitch.

She'd never been popular before, so she planned on milking this for all it was worth before she woke up from this dream.

Smart. Also, you'd know if this was a dream, nothing would be nearly as clear, and things would make a LOT less sense and be significantly less linear.

“I flipped Sunset onto the floor today.

Trust me, that's less impressive than it sounds. ANYONE who knows how to flip someone can do it, it's just a matter of using their own strength and weight against them. Hardly a feat worthy of super strength. Now fi she'd punched you square in the face and you didn't even flinch, that's actually be quite impressive. Or flicked her and sent her flying.

The three of them looked at the gems and saw them glowing brightly, energy streaming out of them. All of a sudden, the toilets behind them all exploded.

OK then. Those things can be dangerous.

Still, who knew how much it would have cost to fix that...?

Who cares? You're not paying for it.

Bahamut Omega #42 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Love Sexy, Strong, Confident Twilight.

MDCommissioner #43 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Applejack took a deep breath, and rode as fast as she could toward the tracks. This was going to be close, but at this speed, they were going to just make-
CRASH!!!!

Nnnope. Also.....I'm willing to wait and see more of her.....but I'm kind of leaning on the "dislike" side of the fence for Flutters's character in this. I trust you know what you're doing.....but felt like sharing this slight concern.

Azure Sandora #44 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

8103270 She's supposed to be initially disliked this time around.

MDCommissioner #45 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

8103857 But I shouldn't be disliking Fluttershy, dang it! ....like I said, I trust you know what you're doing and when we see her develop....as a character.... >//////< .....I'll start liking her again.

MDCommissioner #46 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

8103857 ....that whole "as a character" thing.....that's cause I'm afraid the coin developed her in other ways. .//////.

Azure Sandora #47 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

8103885 Whaaaaat? I don't know what you're talking about.

MDCommissioner #48 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

That the coin made Flutters like the others; not only stronger but more.....mature looking. .///.

Blank Scroll #49 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Applejack looked at Rarity, giving her a confused and incredulous look before continuing, “Second of all, what's this 'bout me bein a hero? I'm jus' the new kid at school who keeps attractin’ freaks,” she turned to Twilight, “No offense.”
“None taken,” Twilight said.

I see what you did there XD

Azure Sandora #50 · Apr 18th, 2017 · · · Chapter 3 ·

8104867 What? It's not like I needed an excuse to make the characters look older because their actors TOTALLY don't look like they're in high school or anything. *laughs awkwardly*

No, but seriously, I'm just playing with ya. I got it the first time. You'll see how badly she got it in the next chapter.

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